Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Give a clear, correctly timed response (use past tense) and be more concise. Start with a direct topic sentence in past tense, then add one specific reason or brief example. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas and avoid repetition (e.g., don't repeat 'wants').

Ví dụ: No, I didn't like going to parks when I was a child because I preferred staying at home and playing quietly. For example, I enjoyed reading books in my room rather than joining outdoor games, so I had little interest in visiting parks.

Gợi ý: Make the response more fluent and avoid repetition. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then give a specific detail about what you enjoy and why, using a linking word like 'because' or 'because of'. Aim for natural collocations (e.g., 'go to parks' or 'visit parks') and limit to two or three short sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy going to parks now because they help me relax. For example, walking among trees and listening to birds makes me feel calm and refreshed.

Gợi ý: Be concise and avoid repeating the same idea. State your opinion clearly, then give one specific reason and, if possible, a brief suggestion or consequence. Use linking words like 'because' and avoid repeating 'we don't really have much'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like more parks in my city because it currently prioritises shopping areas over green spaces. If we had more parks, residents would have better places to relax and exercise.

Gợi ý: Use a more formal register ('want to' instead of 'wanna') and remove repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give a specific reason why that park appeals to you and what you expect to do there. Keep it to two sentences and use linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I want to visit the park next to the library because I like both places. I imagine studying at the library and then walking in the nearby park to relax.

× I don't like going to park when I was a child since I don't really have that much experience and I'm more of a child that wants to be isolated and wants to stay home.

✓ I didn't like going to parks when I was a child because I didn't have much experience, and I preferred to be alone and stay at home.

Problems: tense inconsistency and article/plural errors. The speaker refers to past time 'when I was a child' so verbs should be in the past tense (didn't like, didn't have). 'Going to park' should be 'going to parks' or 'the park'; plural 'parks' is natural here. The phrase 'more of a child that wants to be isolated' is awkward; use 'preferred to be alone' or 'was more introverted'. Suggestion: match past tense throughout and use natural noun forms and phrasing. (Grammar problem type ID:26)

× Yes, I do like going to park to parks now.

✓ Yes, I do like going to parks now.

Redundant and incorrect phrase 'going to park to parks'. Use plural 'parks' without article to refer generally. Remove the extra words. Also maintain present tense 'do like' since talking about now. (Grammar problem type ID:22)

× It makes me feel, it makes me feel really calm and I'm really happy to see the nature around me.

✓ They make me feel really calm, and I'm very happy to see the nature around me.

Subject-verb agreement and repetition: 'It' is incorrect because 'parks' is plural, so use 'They make'. Remove repeated phrase 'it makes me feel' and use 'very' instead of repeated 'really' for variety. 'See the nature' is acceptable but 'see nature around me' is more natural. Ensure subject and verb agree. (Grammar problem type ID:26)

× I would love to see more parks in our city since our city focuses more on shops right now and we don't really have much.

✓ I would love to see more parks in our city because our city focuses more on shops right now and we don't have many parks.

Awkward phrasing and vague 'we don't really have much'. Clarify what is lacking: 'we don't have many parks'. Use 'because' for clearer cause. Maintain conditional/polite tone 'would love'. (Grammar problem type ID:26)

× We don't really have much space for it, so I really hope we have.

✓ We don't really have much space for them, so I really hope we can build some.

Pronoun reference error: 'it' is unclear; refer to 'parks' with 'them' or rephrase. Also the clause 'I really hope we have' is incomplete—have what? Use 'can build some' or 'can have more parks'. This fixes pronoun clarity and completes the thought. (Grammar problem type ID:12)

× I wanna visit the park that's near that's near a library since they are both something that I really like and I I'm looking forward to experiencing it.

✓ I want to visit the park that's near a library because I really like both, and I'm looking forward to experiencing it.

Informal 'wanna' should be 'want to' in formal responses. Redundant phrase 'that's near that's near' must be reduced to 'that's near a library'. Pronoun 'they are both something that I really like' is awkward; use 'I really like both'. Remove duplicate 'I' and ensure pronoun 'it' refers to the experience of visiting the park. Modal usage 'want to' is appropriate. (Grammar problem type ID:4)