Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you like going to parks as a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I lied.
Giám khảo
Do you still like going to parks now?
Thí sinh
It's like going to parks right now.
Giám khảo
Would you like to see more parks in your city?
Thí sinh
Yes, I want to see more parks in my city.
Giám khảo
Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?
Thí sinh
Yes I want to go park the I have never been to.
Did you like going to parks as a child?
Điểm: 25.0Gợi ý: 回答有重大问题:语言使用错误("lied" 应为 "liked"),内容过于简单且不符合自然表达。建议先直接回答(Yes, I liked going to parks.),然后用一到两句具体细节补充,例如说明喜欢公园的原因或一个记忆。注意控制在最多五句话内,并使用连词让回答更流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, I liked going to parks as a child. I especially enjoyed playing on the swings and feeding the ducks by the pond, which made weekends feel special.
Do you still like going to parks now?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答不明确且句子结构有错误("It's like going to parks right now" 含义不清)。建议直接回答并给出具体情况,例如频率或原因。使用连接词(so / because)来丰富句子并保持连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks, because I go there every weekend to relax and exercise, and the fresh air helps me clear my mind.
Would you like to see more parks in your city?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答正确但过于简单,缺少详细支持。建议在回答后加入具体理由或比较,例如说明更多公园带来的好处(健康、环境、社区活动),并用连接词(because / for example)使逻辑更清晰。
Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city, because they provide green space for exercise and community events, and they can improve air quality and residents' well-being.
Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 句子有语法错误和词序问题(应为 "a park that I have never been to")。回答应更具体,说明想去的公园名称或类型,以及原因或期待做的活动。使用连接词(such as / because / so)来丰富细节。
Ví dụ: Yes, I want to visit a park I have never been to, such as the botanical garden downtown, because I'm interested in seeing its rare plants and taking photos of the landscapes.
× Yes, I lied.
✓ Yes, I liked it.
原句使用了动词"lied"(撒谎的过去式),与语境不符。面试官问的是“Did you like going to parks as a child?”(你小时候喜欢去公园吗?),回答应使用动词"like"的过去式"liked"表示过去的喜好,并且要加上宾语或代词(it)以指代去公园这件事。建议:把"lied"改为"liked"并加上"it"或直接说"Yes, I did." 来避免拼写/意思混淆。
× It's like going to parks right now.
✓ I like going to parks now.
原句"It's like going to parks right now." 结构不合适,使用了"It is like..."表达比喻,而不是直接表达现在的喜好。回答第二个问题"Do you still like going to parks now?" 应直接用现在时态,肯定句为"I like..."。此外,要用主语+谓语的常规句子而不是"It is like..."。建议:使用明确的现在时陈述"I like going to parks now."或简短回答"Yes, I do."。
× Yes, I want to see more parks in my city.
✓ Yes, I want to see more parks in my city.
此句语法正确,时态和表达都与提示问题“Would you like to see more parks in your city?”一致。可用更礼貌的表达"Yes, I'd like to see more parks in my city." 但并非必须。
× Yes I want to go park the I have never been to.
✓ Yes, I want to go to parks that I have never been to.
原句词序和介词使用错误:缺少介词"to"在"go to park",以及限定从句顺序混乱("the I have never been to"不正确)。正确表述应为"go to parks that I have never been to"或单数"go to a park that I have never been to"。建议:注意动词go后需接介词to,限定从句用关系代词that/which置于名词之后,且保持从句结构完整。