Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Сіз жауаптарыңызды нақтырақ әрі құрылымды етіп беруіңіз керек. Тақырыптық сұраққа тікелей жауап беріңіз (иә/жоқ + қысқаша себеп), одан кейін 1–2 нақты егжей-тегжей қосыңыз. Артық «like», «actually», қайталанатын сөздерден аулақ болыңыз. Сөйлемдерді 3–4 қысқа және анық сөйлемге бөліңіз. Мысалы, парктің сипаттамасы мен салыстыру жасаңыз.

Ví dụ: Yes, but parks were rare in my hometown. There was a small park near our house with a few young trees, so it didn’t feel very green. It wasn’t like the large, wooded parks I’ve seen in big cities, which made it less enjoyable for me.

Gợi ý: Жауабыңызда мағыналы және табиғи сөйлемдер қолданыңыз. «ASAP» сияқты қысқартуларды ауызша жауапта қолданбаңыз. Тақырыпты нақтылаңыз (иә/жоқ) және себептерді логикалық түрде көрсету үшін байланыс сөздерін қолданыңыз. Сонымен қатар, «having their time» сияқты түсініксіз тіркестерден сақтаныңыз.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I especially enjoy going to parks when I visit bigger cities for my studies because I like jogging there in the morning. Parks give me a peaceful place to exercise and relax before classes.

Gợi ý: Жауабыңызды нақты әрі құрылымды етіңіз: бір бастамашы сөйлем (иә/жоқ + себеп), содан кейін нақты артықшылықтарды тізімдеңіз. Қайталанатын сөздер мен «like» артық қолданудан аулақ болыңыз. Сандар мен нақты мысалдар қосса, сенімдірек естіледі.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would. More parks would give people pleasant places to walk and relax. For example, shaded paths, benches and playgrounds would encourage families to spend time outside and improve air quality.

Gợi ý: Сұраққа нақты жауап беріңіз: ерекше бір парк атауын білмесеңіз, жалпы жоспар немесе қалауыңызды айтыңыз. Қарама-қарсы идеяларды анық және логикалық түрде білдіріңіз (мысалы, жасанды парктер vs табиғи орындар). Қайталанатын және аралас сөздерді азайтыңыз.

Ví dụ: I’m not sure about a specific park I want to visit, but I prefer natural places like forests or lakes. Although parks are good for fresh air and exercise, I would rather spend time in more natural settings when possible.

× 'Actually park is not popular in our city and actually there is a park next to our house like near near our house, but it's very small and it has like little trees not not growing enough.'

✓ 'Actually, parks are not popular in our city, but there is a park next to our house; it is very small and has only small trees that are not growing well.'

'Article and noun number errors: The speaker used singular 'park' when referring to parks in general (should be plural). Missing articles and awkward phrasing: 'Actually park is not popular' should be 'parks are not popular' or 'the park is not popular' depending on meaning. Use 'a park' for one park and 'the park' for a specific one; here 'a park next to our house' is correct. Also 'little trees not not growing enough' is ungrammatical; use 'small trees that are not growing well.' Suggestion: decide if you mean parks in general (use plural) or a specific park (use 'a' or 'the') and simplify clauses.'

× 'It's it's not like a forest of in like in. Big cities, I guess.'

✓ 'It's not like the parks in big cities, I guess.'

'Subject-verb agreement and sentence structure: The original sentence is fragmented and repeats fillers. Use a clear subject and verb and correct article: 'the parks in big cities' refers to specific parks in big cities. Remove filler words and reorder to be grammatical.'

× 'ASAP, especially when I go to bigger city for my studying purposes.'

✓ 'Especially when I go to a bigger city for my studies.'

'Tense and word choice: 'ASAP' is inappropriate here; likely filler. Use present simple 'I go' for habitual action and 'for my studies' is the natural noun phrase. Add article 'a bigger city.' Suggestion: avoid slang abbreviations like ASAP in spoken answers unless appropriate.'

× 'I like visiting parks and jogging in the morning and having their time.'

✓ 'I like visiting parks, jogging in the morning, and spending time there.'

'Pronoun and preposition misuse: 'having their time' is incorrect; use 'spending time there' to indicate spending time in the park. Also add commas to separate activities.'

× 'Yes, I would like to because when whenever you go out, you want to walk somewhere and I it would be great if it was parks because it has a lot of trees and like I would say chairs to sit.'

✓ 'Yes, I would, because when you go out you want somewhere to walk, and it would be great if there were parks because they have many trees and places to sit.'

'Article and subject-verb agreement: Use 'parks' plural with 'were' (subjunctive) and 'they have' for plural. 'It would be great if it was parks' is ungrammatical; use 'if there were parks.' 'Chairs to sit' should be 'places to sit' or 'benches.' Suggestion: use correct verb forms for hypothetical situations and match plural nouns with plural verbs.'

× 'I don't know I I really not interested in parks name FA like it's it's the end human made.'

✓ 'I don't know. I'm really not interested in parks that are man-made.'

'Tense and auxiliary omission: The speaker omitted the auxiliary 'am' in 'I'm really not interested.' Also 'name FA' and 'it's the end human made' are unclear; likely meant 'man-made.' Use present simple continuous 'I'm not interested' to express current state. Suggestion: include the correct form of 'to be' and use 'man-made' for things created by humans.'

× 'Yes it's healthier for our health because it provides fresh air, but still I would like to like prefer more natural places.'

✓ 'Yes, it is healthier for our health because it provides fresh air, but I would prefer more natural places.'

'Redundancy and word choice: 'healthier for our health' is repetitive; simply 'better for our health' or 'healthier' suffices. Remove filler repetition 'like prefer' and use 'I would prefer.' Suggestion: avoid repeated filler words and redundant phrases.'