Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you like going to parks as a child?

Thí sinh

Did you like going to parks as a child?

Giám khảo

Do you still like going to parks now?

Thí sinh

Do you still like going to parks now?

Giám khảo

Would you like to see more parks in your city?

Thí sinh

Would you like to see more parks in your city?

Giám khảo

Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?

Thí sinh

Are there any parks you want to go go to in the future? Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?

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Part 1

Did you like going to parks as a child?

Điểm: 20.0

Gợi ý: 你的回答只是重复了考官的问题,未提供任何信息。请直接回答问题(肯定或否定),并用一两句具体细节支持,比如什么时候、和谁去、做什么活动或为什么喜欢/不喜欢。句子不要超过5句,注意使用连接词使表述连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. I often went there with my parents and siblings on weekends to play on the swings and have picnics. Because the parks were close to my home and had a big playground, they were my favorite place to spend the afternoons.

Do you still like going to parks now?

Điểm: 20.0

Gợi ý: 你再次只是复述问题,没有给出答案或细节。请直接回答并补充具体原因或例子,比如现在去公园的频率、做什么活动或相比小时候有何不同。使用连接词(like 'because'、'so')让回答更连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks, although less often than before. I usually go for a jog or to walk my dog a few times a week because it helps me relax and get some exercise. Compared to my childhood, I prefer quieter parks with good walking paths.

Would you like to see more parks in your city?

Điểm: 20.0

Gợi ý: 你的回答仍然是重复考官的提问,未表达观点或理由。请直接表明你的立场(想或不想),并给出具体原因或建议,比如城市缺乏绿地、对居民健康的好处或希望新增的设施。保持简洁并用一两个连接词使逻辑清晰。

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because green spaces improve air quality and people's well-being. New parks with playgrounds and walking trails would encourage families to spend time outdoors and make the city more livable.

Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?

Điểm: 15.0

Gợi ý: 你重复了问题两次,仍未提供任何答案或具体信息。请直接说明你想去的公园名称或类型,并说明原因、计划时间或期待做的活动。保持回答在最多5句内,并用连接词(如 'because'、'for example')丰富细节。

Ví dụ: Yes, I hope to visit Central Park in New York someday because I've heard it has beautiful landscapes and many attractions. For example, I'd like to rent a bike and explore the park's trails, and maybe join a guided tour to learn more about its history.

Ngữ pháp

Sentence structure errors

× Did you like going to parks as a child?

✓ Yes. I liked going to parks as a child.

原句是考官的问题被学生原样重复,缺少作为回答的完整句子(句子结构错误)。学生应提供陈述性回答,例如用过去时描述过去的喜好。建议使用简单过去时:"I liked..." 并补充具体细节以使回答完整。

Present tense issue

× Do you still like going to parks now?

✓ Yes. I still like going to parks now.

原句是考官的问题被学生原样重复,学生应用一般现在时给出肯定或否定回答。建议使用一般现在时的主谓结构:"I still like..." 并可补充原因或频率词。

Modal verb usage

× Would you like to see more parks in your city?

✓ Yes. I would like to see more parks in my city.

原句是考官的问题被学生直接重复,缺少作为回答的句子。使用情态动词 would 表示愿望或礼貌请求,回答时应保持相同的情态:"I would like..." 并可说明理由。

Verb + -ing form

× Are there any parks you want to go go to in the future?

✓ Are there any parks you want to go to in the future? / Yes. There are some parks I want to go to in the future.

原句存在两个问题:一是重复了 go(多打了一次),二是学生把问题句原样重复作为回答。首先删除重复的词,保持 "go to" 结构。其次,如果是回答,应用完整句子(肯定或否定)并保持时态(现在时表示将来的计划通常用一般现在或 'want to' + 动词)。建议改正为带回答的完整句子,例如"Yes, I want to go to ... in the future."。

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