Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you like going to parks as a child?
Thí sinh
No, I didn't. I think it's boring.
Giám khảo
Do you still like going to parks now?
Thí sinh
Yes I do. It's let me feel relaxed.
Giám khảo
Would you like to see more parks in your city?
Thí sinh
Of course I go to a park with my parents every week.
Giám khảo
Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?
Thí sinh
I want go to Forest Park because I heard it's very beautiful.
Did you like going to parks as a child?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答直接但过于简短,缺乏细节和连接词,句子也有小语法问题(主句与原因之间缺乏连接)。建议在给出观点后用一到两句补充具体原因或举例,并使用连接词(because, so, when 等)。保持不超过5句。
Ví dụ: No, I didn't. I found parks boring when I was a child because there weren't many activities for kids in my neighbourhood. For example, there were no playgrounds or interesting events, so I preferred playing at home.
Do you still like going to parks now?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答表达了观点,但语法错误('It's let me' 应为 'It lets me' 或 'It makes me feel')。同时可加入连接词和具体细节来丰富回答,例如说明如何放松、何时去、公园的具体特色。
Ví dụ: Yes, I do. Parks make me feel relaxed because I can walk among trees and listen to birds. Usually I go there on weekends to clear my mind after a busy week.
Would you like to see more parks in your city?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答没有直接回应问题(询问是否希望看到更多公园,但回答讲的是自己每周与父母去公园)。建议先直接回答 'Yes' 或 'No',然后给出具体理由和例子,使用连接词使逻辑清晰。注意句子时态和相关性。
Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they offer green spaces for families. For example, more neighbourhood parks would allow people like my parents and me to walk and relax without travelling far.
Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答内容明确且有理由,但存在小语法错误('I want go' 应为 'I want to go'),可以再加一点细节说明想去的原因或计划时间,使用连接词如 'because' 或 'so' 增强连贯性。
Ví dụ: I want to go to Forest Park because I heard it's very beautiful and has many hiking trails. I plan to visit next month to take photos and enjoy a long walk with friends.
× I think it's boring.
✓ I thought it was boring.
这句话出现在回答“Did you like going to parks as a child?”(过去式问题)之后,时态应该与问题一致。原句用现在时(I think / it's)与过去背景不匹配。改为过去时的 I thought it was boring,使时态一致。建议根据谈论的时间(过去、现在、将来)选择相应时态。
× It's let me feel relaxed.
✓ It lets me feel relaxed.
原句用结构 "It's let" 不符合英语语法。这里要表达现在常态,主语 it 与动词 lets 需要第三人称单数形式。应使用一般现在时:It lets me feel relaxed。建议记住主语为第三人称单数时动词加 -s。
× Of course I go to a park with my parents every week.
✓ Of course I go to the park with my parents every week.
原句的主要问题是冠词使用(见下条),但动词 go 与情态时态本身可以。为了语义自然,通常说 go to the park 表示去附近的那个/习惯性的公园。建议固定短语使用 the park 来表达经常去的场所。
× Of course I go to a park with my parents every week.
✓ Of course I go to the park with my parents every week.
这里谈论的是每周固定去的具体公园,英语习惯用定冠词 the 表示特定或习惯性的地点。使用 a 表示泛指,会让句子不够自然。建议在表示某个熟悉或已知的场所时使用 the。
× I want go to Forest Park because I heard it's very beautiful.
✓ I want to go to Forest Park because I heard it's very beautiful.
动词 want 后需接不定式 to do,原句缺少 to。应为 want to go。中文提示:动词 want 后面接动词时要加 to,不要省略。