Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you like going to parks as a child?

Thí sinh

Did you like going to the parks as a child?

Giám khảo

Do you still like going to parks now?

Thí sinh

Do you still like going to parks now?

Giám khảo

Would you like to see more parks in your city?

Thí sinh

Would you like to see more parks in your city?

Giám khảo

Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?

Thí sinh

Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?

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Part 1

Did you like going to parks as a child?

Điểm: 20.0

Gợi ý: 你的回答没有回答考官的问题,只是重复了问题。建议第一句直接给出肯定或否定的回答(主题句),然后用1–2句具体细节支持,比如描述你常去的公园、做的活动或和谁一起去。避免冗长,最多5句,并使用连接词如“because”或“so”使句子连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. I often went with my family to a small park near our house where I played on the swings and fed the birds. Because the park had many trees and a pond, it felt like a little adventure every weekend.

Do you still like going to parks now?

Điểm: 20.0

Gợi ý: 你的回答只是复述问题,未提供任何信息。建议先给出直接回答(是或否),然后用1–2句具体细节解释原因或举例,比如你去公园的频率、做的活动或感受,并用连接词(for example, because, so)使回答连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks. I usually visit a nearby park twice a week to jog and relax because the fresh air and green space help me de-stress after work.

Would you like to see more parks in your city?

Điểm: 20.0

Gợi ý: 你只是重复了问题,未表达观点。建议先明确表明是或否,然后给出具体理由或建议(例如哪里需要公园、谁会受益、可能的好处),并使用连接词如“because”或“so”来组织回答。控制在最多5句内。

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because many neighborhoods lack green spaces. More parks would give families and children places to play and improve residents' mental and physical health.

Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?

Điểm: 20.0

Gợi ý: 你的回答仍然只是复述问题,未给出信息。建议先直接回答(例如提到特定公园或类型),然后用1–2句说明原因或计划,比如为什么想去、什么时候或和谁一起,并用连接词使陈述连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit the botanical garden next spring because I heard it has beautiful flower displays. I plan to go with my friends when the weather is warmer so we can take photos and enjoy a picnic.

Ngữ pháp

Sentence structure errors

× Did you like going to the parks as a child?

✓ Yes, I did. I liked going to parks as a child.

这句回答本身不是完整陈述,学生直接重复了考官的问题,且使用了定冠词“the parks”不自然。根据问题(过去习惯)应使用过去时完整回答:肯定用“Yes, I did.”随后补充“I liked going to parks as a child.” 建议:回答要用完整句,保持时态一致,通常用一般过去时描述童年习惯;当泛指公园时不使用定冠词the。

Sentence structure errors

× Do you still like going to parks now?

✓ Yes, I do. I still like going to parks now.

学生原句只是重复考官问题,缺乏作为回答的完整性。此问题是现在时,正确回答应用一般现在时,如“Yes, I do.”并补充“I still like going to parks now.” 建议:用完整回答并保持一般现在时,避免直接重复问题。

Sentence structure errors

× Would you like to see more parks in your city?

✓ Yes, I would. I would like to see more parks in my city.

学生再次直接重复问题而非作答。该问题使用情态动词would,回答应保持相同结构:肯定回答用“Yes, I would.”并补充“I would like to see more parks in my city.” 建议:回答时保持情态动词形式一致并用完整句表述。

Sentence structure errors

× Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?

✓ Yes, there are. I want to visit some new parks in the future.

学生重复了问题而非提供回答。问题为现在时询问将来的打算,常用“Yes, there are”或直接“I want to visit...”来回答。建议:使用完整句,若回答肯定可用“There are”或“I want to...”并用一般现在时表述计划或意愿。

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