Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答は直接的で好感が持てますが、文法と語順が不自然で、詳しい具体例が不足しています。短く論理的な主文（トピックセンテンス）を使い、その後に1〜2文で具体的な活動や思い出（何をしたか、誰と、どんな遊びか）を付け加えてください。接続詞（for example, and, so）を適切に使い、過去形の一致に注意しましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. I often visited them with my friends, where we played hide-and-seek and climbed trees until sunset. Those afternoons were memorable because we felt free and energetic.

Gợi ý: 内容は伝わりますが、語彙選択と文法に誤りがあり、論理の流れが曖昧です（"concerned or discouraged"の意味が不明瞭）。現在の気持ちを表すトピックセンテンスを作り、その理由を具体的に述べ、接続語でつなげてください。感情表現は正確な語を使い（relaxed, stressed, worriedなど）。文は3〜4文以内に収めましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because they help me relax when I'm stressed. When I visit, I usually sit by the lake and watch people walking or feeding birds, which clears my mind. This simple routine helps me feel calmer and more focused.

Gợi ý: 意図は良く伝わりますが、表現が曖昧で冗長です。まず肯定の主文を述べ、その後でなぜそう思うかを具体的に説明してください（例：自然、散歩、子供の遊び場、空気の質など）。'adventure'や'fresh'を使うなら、具体例でそれを裏付けてください。

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city. New parks would provide green spaces for walking and relaxing, and they could offer playgrounds for children and quiet spots for reading. Overall, more parks would make daily life more enjoyable.

Gợi ý: 答えは興味を示していますが、固有名詞の扱いや理由の説明が不正確で文法ミスがあります。行きたい理由（景観、活動、文化的体験など）を明確に述べ、具体的な公園名や特徴を正確に扱ってください。文は論理的に接続語（for example, because, and）でつなぎ、語順と時制を整えましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, there are several parks I'd like to visit in the future. For example, I want to see Yoyogi Park in Japan because I’ve heard it has wide lawns and lively festivals. I’d also love to visit famous national parks in the United States to explore dramatic geological scenery and hiking trails.

× Yes, I like to go. I like to go into parks as a child and with my friends to play some interesting games and until the sunset.

✓ Yes, I liked going to parks as a child. I used to go to parks with my friends to play interesting games until sunset.

The speaker refers to childhood activities, so past tense is required. Use 'liked' and 'used to' for habitual past actions. Change 'go into parks' to 'go to parks' and remove unnecessary articles. 'Until the sunset' should be 'until sunset'. Suggestions: use past tense verbs for past time frames and common collocations like 'go to parks' and 'until sunset'.

× Yeah, I still like going to parks now because as an adult I always feel the concerned or discouraged.

✓ Yes, I still like going to parks now because as an adult I sometimes feel concerned or discouraged.

The sentence uses present tense but has incorrect word choice and article use. 'the concerned' is ungrammatical; use 'concerned' (adjective) without 'the'. 'Always' conflicts with meaning; 'sometimes' fits better if parks are used occasionally. Suggestion: choose appropriate adverbs and omit 'the' before adjectives used predicatively.

× So at that time I will. I always go to the parks and don't think anything and just see the lake or see somebody like.

✓ So at those times I go. I always go to the park to clear my mind and just look at the lake or watch people.

'So at that time I will' is incomplete and awkward; use 'at those times I go' or 'then I go'. 'The parks' should be singular 'the park' when speaking of a habit of going to a park in general, or simply 'go to parks'. 'Don't think anything' is unidiomatic; use 'clear my mind' or 'don't think about anything'. 'See somebody like' is incomplete; use 'watch people'. Suggestions: make sentences complete, use idiomatic expressions, and choose consistent singular/plural for places.

× Yes, I like to see more parks in our in my city because I think it's like a kind of adventure to always find something fresh and it's very interesting in my daily life.

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because I think it's like an adventure to always find something new, and it makes my daily life more interesting.

The response refers to a preference about the future or general desire, so 'would like' is more natural. 'Our in my city' is redundant; use 'my city'. 'Something fresh' is better as 'something new'. 'It's very interesting in my daily life' should be 'it makes my daily life more interesting'. Suggestions: use 'would like' for polite desires and clearer collocations like 'something new' and 'make daily life more interesting'.

× Yes, of course. I always like the parks in Shebia, like Yoyogi parks.

✓ Yes, of course. I always like the parks in Shibuya, like Yoyogi Park.

Place names need correct singular/plural use and correct form: 'Yoyogi Park' is a singular park name, not 'Yoyogi parks'. Also 'Shebia' appears to be a misspelling of 'Shibuya'. Suggestions: use correct place names and proper singular for named parks.

× And I think I know one of the parks in America is very famous and I can see a lot of geological scenes.

✓ I think I know of a famous park in America where you can see many geological features.

Sentence structure and tense: 'I think I know one of the parks in America is very famous' is awkward; use 'I know of a famous park in America'. 'I can see a lot of geological scenes' is unnatural; use 'you can see many geological features'. Suggestions: rephrase for natural English and use 'of' after 'know' when referring to awareness.

× So I'm really interesting. I'm I really want to go to there in the future.

✓ So I'm really interested. I really want to go there in the future.

'I'm really interesting' incorrectly uses the adjective 'interesting' to describe the speaker; use 'interested' to express personal feeling. 'I'm I really want' has an extra 'I'm'. 'Go to there' is incorrect; use 'go there'. Suggestions: use 'interested' for feelings, remove extra words, and use correct word order for place adverbs ('go there').