Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答は意図は伝わりますが、文法ミスと発音上のためらい（uh, I, I）や時制の誤り（"go been to"、"in my child time"）が目立ちます。改善点：1) 短く明確なトピック文を作る（例: "Yes, I enjoyed going to parks as a child.")。2) 過去形や時制を正しく使う（"I used to go to the park"）。3) フィラー（uh, um）を減らす練習をする。4) 具体的な活動を一つか二つ挙げ、接続詞でつなぐ（"because I played baseball and soccer there"）。練習方法：質問に対して1〜2文で答え、文法を意識して何度も音読する。

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoyed going to parks as a child because I played baseball and soccer there. I often met friends after school and we would play until it got dark.

Gợi ý: 意図は明確ですが、文法・語順の不正確さ（"in park" → "in the park"、"two week ago" → "two weeks ago"）と文の切れ目が不完全です。またフィラーが多く結論文が未完成（"make"で終わる）です。改善点：1) 冠詞と複数形に注意する（the, weeks）。2) 完結した理由や感情を一文でまとめる（"they make me feel happy and relaxed"）。3) 接続詞で情報をつなげる（"For example"）。

Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy going to the park to play sports. For example, two weeks ago I played basketball with a friend, and activities like that make me feel happy and relaxed.

Gợi ý: この回答は意味が取りづらく、文が断片的で論理的なつながりがありません（"a park is. Rest."）。改善点：1) まず直接的な答えを述べる（"Yes, I would"）。2) 理由を明確にする（"because there are few parks where I can exercise"）。3) 完結した文で一貫性を保つ。4) 可能なら希望の種類（小規模、公園設備）を具体的に述べる。

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because there are not many places to exercise. More parks with sports facilities would make it easier for people to stay active.

Gợi ý: 話の意図（イエローストーンに行きたい）はわかりますが、観光地の特徴を説明する文が不明瞭で数字表現や語順が間違っています（"1/2 or up over half of on scene"）。改善点：1) 名称は"Yellowstone National Park"と正確に言う。2) 具体的な見どころを簡潔に述べる（"geysers, wildlife, and landscapes"）。3) 理由と感情を接続詞でつなげる（"because"）。

Ví dụ: Yes, I would love to visit Yellowstone National Park in the United States because of its famous geysers, diverse wildlife, and impressive landscapes. I especially want to see Old Faithful and try to spot bison and elk.

× Yes, I did uh, because I, I like uh, play sports like baseball, soccer and basketball.

✓ Yes, I did, because I liked to play sports like baseball, soccer and basketball.

The student mixes past and present tense. The question asks about childhood (past), so verbs should be past. Change 'I like play' to 'I liked to play' or 'I liked playing'. Also add commas to improve fluency.

× So I always go been to park in my child time.

✓ So I always went to the park when I was a child.

The phrase 'go been' is ungrammatical; the past tense of 'go' is 'went'. 'Child time' should be 'when I was a child'. Also include the article 'the' before 'park'.

× Of course I like uh playing sports in park.

✓ Of course I like playing sports in the park.

Missing article 'the' before 'park'. Use present tense 'like playing' is fine for current habit, but include 'the' to refer to parks in general or a specific park.

× Uh, two week ago I played basketball with my friend.

✓ Two weeks ago I played basketball with my friend.

Use plural 'weeks' for more than one week. The rest of sentence is correct past tense for a finished action.

× Uh, playing sports in park make me happy and make.

✓ Playing sports in the park makes me happy.

Subject-verb agreement: 'playing sports' is singular gerund subject so verb should be 'makes' (adds third person 's'). Also remove the incomplete second 'make' and add the article 'the' before 'park'.

× Yes, recently a park is. Rest. So I need to play sports.

✓ Yes, there aren't many parks nearby recently, so I need more places to play sports.

Original sentence fragments are unclear. Use 'there aren't many parks nearby recently' to express lack of parks (There be issue and article use). 'So I need more places to play sports' clarifies intention. Keep tense present/perfect depending on context.

× Yes I want to go to the Yellowstone park in America.

✓ Yes, I want to go to Yellowstone National Park in America.

Use the correct proper name 'Yellowstone National Park' and include commas for clarity. 'I want to go to' expresses future intention and is appropriate.

× It has 1/2 or up over half of on scene so I want to watch it.

✓ It has many scenic areas, and over half of it is wilderness, so I want to see it.

Original phrase is unclear and uses incorrect prepositions and quantifier phrasing. Replace with clear expressions: 'many scenic areas' and 'over half of it is wilderness' or 'over half of the park is scenic', and use 'see it' rather than 'watch it'.