Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be careful with verb tense and natural phrasing. Start with a clear topic sentence in the past tense, then add one or two brief supporting details using linking words. Avoid short, choppy sentences and redundancy.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I often went to the park near my home when I was a child because my parents liked to have picnics there and I enjoyed playing on the swings.

Gợi ý: Use correct articles and plural forms, and organize the answer with linking words. Start with a direct response, then give two specific supporting details (frequency and activity) with clear grammar.

Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks. There are many large parks near my house in the UK, so on weekends I often go for a walk and read a book on a bench.

Gợi ý: Avoid repetition and improve sentence structure. State your opinion briefly, then give a clear reason with linking words and a specific effect or example. Correct collocations like "feel refreshed" and "nature" usage.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would. I feel refreshed when I see parks because being surrounded by trees and flowers helps me relax, so I would like to see more green spaces in my city.

Gợi ý: Be precise and avoid filler words. Use correct prepositions and articles ("I've never been there", "one famous park is"). Mention when and what you will do there with a linking word for clarity.

Ví dụ: Yes. One park I want to visit is Hyde Park in London. I have never been there, but I plan to go later this year to walk around the lake and read a book on the grass.

× Yes I do. I often go to a park when I was a child.

✓ Yes I did. I often went to a park when I was a child.

The student mixes present tense ('do', 'go') with a past time reference ('when I was a child'). Use past tense to describe habitual actions in the past: 'did' and 'went'. Suggestion: use consistent past tense for past routines.

× Yeah, in the UK there are a lot of park and near also near my house there are many large parks, so when weekend I often go to the park and read some book there.

✓ Yeah, in the UK there are a lot of parks and near my house there are many large parks, so on weekends I often go to the park and read some books there.

Multiple issues: 'park' should be plural 'parks' to match 'a lot of'; 'near also near' is redundant so reduced to 'near'; 'when weekend' is incorrect, use 'on weekends' or 'at the weekend'; 'some book' should be plural 'some books' or 'a book'. Suggestions: ensure noun number matches quantifiers and use correct prepositional time phrases.

× Yes I would. When I see a park my my my feeling refresh when I see the nature. So I want to see the park in my city.

✓ Yes I would. When I see a park my feelings are refreshed by the nature. So I want to have more parks in my city.

Repetition 'my my my' and awkward structure 'feeling refresh' are incorrect. Use passive or active correct form: 'my feelings are refreshed' or 'I feel refreshed'. 'See the nature' is unnatural; say 'by nature' or 'by the natural surroundings'. Also 'I want to see the park in my city' is unclear given the question about more parks — better: 'I want to have more parks in my city.' Suggestion: remove repetition, use correct verb forms for states (feel refreshed) and clarify intent.

× Yes, I have some in the UK, one of the famous park is Hyde Park, but I have never been to there.

✓ Yes, I have some in the UK. One of the famous parks is Hyde Park, but I have never been there.

'one of the famous park' needs plural 'parks' after 'of the' and 'been to there' is redundant: use 'been there' or 'been to Hyde Park'. Also split run-on sentence for clarity. Suggestion: match 'one of the' with plural noun and avoid using both 'to' and 'there' together.

× So uh within this year I would like to go there and enjoy reading books there.

✓ So within this year I would like to go there and enjoy reading books there.

This sentence is acceptable but stylistically 'within this year' is okay; however modal 'would like to' indicates polite future intention and fits context. No grammar change necessary; if preferred, 'I would like to visit it this year and enjoy reading there.' Suggestion: optionally replace 'there' with a clearer reference like 'in Hyde Park' to avoid repetition.