Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn và ngữ pháp chỉnh sửa. Tránh lỗi thời gian (used to + tense), sửa danh từ số nhiều/ít, và dùng từ đúng (playground thay vì screen, drive không đúng). Nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề ngắn gọn, sau đó thêm 1-2 chi tiết cụ thể về hoạt động và cảm xúc. Ví dụ chi tiết nên nêu địa điểm, hoạt động và tần suất. Hạn chế dài hơn 5 câu.

Ví dụ: Yes. I used to go to the local park almost every weekend with my parents or our neighbours. I loved playing on the playground and sometimes feeding the ducks by the pond. Those visits were my favourite part of the weekend because I could run around and play with other children.

Gợi ý: Cần sửa ngữ pháp và từ vựng (go to the park, play on the swings, walk my dog, meet friends). Câu chủ đề nên trả lời trực tiếp, sau đó giải thích sự khác biệt giữa quá khứ và hiện tại với linking word (for example, now). Tránh câu mơ hồ như 'miss friends' — dùng 'meet friends'. Giữ tối đa 3-4 câu cụ thể.

Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy going to the park. As a child I liked playing on the swings, but now I usually go there to relax and read. I also often walk my dog and sometimes meet friends for a coffee.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời có ý rõ ràng nhưng cần sửa ngữ pháp và trật tự từ (there are enough parks, residents, quiet place). Nên dùng linking words (because, so) mạch lạc hơn và cung cấp một lý do cụ thể. Có thể thêm 1 câu ngắn nêu điều bạn muốn cải thiện (ví dụ: maintenance) để làm phong phú nội dung.

Ví dụ: I don't think we need many more parks because my city is small and most residents can easily reach one. Also, I prefer quiet green spaces, so I wouldn't want parks to become too crowded. However, improving maintenance of existing parks would be helpful.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời bị nhiều lỗi về thông tin và từ vựng (Iceland park in the United States is unclear; theme like Disneyland, attractions, crowded). Cần trả lời trực tiếp tên địa điểm rõ ràng, và giải thích lý do cụ thể. Sử dụng linking words (because, so) và sửa ngữ pháp (I would like to visit, it seems, try to go on a weekday). Giữ 2-3 câu súc tích.

Ví dụ: Yes, I'd like to visit a theme park in the United States, such as Disneyland, because I enjoy the rides and character shows. It can get very crowded, so I would try to visit on a weekday to avoid long queues.

× When I was a child, I used to go to park almost every weekend with my parents or our neighbors.

✓ When I was a child, I used to go to the park almost every weekend with my parents or our neighbors.

'park' needs the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place regularly visited; otherwise plural 'parks' could be used if speaking generally. Use 'the park' for a specific familiar park.

× I enjoy playing on the screen and sometimes feeding the ducks, so this was one of my favorite weekend activity when it was a drive.

✓ I enjoyed playing on the swings and sometimes feeding the ducks, so this was one of my favorite weekend activities when I was a child.

Mixed tenses and wrong word choices: 'enjoy' (present) should match past context 'When I was a child', so use 'enjoyed'. 'screen' is wrong word; likely 'swings'. 'activity' should be plural 'activities' to match 'one of the'. 'when it was a drive' is ungrammatical; likely 'when I was a child' or 'when we drove' depending on meaning.

× Yes, I still like going to park.

✓ Yes, I still like going to the park.

Same issue as before: use 'the park' to refer to parks generally visited or a specific park; English normally uses 'the' with 'park' in this context.

× When I was a child I used to enjoy the playground in playing on the screen, but now I usually go to relax.

✓ When I was a child I used to enjoy the playground and playing on the swings, but now I usually go to relax.

Incorrect preposition 'in' before 'playing' and wrong noun 'screen' vs 'swings'. Use parallel structure 'enjoy the playground and playing' or better 'enjoy playing on the swings'. Also keep tense consistent.

× Sometimes I work my dog and miss friends.

✓ Sometimes I walk my dog and meet friends.

'work my dog' is incorrect; the intended verb is 'walk'. 'miss friends' is wrong in context; likely 'meet friends'. These are word choice and sentence structure issues.

× Now I think there's there are enough park in my city because it it is quite small and most resident can reach a park easily and I also prefer quite the place so I don't want more crowded parks.

✓ Now I think there are enough parks in my city because it is quite small and most residents can reach a park easily, and I also prefer quiet places, so I don't want more crowded parks.

Redundant 'there's there are' removed; 'park' should be plural 'parks'; 'it it' fixed to 'it'; 'resident' plural 'residents'; 'quite the place' should be 'quiet places'. Article and number agreement corrected.

× I would like to visit Iceland park in the United States, because this them like Disneyland and full of Princess attraction which are in charge.

✓ I would like to visit Iceland Park in the United States, because it is like Disneyland and full of princess attractions.

Proper noun capitalization 'Iceland Park'. 'this them like' is incorrect; replace with 'it is like'. 'Princess attraction which are in charge' is ungrammatical; simplify to 'princess attractions'. Make 'attractions' plural to match 'full of'.

× It seem grateful if being hurt is often very crowded, so I would like try to go on a weekday.

✓ It seems likely to be very crowded, so I would like to try to go on a weekday.

Verb agreement: 'seem' should be 'seems'. 'grateful' is wrong word; use 'likely' or 'crowded'. 'if being hurt is often very crowded' is nonsensical; rephrase to 'to be very crowded'. Add 'to' in 'would like to try'.