Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make your answer grammatically correct, concise and coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct tense and pronouns, and give 1–2 specific supporting details using linking words (for example, "because" or "and"). Avoid redundant fillers like "like" and unclear pronouns such as "he's."

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child because they had a pleasant atmosphere for family time. For example, I often rode my bike there and sometimes went jogging with my brother, which helped me stay active.

Gợi ý: Give a direct topic sentence and avoid repetition. Use linking words (e.g., "because", "so") appropriately and keep it under five sentences. Add a brief specific detail about what prevents you from going and possibly mention when you might go in the future.

Ví dụ: Not at the moment, because I am in grade 12 and have a heavy study schedule. However, I try to visit a park occasionally on weekends when I need a break from studying.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear opinion with correct vocabulary and reasons. Replace inaccurate phrases ("good to ecosystem") with correct expressions ("good for the environment"). Use one or two specific benefits with linking words and avoid overusing "like."

Ví dụ: Yes, I would, because parks are good for the environment. For instance, they increase green space, which improves air quality and can help mitigate local effects of global warming.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and correct grammar; name the park correctly (e.g., "Central Park") and use past tense for childhood dreams. Use linking words like "because" and give one concrete reason or activity you'd do there. Keep it concise.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would love to visit Central Park in New York because I dreamed about it as a child. I want to spend weekends there walking by the lake and enjoying the scenery and open spaces.

× Yeah, when I was a kid, I like go to park a lot because he's had a good atmosphere to spend time on with my family.

✓ Yeah, when I was a kid, I liked going to the park a lot because it had a good atmosphere to spend time in with my family.

Problems: incorrect tense (present 'like' should be past 'liked') and verb form ('go' should be gerund 'going'); article missing before 'park' (use 'the park'); wrong pronoun 'he's' used for park (use 'it'); awkward preposition 'on' after 'spend time' (use 'in'). Suggestion: use past tense for past habits, use gerund after verbs like 'liked', use correct articles and pronouns, and use 'spend time in' for places.

× And I think it's a great idea to like go riding a bike or just jogging or something.

✓ And I think it's a great idea to ride a bike or just go jogging or do something active.

Problems: unnecessary 'to like go' and incorrect verb forms. After 'idea to' use base verb 'ride' not 'go riding', and 'go jogging' is okay but 'just jogging' needs 'go' or rephrase. Suggestion: use 'ride a bike' or 'go riding a bike' (both correct) and keep structures consistent; avoid filler 'like'.

× Not really well because I don't have enough time to spend my time in the park because I have a lot of work to do.

✓ Not really, because I don't have enough time to spend in the park; I have a lot of work to do.

Problems: awkward adverb 'well' and repetition 'time to spend my time'. Tense is present and correct, but sentence structure is clumsy. Suggestion: remove 'well', avoid repetition, and use a semicolon or conjunction to connect clauses.

× I'm just in my grade 12, so I have to prepare myself before I go to the college.

✓ I'm just in grade 12, so I have to prepare myself before I go to college.

Problems: unnecessary 'my' before 'grade 12' in this context; article 'the' before 'college' is unnecessary when speaking generally. Suggestion: say 'in grade 12' and 'go to college' for idiomatic English.

× Yeah, of course, I think it's good to ecosystem because park is a green area, so it can produce like oxygen a lot, so it can help the global warming.

✓ Yeah, of course. I think parks are good for the ecosystem because they are green areas and produce oxygen, which can help reduce global warming.

Problems: 'good to ecosystem' incorrect preposition/structure (should be 'good for the ecosystem'); 'park is' wrong article and number (use 'parks are' or 'a park is'); 'produce like oxygen a lot' is informal and ungrammatical; 'help the global warming' wrong collocation (should be 'help reduce global warming'). Suggestion: use 'good for the ecosystem', pluralize when speaking generally, say 'produce oxygen' and 'help reduce global warming'.

× Umm, maybe I want to go to the New York City Park is I always dream about it when I was a kid because I think it's a great idea to spend time at the weekend or in the lake and I think it has a good scenery.

✓ Umm, maybe I want to go to New York City; I always dreamed about it when I was a kid because I think it's a great place to spend weekends or relax by a lake, and I think it has beautiful scenery.

Problems addressed: tense inconsistency ('want' present is OK for future desire, but 'always dream about it when I was a kid' mixes tenses—change to 'always dreamed' for past); unnecessary 'the' before 'New York City Park' and awkward phrase 'is I always'; 'spend time at the weekend' should be 'spend weekends' or 'on weekends'; 'in the lake' incorrect preposition (use 'by a lake' or 'at the lake'); 'good scenery' is awkward—use 'beautiful scenery'. Suggestion: separate ideas into clearer clauses, keep past tense for childhood dreams, and use correct prepositions and collocations.