Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence answering the question, avoid fillers (uh, um), correct grammar (tense and prepositions), and give one specific supporting detail. Use linking words if adding details.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoyed going to parks as a child. I often played games there with other children, which helped me make friends and stay active.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and use correct tense and collocations (go to the park, become older → got older). Keep it concise and give one clear reason with a linking word (because/so).

Ví dụ: Yes, I still like going to parks because I exercise there. For example, I usually go running twice a week to stay fit.

Gợi ý: Clarify your opinion and organize your answer: give a topic sentence (Yes/No), then one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid unclear phrases and incorrect grammar.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they provide free places for exercise and relaxation. For instance, elderly people could walk there and children would have safe places to play.

Gợi ý: Be concise and use correct frequency expressions and future forms. Start with a direct answer, then give a specific plan or frequency using linking words (usually, in the future).

Ví dụ: Yes. There is a park near my home that I visit once or twice a week. In the future I plan to keep going there regularly to exercise and relax.

× I guess, uh, as I said, I like to go in front because in the in park there, there is lots of children like me that I can play with them.

✓ I guess, uh, as I said, I like to go to the park because there are lots of children there like me that I can play with.

Errors: incorrect prepositions 'go in front' and 'in the in park', and unnecessary pronoun 'with them' (see pronoun guidance). Use 'go to the park' to indicate visiting a place. Use 'there are' for existence (There be issue but here counted as preposition and structure). Remove 'with them' because 'play with' already includes the object; keep 'play with them' is acceptable but redundant with 'that I can play with' move 'there' after 'children' for clarity. Suggestion: use 'go to the park' and 'there are lots of children there like me whom I can play with.'

× Yes, still I like to go park because now I am become older so I have to be fit.

✓ Yes, I still like to go to the park because I have become older, so I need to stay fit.

Errors: missing preposition 'to' before 'the park' (preposition issue) and incorrect verb form 'am become' which mixes present continuous and past participle; correct is 'have become' for present perfect. 'Need to stay fit' is a clearer modal/necessity expression than 'have to be fit'. Suggestion: use present perfect 'have become' to show change over time and 'go to the park.'

× So for this I usually I go to for for running and working.

✓ So for this I usually go there to run and work out.

Errors: incorrect sequence 'go to for running' mixes prepositions and gerund usage. Use 'go there to run' (infinitive of purpose) or 'go running' (gerund after verb). 'Work out' is clearer than 'working.' Suggestion: use 'go there to run' or 'go running' for natural phrasing.

× I just absorbed my life to see my products in my city because more park, we create more entertainment.

✓ I just thought about my life and my products in the city; more parks create more entertainment.

Errors: 'absorbed my life to see my products' is unclear and incorrect structure. Likely intended 'I just thought about my life' or 'I care about my life' and 'more parks' needs a verb 'create' singular/plural agreement handled by correction. Suggestion: use clear subject and verb order: 'I thought about...; more parks create...'.

× So who is become old or who is old? Uh, he, he or she can go to park and.

✓ So people who become old or who are old, he or she can go to the park.

Errors: incorrect pronoun use and verb form 'is become old' (should be 'become' or 'are old'). Also missing article before 'park'. Use 'people who are old' or 'older people' and 'go to the park.' Suggestion: say 'Older people can go to the park.'

× Yes, uh, actually where I live there is a park and uh, actually I not every day, like uh, one or two days in a week, I usually go there.

✓ Yes, actually where I live there is a park, and I don't go every day; I usually go once or twice a week.

Errors: negative construction 'I not every day' is incorrect — needs auxiliary 'do' and contraction 'don't.' Also 'one or two days in a week' is awkward; use 'once or twice a week.' 'There is a park' is correct usage of 'there be.' Suggestion: use 'I don't go every day' and 'once or twice a week.'

× So in the future I all, I, I want to be go there.

✓ So in the future I want to go there.

Errors: incorrect verb phrase 'want to be go' mixes 'be' with infinitive 'go.' Use 'want to go' for future intention. Remove repeated fillers 'I all, I, I.' Suggestion: use concise 'I want to go there in the future.'