Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cevap kısa ve anlaşılır ama karışık zaman kullanımı ve dilbilgisi hataları var. Daha doğal olmak için geçmişten bahsederken net zaman ifadeleri kullanın, gereksiz tekrarları kaldırın ve cümleyi daha akıcı hale getirin. Örneğin, ‘‘I cannot remember’’ yerine ‘‘I don’t remember much’’; ‘‘would rather prefer’’ gibi çifte tercih ifadelerinden kaçının. Ayrıca tek bir ana fikir (parkları sevdiğim/evde oynamayı tercih ettiğim) tutarlı olmalı ve bir veya iki destekleyici detay ekleyin.

Ví dụ: I don’t remember much about my childhood, but I think I enjoyed playing with my friends at the park. However, I usually preferred playing at home because it felt safer and more comfortable.

Gợi ý: Cevap karışık, ilişki hakkında belirsiz ifadeler ve dilbilgisi problemleri var; ayrıca soru yalnızca parklara ilgiyle ilgili olduğu için alakasız detaylar azaltılmalı. Doğrudan soruya yanıt verin (evet/ hayır), ardından kısa bir destekleyici neden verin ve zamanı ve fiil uyumunu doğru kullanın. Gereksiz tekrarları ve belirsiz ifadeleri çıkartın.

Ví dụ: Yes, I still like going to parks sometimes. For example, last week I visited a park with a friend and we had a pleasant walk and talked for hours, which I really enjoyed.

Gợi ý: Cevap net ancak konuşma dolgu sesleri ve dilbilgisi hataları içeriyor (a lots of, making something plates). Cümleleri sadeleştirin, dolgu kelimelerden kaçının ve sebeplerinizi spesifik örneklerle destekleyin. Alternatif tercihlerinizi açıkça belirtin ve nasıl daha yararlı olacağını açıklayın.

Ví dụ: I don’t think we need more parks because our city already has many. Instead, I would like more community workshops, such as cooking or craft classes, because they help people learn new skills and improve the neighbourhood's appearance.

Gợi ý: Cevap kısa ve konuşma dolgu kelimeleri fazla; ayrıca ‘‘adulting’’ gibi gayriresmî terimler sınav için uygun ama yerine daha net ifadeler kullanılabilir. Soruyu doğrudan yanıtlayın ve gelecekte yapmak istediğiniz şeyleri spesifik olarak belirtin; neden parkları tercih etmediğinizi ve hangi etkinlikleri tercih ettiğinizi mantıklı şekilde açıklayın.

Ví dụ: No, I don’t have any particular parks I want to visit. I prefer shopping and meeting friends because I’m busy preparing for university, so I usually spend my free time on practical activities and social events.

× When I was a child, actually I cannot remember, but I think I loved playing with my friends in the park, but I would rather prefer playing with home rather than playing in the park.

✓ When I was a child, I actually cannot remember clearly, but I think I loved playing with my friends in the park; however, I would rather play at home than in the park.

The sentence mixes past and present incorrectly and uses redundant modal phrases. Use 'cannot remember' for present inability, but clarify with 'cannot remember clearly'. 'Would rather prefer' is redundant; use 'would rather' or 'prefer'. Maintain consistent structure: 'play at home than in the park'. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× The fact is in this nowadays I have a boyfriend. Actually he's not my boyfriend, but I think he's love with me. So yeah, yesterday we went a park and talking, talk about something, you know, and it's really fun for me. However, being a boyfriend anymore, that's not boyfriend anymore.

✓ The fact is that nowadays I have a boyfriend. Actually he's not officially my boyfriend, but I think he is in love with me. So yeah, yesterday we went to a park and talked about some things, and it was really fun for me. However, he is not my boyfriend anymore.

Tense and verb forms are incorrect: use present 'have' for current status and 'is' for states. 'He's love' should be 'he is in love'. Use past tense 'went' and 'talked' for the completed action yesterday. Use 'went to a park'. The final sentence needs past reference or correct present perfect; 'he is not my boyfriend anymore' clarifies current status. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× Uh, we have a lots of park in my city so I don't want to see more parks in my city.

✓ Uh, we have a lot of parks in my city, so I don't want to see more parks added.

'A lots of' is incorrect; use 'a lot of' or 'lots of'. 'Park' should be plural 'parks' to match 'a lot of'. Also clarify 'see more parks' by adding 'added' or similar verb. Grammar problem type ID: 1

× Maybe I prefer going to some uh like workshops such as umm like cooking or making something plates or like another tool so it can be more beautiful than the others.

✓ Maybe I prefer going to workshops such as cooking classes or craft workshops where we make plates or other items so they can be more beautiful than ordinary ones.

The sentence misuses gerunds and word choice. 'Making something plates' is ungrammatical; use 'make plates' or 'where we make plates'. 'Another tool' is vague; use 'other items'. Keep 'prefer going to workshops' consistent. Grammar problem type ID: 8

× Actually, no, because uh, I'm not a park person, you know, uh, I love going go to shopping or like meet with my friends because I'm uh, adulting right now. I will go to the university in the future. So I feel like these stuff.

✓ Actually, no, because I'm not a park person. I love going shopping or meeting my friends because I'm an adult now. I will go to university in the future, so I prefer those things.

Verb forms and noun forms are incorrect: 'going go to shopping' should be 'going shopping' or 'going to shop'. 'Meet with my friends' should be 'meeting my friends'. 'Adulting' is informal; use 'I'm an adult now'. 'These stuff' is incorrect; use 'those things' or 'these activities'. Ensure tense: 'I will go to university' is fine for future plans. Grammar problem type ID: 6