Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and use a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Use linking words (for example, "because" or "and") to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. I went there regularly with my parents because I could ride my bike and play games with my friends, and those visits were my favorite part of the weekend.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence and give specific, grammatically correct details. Avoid hesitations and repetition; use linking words such as "because" and "so" properly. Mention one concrete activity you and your daughter do together.

Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks now. I take my daughter there every week because she loves playing football, and we often practice kicking the ball together which is good exercise for both of us.

Gợi ý: Provide a focused topic sentence and support it with specific reasons and examples. Correct small grammar errors (e.g. 'open spaces' -> 'open spaces' or 'open space') and avoid trailing off. Use linking phrases like 'for example' or 'as a result' to make points coherent.

Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. More parks would benefit the community because they provide open space for families to relax and children to play; for example, a neighborhood park could host picnics, light exercise classes, and weekend community events.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence and add a specific reason and brief detail about what you want to do there. Use correct names and natural phrasing (e.g. 'a famous park in New York' or the park's name).

Ví dụ: Yes, I would love to visit a famous park in New York, such as Central Park. If I can travel abroad, I will take my family there to walk the paths, rent a boat on the lake, and see the gardens I've seen in movies.

× I think I remember I like to visit the park regularly together with my parents.

✓ I think I remember liking to visit the park regularly with my parents.

The original mixes present simple 'I like' with a past memory 'I remember'. Use the gerund 'liking' after 'remember' to indicate recalling a habitual past action. Also remove redundant 'together' and use 'with' for natural phrasing.

× I like to go there because I can play, I can roll my bike and sometimes I play with my friends.

✓ I liked going there because I could play, ride my bike, and sometimes play with my friends.

The sentence refers to childhood, so past tense should be used. Use 'liked' and past modal 'could'. 'Roll my bike' is unnatural; use 'ride my bike'. Maintain parallel verb forms in the list.

× I like to I also remember that we.

✓ I also remember that we used to go together.

The original is fragmented and ungrammatical. Complete the clause by supplying a verb and object: 'used to go together' fits a past habitual action. Keep 'also remember' followed by a full clause.

× Yes, right now as a parent, I like to bring my daughter to the parks regularly.

✓ Yes, now as a parent, I like to bring my daughter to the park regularly.

Use present simple 'like to bring' for a current habit. Use singular 'the park' or 'parks' consistently; 'the parks' is odd here—'the park' or 'parks' without 'the' is better. I chose 'the park' for natural phrasing.

× We like to play there while we used to do during my younger days.

✓ We like to play there like we used to during my younger days.

The original mixes present 'like to play' with 'used to' incorrectly and includes extraneous 'do'. Use 'like ... like we used to' to compare current habit with past habit. Keep tense consistency and remove redundant words.

× My daughter will loves to visit the park because she can play football and because of that I I also.

✓ My daughter loves to visit the park because she can play football, and because of that I do too.

Remove incorrect 'will' before 'loves'; for a habitual preference use simple present 'loves'. 'Will loves' is ungrammatical (third person singular needs simple 'loves' or 'will love'). Finish the sentence: use 'I do too' to indicate the speaker also likes to visit. Remove duplicate 'I'.

× I think having an open spaces, a park or a play area can definitely help the psychology of the community.

✓ I think having open spaces, a park, or a play area can definitely help the community's psychology.

'an open spaces' mixes singular article with plural noun. Use 'open spaces' (no article) or 'an open space'. Also rephrase 'the psychology of the community' to the possessive 'the community's psychology' for natural English.

× People or families can go there and bring their child to play, have fun and maybe relax, do some picnics, enjoy the fresh air.

✓ People or families can go there and bring their children to play, have fun, maybe relax, have picnics, and enjoy the fresh air.

Use plural 'children' to agree with plural subjects 'people or families'. Use parallel verbs 'have picnics' instead of 'do some picnics'. Maintain parallel list structure with commas and 'and'.

× I think if the.

✓ I think if there were more parks, people would use them more.

The original is an unfinished fragment. Provide a complete conditional sentence that fits the context: 'if there were more parks, people would use them more.' This uses a hypothetical present conditional structure appropriate to the idea.

× Yes, I dream to visit New York Famous Park someday.

✓ Yes, I dream of visiting a famous park in New York someday.

Use the correct verb pattern 'dream of doing' not 'dream to do'. 'New York Famous Park' is awkward; reorder to 'a famous park in New York' or name a specific park. Use article 'a' before 'famous park'.

× If I have the means to go abroad, I will definitely go there and bring my family.

✓ If I have the means to go abroad, I will definitely go there and bring my family.

Sentence is grammatically correct. It uses a first conditional appropriately: present simple 'have' in the if-clause and 'will' in the result clause. No correction needed.

× I've seen a lot of movies about that type of park and I am really interested.

✓ I've seen a lot of movies about that type of park, and I am really interested.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable; only a comma is added for clarity before 'and'. Present perfect 'I've seen' correctly indicates past experiences relevant now, and 'I am really interested' is fine.