Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make the answer grammatical, concise and add a brief specific memory to enrich content. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, then give one supporting detail using a linking word.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoyed going to parks as a child. For example, I often played football with my friends every weekend, which helped me stay active and made those days feel carefree.

Gợi ý: Use a full sentence and expand slightly with a reason and a consequence using a linking word. Avoid abrupt short answers; be natural and polite.

Ví dụ: Not really — I rarely go to parks now because they are usually very crowded, so I prefer quieter places where I can relax or read without interruptions.

Gợi ý: Correct the sentence structure and avoid redundant phrases. Start with a clear topic sentence, then use linking words to explain why and give a specific feature you want in new parks.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to see more parks in the city because they provide green space for residents. Ideally, these new parks would be spread out and small so they are usually less crowded, making it easier for me to relax.

Gợi ý: Fix grammar and unclear words, give one specific park or type of park, and use linking words to connect purpose and benefit. Keep within 3–4 sentences maximum.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit several quiet neighborhood parks near my office in the future. For instance, I plan to try a small riverside park where I can read a book or take a peaceful walk after work, because it is usually less crowded and helps me unwind.

× Yes, I like going to the parks as a child.

✓ Yes, I liked going to parks as a child.

The question asks about a past habit (as a child), so the past tense should be used. Use 'liked' for past habit and omit the definite article 'the' before 'parks' when speaking generally. Suggestion: use past simple for past routines and avoid unnecessary articles (e.g. 'liked going to parks as a child').

× No, I don't like going to parks now because of the crowds.

✓ No, I don't like going to parks now because of the crowds.

This sentence correctly uses the present simple to describe a current general preference. No change needed. Keep present simple for current habits and 'the crowds' is acceptable to refer to crowds in general.

× Yes, I would like to see more parks in the city, but which are usually way less crowded, which will make it easy for me to relax.

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks in the city, but I mean parks that are usually much less crowded, which would make it easier for me to relax.

The original uses 'which' incorrectly and has awkward clause structure. Replace the relative clause with 'parks that' to specify which parks are meant. Use 'much less crowded' rather than informal 'way' and match conditional/modal tense: 'would make it easier' fits the hypothetical preference. Also use 'I mean' or restructure to clarify reference.

× Yes, there are many box like I want to go in the future, but I could go there to read a book or take a peaceful walk after work.

✓ Yes, there are many places I would like to visit in the future; I could go there to read a book or take a peaceful walk after work.

The phrase 'many box like I want to go' is ungrammatical. Replace 'box' with 'places' and reorder to 'places I would like to visit' to express future desire. Use 'would like to' for desire and a semicolon or conjunction to join the two related ideas. Maintain modal consistency: 'would like to visit' and 'could go there' are appropriate.

× The ones who are less crowded which would make it easier for me to relax.

✓ The ones that are less crowded would make it easier for me to relax.

Use 'that' (or 'which' with a comma) for things rather than 'who', which is for people. Also remove the extra 'which' and structure the clause as a main clause: 'would make it easier for me to relax.' If keeping a nonrestrictive clause, write: 'The ones, which are less crowded, would make it easier for me to relax.'