Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you like going to parks as a child?

Thí sinh

Do you like going to parks as a child?

Giám khảo

Do you still like going to parks now?

Thí sinh

How do you still like going to parks now?

Giám khảo

Would you like to see more parks in your city?

Thí sinh

Would you like to see more parks in the city?

Giám khảo

Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?

Thí sinh

Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?

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Part 1

Did you like going to parks as a child?

Điểm: 20.0

Gợi ý: Your response repeats the examiner's question instead of answering. Give a clear direct answer (topic sentence) and one or two brief supporting details. Keep it natural and concise, avoid turning the question back. Use linking words if adding details (for example, 'because' or 'and').

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child because they had playgrounds and open space to run around. For example, I often played hide-and-seek with friends and rode a small bike on the paths.

Do you still like going to parks now?

Điểm: 15.0

Gợi ý: Your reply is unclear and again repeats or transforms the question instead of answering. Provide a direct yes/no or brief statement, then add a specific reason or activity. Use simple linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because I like jogging and relaxing in nature. For instance, I usually go twice a week to exercise and read on a bench.

Would you like to see more parks in your city?

Điểm: 10.0

Gợi ý: You repeated the examiner's question rather than answering. Give a clear opinion and justify it with one or two concrete reasons or consequences. Avoid asking questions back. Use linking words such as 'so' or 'therefore' to make your point coherent.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to see more parks in the city because they improve air quality and provide safe places for children to play. Therefore, new parks would make neighborhoods healthier and more pleasant.

Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?

Điểm: 10.0

Gợi ý: Again you repeated the question instead of answering. State a specific park or type of park you want to visit and explain why, with a brief supporting detail. Keep the answer direct and use linking words like 'because' or 'for example'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I want to visit the new waterfront park next year because it has cycling paths and a botanical garden. For example, I plan to go there for a weekend ride and to see the plant collections.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect tense/sequence and question form

× Do you like going to parks as a child?

✓ Did you like going to parks as a child?

The examiner asked about past habit (as a child), so the student's reply should use past tense. Using present tense 'Do you like' conflicts with 'as a child' time marker. Change to 'Did you like' to match past time. Suggestion: match the verb tense to the time expression (past marker -> past tense).

Incorrect tense and question formation

× How do you still like going to parks now?

✓ Do you still like going to parks now?

The student used 'How do you still like...', which is ungrammatical for a yes/no question about the present. The examiner asked 'Do you still like...?' so the correct form is 'Do you still like...?' Use auxiliary 'do' + subject + base verb for present simple yes/no questions; do not add 'How'.

Incorrect article use/context inconsistency

× Would you like to see more parks in the city?

✓ Would you like to see more parks in your city?

The examiner asked about parks 'in your city'. The student's reply changed to 'in the city', which is less specific and may change meaning. This is an article/context issue and clarity error. Use 'your city' to match the question's reference to the student's city. Suggestion: keep demonstrative/possessive references consistent with the question's context.

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