Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be clear and grammatical: give a concise topic sentence then a couple of specific supporting details. Correct tense and word choice (e.g., 'when I was a child, around 10 or 11'). Avoid redundancy and keep to 2–4 sentences. Use linking words like 'also' or 'so' to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved going to parks when I was a child. I often went with my mother in the evenings when I was about ten, and we walked there almost every day. It was a place where I could relax and meet friends, which helped me feel happy and calm.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence and correct common errors (e.g., 'I still like going to parks, but I don't go regularly because of a busy schedule'). Be specific about frequency and activities, avoid repetition ('interact, interact'), and replace incorrect words ('bar' → 'park'). Use linking words like 'however' and 'so'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks, but I don't go regularly because I'm quite busy during the week. However, I usually visit a park on weekends for a walk because it helps me relax and also meet other people.

Gợi ý: Start with a direct statement, then give specific reasons. Correct grammar ('the city where I live is very big and crowded') and avoid unclear phrases ('more of most of the people like eldest'). Use linking words such as 'because' and 'for example' to organize reasons and provide one clear example or consequence.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because it is very large and densely populated. More parks would give residents space to relax and exercise; for example, elderly people could spend their evenings walking safely and meeting friends.

Gợi ý: Answer directly, then give a concise and fluent reason. Avoid hesitations ('uh') and redundant words. Use correct phrasing ('there is no specific park I want to visit, but I plan to return to a nearby green park because it's surrounded by trees'). Keep to 2–3 clear sentences.

Ví dụ: Not really — there isn't a particular park I must visit, but I often plan to return to a nearby green park. It is surrounded by trees and feels peaceful, so I hope to go there for walks whenever my schedule allows.

× Yes, definitely when I am youngster young or around 10:50 years my mother.

✓ Yes, definitely when I was a youngster, around ten or eleven years old, I used to go with my mother in the evening.

The sentence uses present tense 'am' but refers to past time; use past tense 'was' (Grammar Problem Type ID 6). Also 'young or around 10:50 years' is unclear and incorrect; express age as 'around ten or eleven years old'. Combine fragments into a single past-tense sentence for clarity.

× With my mother in the evening, I used to go to park everyday for walk.

✓ In the evening, I used to go to the park every day for a walk with my mother.

Missing definite article before 'park' and incorrect spacing in 'everyday'/'every day' (Grammar Problem Type ID 22). Use 'the park' and 'every day' (two words) when meaning each day; add 'a' before 'walk' to indicate one instance.

× It also helped me to come and relax my mind for a while and to socialize with my friends.

✓ It also helped me relax my mind for a while and socialize with my friends.

Use bare infinitive after 'helped' not 'to come and relax' (Grammar Problem Type ID 8). 'Come' is unnecessary; simplify to 'helped me relax' and use parallel structure 'relax and socialize'.

× Still I like to going to parks now but because of busy schedule I do not go in routine to the park but on the weekend days I go to the bar because those walks help me to relax and calm my mind and also help me to interact with, interact and socialise with other people.

✓ I still like going to parks now, but because of a busy schedule I do not go regularly to the park; on weekends I go for walks because they help me relax and calm my mind and help me socialize with other people.

Incorrect use 'to going' should be 'going' (Grammar Problem Type ID 8). 'In routine' is incorrect; use 'regularly'. 'Weekend days' -> 'weekends'. 'Go to the bar' is likely wrong contextually; changed to 'go for walks'. Removed repetition and improved parallel structure.

× Yes definitely I like to see more parks in my city because the city where I am live is very big city and full of crowd mostly.

✓ Yes, definitely I would like to see more parks in my city because the city where I live is very big and mostly crowded.

Use 'would like' for preference and correct present tense 'where I live' not 'where I am live' (Grammar Problem Type ID 27). 'Very big city' should be 'very big' or 'a very big city' and 'full of crowd mostly' is ungrammatical; use 'mostly crowded'.

× More of most of the people like eldest in the evening time spend much of their time in the parks by interacting with other people.

✓ Many people in the evenings spend much of their time in parks interacting with others.

'More of most of the people like eldest' is incorrect quantifier and word choice (Grammar Problem Type ID 14). Use 'many people' and 'in the evenings' and simplify phrase to 'spend much of their time in parks interacting with others'.

× No, there is not any specific kind of park that I want to visit in the future, but the park in my city is very, uh, green, Evergreen and surrounded, uh, fully surrounded of trees.

✓ No, there is not any specific park that I want to visit in the future, but the parks in my city are very green and fully surrounded by trees.

'Not any specific kind of park' is wordy; 'not any specific park' is cleaner. 'Evergreen' capitalized and repeated filler 'uh' removed. Use 'surrounded by trees' not 'surrounded of trees' (Grammar Problem Type ID 3 and 11). Also match plural 'parks in my city are' if speaking generally.

× I from my busy schedule, I want to go there for walking.

✓ Despite my busy schedule, I want to go there for walks.

Use 'despite' for contrast not 'I from my busy schedule' (Grammar Problem Type ID 11). 'For walking' is awkward; use 'for walks' or 'to walk'. Improved sentence structure for clarity (also relates to sentence structure errors ID 26).