Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be clear and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repetition and correct basic grammar (tenses, articles, prepositions). Use linking words like “because” or “for example” to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child because my family lived near one. For example, I used to ride my bicycle there and play games with my friends every afternoon.

Gợi ý: Answer directly, use present simple or present continuous correctly, and give one or two specific details about when and with whom you go. Avoid filler sounds and fix word choice (e.g. 'lovely' → 'I enjoy'). Use a linking phrase such as “usually” or “often” to add clarity.

Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks. Usually I go in the evenings with a friend, where we talk about our day and sometimes have snacks on a bench.

Gợi ý: Make a clear opinion first, then support it with specific reasons or examples. Use correct sentence structure and definite/indefinite articles (a/an/the). Avoid repetition and name places accurately. Use linking words like “because” or “for example.”

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like more parks because they provide space for exercise and relaxation. For example, in Bangkok there are many public parks such as Suan Luang and Chatuchak where people can walk or picnic.

Gợi ý: Give a clear statement of your plan, then explain why with specific details. Use correct word order and grammar (e.g. 'I want to go to a park in Kuala Lumpur'). Avoid filler words like “uh” and emotional interjections like “wow”; instead describe what appeals to you.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit a park in Kuala Lumpur in the future because I have seen photos online of its beautiful gardens and modern design. I hope to walk around the park and take photos of the scenery when I visit.

× Yes, in shy I really I really love going to the park because it is I'm going to the park with bicycle.

✓ Yes, as a child I really loved going to the park because I used to go there by bicycle.

Original sentence has repeated words, incorrect phrase 'in shy' (likely 'as a child'), wrong tense and awkward structure. Use 'as a child' for childhood, past tense 'loved' for past habit, and 'used to go there by bicycle' clarifies habitual past action.

× I playing with my friend and go playing something something in the shy.

✓ I played with my friend and we played games in the park.

The student used incorrect verb forms: 'I playing' should be past tense 'I played'. 'Go playing' is ungrammatical; use 'we played' to indicate past activities. Replace 'shy' with 'park' and remove repetition and filler words.

× Now, yes, now I'm lovely, very lovely going to the park.

✓ Now, yes, I really enjoy going to the park.

'I'm lovely' is incorrect; 'enjoy' expresses liking an activity in present. Use present simple 'I really enjoy' for habitual present preference instead of adjective 'lovely'.

× I, uh, in now I'm going to the park with my friend, umm, in the evening I going to the, uh, public park with my friend and talk about the day with us with there and, and eat something.

✓ Now I go to the public park with my friend in the evening; we talk about our day and eat something.

The original mixes continuous and incorrect forms: 'I'm going' and 'I going' are inconsistent. Use simple present 'I go' for habitual actions. Use 'we talk about our day and eat something' for coordinated activities. Remove fillers and fix word order ('with us with there' is incorrect).

× Yes, in my city have a have a lot of park like public park like uh like in Bangkok.

✓ Yes, my city has many parks, including public parks like those in Bangkok.

Missing subject-verb agreement and article/quantifier issues: 'in my city have' should be 'my city has'. Use 'many parks' not 'a lot of park'. Clarify with 'including' and correct plural form.

× In my in Bangkok a lot of my public public park such as Umm Suan Suan Loom and Umm Dream World.

✓ In Bangkok there are many public parks such as Suan Luang and Dream World.

Redundant words and incorrect naming: 'my public public park' is wrong. Use 'there are many public parks'. Also correct park names to a plausible form and remove possessive 'my' unless intended.

× In the future, I want to go the park in the capital city in Malaysia named KL because I see in the phone and I have wow, this park is very beautiful.

✓ In the future, I want to visit the parks in Kuala Lumpur, Malaysia, because I saw pictures on my phone and thought, 'Wow, these parks are very beautiful.'

Use 'want to visit' rather than 'want to go the park'. Past perception of pictures should be past tense 'saw'. Use plural 'parks' if referring to multiple, and replace informal fillers. Place the reaction properly and use correct punctuation (quoted text noted here but should be integrated in speech).

× I want to visit uh, in the future and and working in the park in the future, yes.

✓ I want to visit in the future, and I would like to work in a park someday.

Redundant 'in the future and and' and awkward 'working in the park in the future'. Use 'would like to work' or 'want to work' plus 'someday' to express future desire. Include article 'a park' for singular workplace.