Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 答えは意味が通じますが、文法ミス（時制、主語・動詞の一致、前置詞）、語彙の誤用（"past"→"park"）や冗長さを直す必要があります。また、最初に直接的な主題文を置き、その後で具体的な詳細（誰と、何を、どのくらい）を繋ぎ語（for example, so, and then）で加えるとより自然です。発音や流暢さも改善すると高得点になります。

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. My grandmother often took my cousin and me to the park, where we played with other children. For example, we would play hide-and-seek from the afternoon until sunset, which was always great fun.

Gợi ý: 回答は意図が伝わりますが、多くの語彙ミス（"pass"→"park", "book singing"不明瞭）と文法ミスがあります。まず簡潔に主題文を言い、その後で理由や状況（例：天候のせいで頻度が下がった）をつなぎ語（however, because, but）で述べると良いです。語彙は具体的に（reading, bird singing, greeneryなど）置き換えてください。

Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because I like the greenery and the sound of birds. However, I don't visit them as often now because it has become much hotter recently.

Gợi ý: 意見は明確ですが、語彙や表現が不正確で冗長です（"past"→"parks", 文の終わりが不完全）。主題文で賛成を述べ、その理由を2つ程度に絞って具体例（環境保護、子どもの遊び場、自然学習）をつなぎ語（because, for example）で整理してください。

Ví dụ: Yes, I would. I think more parks would improve the city's environment and give children safe places to play. For example, parks can help reduce pollution and provide outdoor classrooms for kids to learn about nature.

Gợi ý: 回答は考えを示していますが、文法（複数形・冠詞）、語彙（"pass"→"parks"）の誤りが多く、言いたいことが繰り返されています。まず短く直接答え、その後に理由（cultural differences in park design）と具体例（どの国の公園を見たいか）を加えると良いです。

Ví dụ: I don't have a specific park in mind, but I would like to visit parks in other countries. I think park designs reflect local culture, so I'd be interested in seeing Japanese gardens and large urban parks in Europe.

× Yes I did when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I did when I was a child.

This sentence is fine grammatically; only a missing comma after 'Yes' is needed for natural written style. Keep past simple 'did' to match the time reference.

× My grandma always bring me and my cousin go to the past and play with other children and we play hide and seek maybe from the afternoon to the sunset.

✓ My grandma always brought my cousin and me to the park to play with other children, and we played hide-and-seek from the afternoon until sunset.

Errors: 'bring' should be past tense 'brought' because the sentence describes past habitual action (Past tense issue but also verb form for third person). 'me and my cousin' should be 'my cousin and me' for natural order and object pronoun. 'go to the past' seems to be a typo; 'park' fits context. 'we play' should be past 'we played'. Use 'hide-and-seek' as fixed expression. Use 'until' or 'to' for 'sunset'. Suggestion: Use past simple consistently for past events and correct word order and fixed expressions.

× Yes, I do like going to the pass and I enjoy the book singing and also all the environments with surrounded by greens.

✓ Yes, I do like going to the park, and I enjoy reading books, listening to birdsong, and being surrounded by greenery.

Errors: 'pass' is a misspelling of 'park'. 'enjoy the book singing' is ungrammatical; likely meant 'reading books' and 'birdsong' or 'listening to birds'. 'all the environments with surrounded by greens' is incorrect word order and word choice; use 'being surrounded by greenery'. Use present simple for current habits. Suggestion: Choose correct vocabulary (park, reading, birdsong, greenery) and correct verb phrases (enjoy reading, listening to).

× But nowadays it's kind of hot during the global warming so I'm not doing it a lot.

✓ But nowadays it's kind of hot because of global warming, so I don't do it very often.

Errors: 'during the global warming' should be 'because of global warming' to show cause. 'I'm not doing it a lot' is awkward; use present simple 'I don't do it very often' for habitual actions. Suggestion: Use correct causal preposition and present simple for habits.

× Yes, I do 'cause past this keep the environment and also they provide small places for children playing, enjoying and enjoying the natural and also learning from the natural.

✓ Yes, I do, because parks help keep the environment, and they provide small places for children to play, enjoy nature, and learn from it.

Errors: 'cause' should be 'because' in formal speech. 'past this keep the environment' seems intended as 'parks help keep the environment'; use plural 'parks' and verb 'help'. 'children playing' needs 'to play' after 'places for' or use gerund correctly. Repetition 'enjoying and enjoying the natural' is incorrect; use 'enjoy nature'. Suggestion: Use 'because', correct subject 'parks', and infinitive 'to play' or parallel verb forms.

× So I do like to see more in my.

✓ So I would like to see more of them in my city.

Errors: 'I do like to see more in my.' is incomplete and ungrammatical. Missing object 'them' (parks) and noun 'city'. Use conditional/polite 'would like' for wishes. Suggestion: Complete the sentence with 'of them' and specify 'in my city'.

× I don't have a target parks I want to go to, but I do want to see the pass from different countries 'cause I do think different culture also shows how they plan the past, how they own the parks.

✓ I don't have a particular park I want to go to, but I do want to see parks in different countries because I think different cultures show how they design and manage parks.

Errors: 'a target parks' mixes singular/plural; use 'a particular park' or 'target parks' consistently. 'the pass' should be 'parks'. 'different culture' needs plural 'cultures'. 'how they plan the past, how they own the parks' contains wrong words 'past' for 'parks' and unclear verbs; use 'design and manage' or 'plan and maintain'. Suggestion: Keep number agreement, use correct nouns (park/parks), and choose verbs that convey planning and ownership/management.

× So yeah.

✓ So yeah.

This interjection is acceptable as a brief closing; no grammatical correction needed.