Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be careful with tense consistency and make the response slightly more specific. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific details and a linking word. Keep it natural and concise.

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. For example, I used to climb trees and play team games there, which helped me become more confident. Also, being surrounded by trees and birds made me feel connected to nature.

Gợi ý: Fix grammar (use correct verb forms and sentence boundaries) and add a linking word to connect ideas. Give one concrete activity and describe the atmosphere briefly to make it specific.

Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks. Nowadays I often go with friends to exercise, such as jogging or doing yoga, and we also relax under the trees because the atmosphere is peaceful and refreshing.

Gợi ý: Use correct conditional form and be more specific about benefits. Start with a direct answer, then use linking words (for example, because) and give one concrete reason why more parks would help.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they provide safe places for parents to take their children outdoors. For example, parks offer play areas and clean air, which improve children's health and family life.

Gợi ý: Clarify that Disneyland is an amusement park and be precise about what attracts you. Use a linking word to explain why and give one or two specific activities you want to try.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit Disneyland in France because it is a famous theme park. For instance, I want to try the themed rides and watch the parades, which seem very fun and memorable.

× Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. I think it's helped me develop my confidence and green spaces help me connect with nature.

✓ Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. I think it has helped me develop my confidence, and green spaces helped me connect with nature.

Mixes past and present incorrectly. 'loved' is past; refering to its effect on development should use present perfect 'has helped' to link past experience to present state, or past 'helped' if speaking about past. Also parallel verbs: use 'helped' to match past timeframe or 'help' as general truth. Suggestion: use 'has helped' to show past action with present result, and use a comma before conjunction joining two independent clauses.

× Actually, yes, we still going to parks with my friends now we exercise there and nature.

✓ Actually, yes. We still go to parks with my friends now; we exercise there and enjoy nature.

Missing main verb form: 'still going' lacks auxiliary 'are' if present continuous was intended, but 'we still go' (simple present) better fits habitual action. Also run-on sentence: two independent clauses need separation (period or semicolon). Added 'enjoy' before 'nature' to make phrase grammatical.

× We enjoy the nature's great atmosphere.

✓ We enjoy nature's great atmosphere.

Using the definite article 'the' before a possessive noun phrase ('nature's') is incorrect. Either use 'the great atmosphere of nature' or 'nature's great atmosphere'. The corrected version removes 'the' to form a correct possessive construction.

× It would be great if we have more parks in my city.

✓ It would be great if we had more parks in my city.

When expressing a hypothetical present desire with 'would', the conditional clause should use past subjunctive 'had' rather than present 'have'. Use 'If we had' to indicate an unreal or unlikely condition.

× It would help the adults who want to take care of their children in nature and I think it's the most important thing in the cities.

✓ It would help adults who want to take their children to nature, and I think parks are the most important thing in cities.

Awkward phrasing 'take care of their children in nature' and inconsistent subjects. 'Take care of' implies caregiving; 'take their children to nature' or 'take care of their children while in nature' is clearer. Also 'it's the most important thing in the cities' is vague and uses contraction 'it's' referring to parks—better to use plural 'parks are' and 'in cities' (no definite article) for general statement.

× Yes, there's a park in France called Disneyland.

✓ Yes, there's a park in France called Disneyland.

Sentence is grammatical. It correctly uses 'there's' as contraction of 'there is' to introduce a singular noun 'a park'. No correction needed.

× I would really like to go there and enjoy the themed parks.

✓ I would really like to go there and enjoy the themed parks.

Sentence is grammatical. 'Enjoy' correctly follows 'would like to' as the base verb. No correction needed.