Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make the answer more natural and grammatically correct, keep it concise (max 5 sentences), and add specific details. Correct verb forms and small errors, and combine short ideas with linking words for flow.

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved going to the park as a child. I often went with my dad and little sister, where we cycled around the paths and played on the swings and slides. After playing, we usually ate at a nearby restaurant, which had my favorite dishes. Those visits were a highlight of my weekends because they were fun and relaxing.

Gợi ý: Make the sentence structure simpler and avoid redundancy (e.g., 'nowadays' and 'but however' together). Use linking words correctly and give a specific frequency or example to support your statement.

Ví dụ: I don't go to parks as often as I did when I was a child because I have a very busy study schedule, even on weekends. However, I still visit a nearby park about once or twice a month when I have free time to relax and clear my mind.

Gợi ý: Be more specific and concise. Use correct comparative language (e.g., 'like other countries') and explain clearly what improvements you want and why. Avoid repeating the same phrase.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to see more parks and green spaces in my city, similar to those in Japan or Australia. More gardens and tree-lined areas would improve air quality and provide pleasant places for people to relax and exercise.

Gợi ý: Reduce hesitation words (like 'umm'), correct grammar (future tense and gerund usage), and be specific about which parks or features attract you. Combine ideas into a clear, natural answer within five sentences.

Ví dụ: Absolutely. In the next ten years I hope to visit parks in Japan, especially during cherry blossom season. I would love to see the sakura trees in full bloom and take many photos in a famous park such as Ueno Park in Tokyo.

× We went there to cycling, playing at the playground.

✓ We went there to cycle and play at the playground.

The phrase 'to cycling, playing' mixes an infinitive with gerunds incorrectly. After 'to' indicating purpose, use the base form (infinitive) or use gerunds in a parallel structure without 'to'. Use 'to cycle and play' or 'for cycling and playing'. Also ensure parallelism: both verbs should be in the same form.

× After that we went to the restaurant to eat delicious foods.

✓ After that we went to a/the restaurant to eat delicious food.

'Delicious foods' is unnatural here; 'food' as an uncountable noun is preferred. Also choose the appropriate article 'a restaurant' or 'the restaurant' depending on context. Use singular uncountable 'food' after verbs like 'eat' for general reference.

× Nowadays I'm not quite going to the park like when I was a child because I have my very busy schedule that I have to study every single day, even weekends, but however I still go there when I'm free.

✓ Nowadays I don't go to the park as much as I did when I was a child because I have a very busy schedule and I have to study every single day, even on weekends; however, I still go there when I'm free.

Several issues: use simple present 'don't go' rather than 'I'm not quite going' for habitual actions. Use comparative phrase 'as much as I did'. 'Very busy schedule' requires the article 'a'. 'Even weekends' needs preposition 'on weekends'. 'But however' is redundant; use one connector such as 'however'. Improve clarity with proper punctuation.

× For me, I would love to see my country or my city starting to enhance like other country such as America, Japan or Australia.

✓ For me, I would love to see my country or my city improved like other countries such as America, Japan, or Australia.

Pronoun/word choice issues: 'starting to enhance' is awkward; use 'improved' or 'developed'. 'Other country' should be plural 'other countries' when listing multiple examples. Also insert commas in a list and choose consistent nouns.

× I would love to see a lot of green area and a lot more of garden in my city.

✓ I would love to see a lot more green areas and many more gardens in my city.

Mismatch in singular/plural forms: 'a lot of green area' is better as 'a lot more green areas' or 'more green space'. 'a lot more of garden' is incorrect; use plural 'gardens' or phrase 'more gardens'. Ensure quantifiers match countability.

× There are multiple parks that I want to go.

✓ There are multiple parks that I want to go to.

The verb phrase is missing the preposition 'to' at the end; 'go' requires 'to' when followed by a destination. Place 'to' after 'go' or restructure: 'parks I want to visit.'

× Maybe in the next 10 years I'll be able to go to Japan.

✓ Maybe in the next ten years I'll be able to go to Japan.

Numeric style: writing out small numbers in formal speech is preferred ('ten' instead of '10'). Grammatically the sentence is acceptable; this is a stylistic improvement to match speaking-test register.

× I will visit umm A sakura tree and taking a lot of picture there.

✓ I will visit a sakura tree and take a lot of pictures there.

Errors: capital 'A' should be lowercase 'a'. After 'will' use the base verb 'visit' then coordinate with base verb 'take' rather than 'taking'. 'Picture' should be plural 'pictures' to match 'a lot of.' Also remove filler 'umm' in corrected text or mark as hesitation if needed.