Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make the answer grammatically correct, more concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Avoid filler words (uh, um) and repetition.

Ví dụ: Yes. I loved going to parks as a child. I often rode my bike and ran around with my cousins, and we would spend whole afternoons playing games. Those visits are some of my fondest childhood memories.

Gợi ý: Provide a direct topic sentence, correct grammar (tense, subject-verb agreement) and a clearer explanation of the change. Use linking words like 'now' or 'because' correctly and avoid repetition.

Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks, but for different reasons now. Because I am older, I usually go to run or exercise rather than to play, and I find outdoor running very relaxing and healthy.

Gợi ý: Answer clearly and support with specific, well-formed reasons. Fix grammar and word choice ('play a crucial role', 'produce fresh air' is inaccurate—trees contribute to cleaner air). Avoid fillers and finish the sentence coherently.

Ví dụ: Yes, absolutely. I think parks play a crucial role in cities because they provide green space, improve air quality by supporting trees and plants, and give people places to relax and exercise.

Gợi ý: State the park clearly, correct word choice and tense, and add a specific reason why you want to visit. Keep it concise and natural, and avoid filler words.

Ví dụ: Yes. I'd love to visit Highgate Park in London because I've never been to London and I've heard it's a beautiful green space with historic gardens. I hope to go there someday to explore and relax.

× Yes, when I was a child, I often go to the parks for sometimes, uh, biking or just running around there with my cousins.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I often went to the parks sometimes to go biking or just to run around with my cousins.

The sentence mixes past context ('when I was a child') with present-tense 'go'. Use past tense 'went' to match the time frame. Also adjust adverb placement ('sometimes') and infinitive phrases ('to go biking', 'to run around') for natural English. Suggestion: Keep verb tense consistent with the time reference and use infinitives for activities.

× Yeah, It's very fun though.

✓ Yes, it was very fun, though.

'It's' (it is) conflicts with the past context; use past 'it was'. Also prefer 'yes' for formality. Suggestion: Match verb tense to the narrative time and avoid contractions in formal speech.

× Uh, it's a memorable, very memorable.

✓ Uh, it was very memorable.

Again the present 'it's' clashes with past narration; use past 'it was'. Remove redundant words ('a memorable, very memorable') and use a single clear adjective. Suggestion: Keep phrasing concise and consistent with past tense.

× Guess absolutely but in another reasons now because when now I am grow up and I like to go to park for running instead of run around like plaything with friends I I enjoyed running.

✓ I guess absolutely, but for different reasons now: because I am grown up and I like to go to the park to run instead of running around and playing with friends; I enjoy running.

Multiple tense and form errors: 'when now I am grow up' should be 'I am grown up' or 'now that I have grown up'; 'go to park for running' should be 'go to the park to run' (use infinitive and include article); 'instead of run around like plaything' should be 'instead of running around and playing with friends'; 'I I enjoyed running' mixes past 'enjoyed' with present context—use present 'I enjoy running'. Suggestion: Use correct participles and infinitives, include articles, and keep tense consistent with meaning.

× Yes, absolutely. I think parks play and crucial role in our societies in terms of umm produce, umm, the fresh air, uh, such as oxygen and reduce carbon dioxide.

✓ Yes, absolutely. I think parks play a crucial role in our society by producing fresh air, such as oxygen, and by reducing carbon dioxide.

Errors: missing article 'a' before 'crucial role'; 'play and crucial role' is incorrect word order; 'our societies' should be 'our society' for general statement; 'produce, umm, the fresh air' should be 'producing fresh air' or 'by producing fresh air'; 'reduce carbon dioxide' needs 'by' or 'and by reducing' for parallel structure. Suggestion: Use correct articles, maintain parallel structure, and prefer gerund or 'by' + verb for functions.

× So I think it's very good if it has.

✓ So I think it would be very good if there were more parks.

'It has' is vague and ungrammatical here. Use conditional 'would be' and 'if there were more parks' with 'there' construction to express desire for more parks. Suggestion: Use clear subject and conditional structure for hypothetical suggestions.

× I have one part that come up in my mind, uh, that is a high park in London because I have never been to London before and I heard about this park for a long time.

✓ I have one park that comes to mind: the High Park in London, because I have never been to London and I have heard about this park for a long time.

Problems: 'part' should be 'park'; 'that come up in my mind' should be 'that comes to mind' (subject-verb agreement and idiomatic expression); 'a high park' likely refers to a named park 'High Park' (capitalize and use 'the' if specific); 'I have never been to London before' better as 'I have never been to London'; 'I heard about this park for a long time' should be present perfect 'I have heard about this park for a long time.' Suggestion: Use correct nouns, subject-verb agreement, proper names capitalization, and present perfect for experiences continuing to present.

× So I hope one day in the future I could be there.

✓ So I hope that one day in the future I can be there.

Use 'can' or 'will' to express future possibility; 'could' suggests conditional or less certain past reference. Better: 'I hope that one day I can be there' or 'I hope that one day I will be able to go there.' Suggestion: Use appropriate modal for future hopes and consider 'be able to' for ability.