Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make the answer grammatically correct and more natural: use past tense consistently, begin with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Use linking words for coherence and keep it under five sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved going to parks when I was a child. I often went in the evenings because many of my friends would meet there, so we played games and talked together. As a result, the park was one of my favorite places to relax after school.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and use consistent tense and concise linking words. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No and brief reason), then add one specific detail (when or how often) and avoid repetition.

Ví dụ: Not really. At the moment I am very busy with my studies and part-time work, so I rarely have time to visit parks. Also, the hot weather lately makes outdoor activities less comfortable.

Gợi ý: Make the benefits clear and use accurate vocabulary and linking words. Start with a direct opinion, then give two specific reasons using correct phrasing (e.g., improve air quality, reduce eye strain) and avoid vague expressions.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would. More parks would improve air quality by increasing green space, and they would also provide pleasant areas to relax. For example, spending time among plants can reduce eye strain and help people feel less stressed.

Gợi ý: Be clear whether you want to visit a specific park or not. If you mention improvements, explain them with concrete details and correct vocabulary. Keep it short and use linking words to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: I don't have a particular park in mind, but I would like to visit parks that include modern facilities in the future. For instance, parks with electronic charging stations, shaded seating with fans, and smart benches would make visits more comfortable.

× When I was a child, I like going to parks in the evening.

✓ When I was a child, I liked going to parks in the evening.

The sentence refers to a past time ('When I was a child') so the main verb should be in the past tense. 'Like' is present tense; change to 'liked' to match the past context. Suggestion: Use past simple for habitual actions in the past: 'I liked going to parks.'

× This is because there were many friends and I can spend my evening time in the park.

✓ This was because there were many friends and I could spend my evenings in the park.

The sentence continues a past description so both clauses should be in the past. 'This is' should be 'This was'; 'can' should be past modal 'could'. Also 'evening time' is awkward; 'evenings' is more natural for repeated events. Suggestion: Keep tense consistent and use plural 'evenings' for habitual actions.

× No, nowadays because I'm busy in my study and my work, so I didn't have time go to the parks again.

✓ No. Nowadays I'm busy with my studies and my work, so I don't have time to go to the parks anymore.

The student mixes present and past incorrectly. 'Nowadays' requires present tense: 'I'm busy' is correct, but 'didn't have' should be present 'don't have'. Also use 'busy with my studies' and 'time to go' (include 'to'). 'Again' is better as 'anymore' in negative present context. Suggestion: Maintain present tense when talking about current situations and use correct collocations: 'busy with my studies' and 'time to go'.

× However, I didn't go to parks because now the weather is very hot.

✓ However, I don't go to parks now because the weather is very hot.

The sentence mixes past negative 'didn't go' with 'now' and present reason. Use present simple 'don't go' to match 'now'. Also omit 'very' if not necessary, but it's acceptable; keep 'the weather is very hot.' Suggestion: Keep tense consistent with time adverbials: 'now' -> present tense.

× Yes, I like to see more parks in my city because can new the oxygen and maybe will protect our eyes because green plants will make our eyes relax and will not feel so tired.

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they can produce fresh oxygen and may protect our eyes; green plants help our eyes relax and make them feel less tired.

Multiple errors: 'I like to see' is better as 'I would like to see' for preference; 'can new the oxygen' is incorrect word choice and structure — use 'can produce fresh oxygen'. 'Maybe will protect' is awkward: use modal 'may' or 'can'. Use plural subject 'they' referring to parks. Avoid repeating 'will' unnecessarily and use present simple for general truths: 'green plants help our eyes relax.' Suggestion: Use appropriate modals (would like, may/can) and correct verbs for production ('produce') and general truths in present simple.

× I think no, but I wish the part in the future will have some technology such as electronic chair, maybe some fan and also.

✓ I don't think so, but I wish parks in the future would have some technology such as electronic chairs and maybe fans.

'I think no' is unnatural; use 'I don't think so.' 'The part' is a typo for 'the park' or plural 'parks'; context suggests 'parks'. Use conditional/wish structure: 'I wish parks in the future would have...' instead of 'will have'. 'Electronic chair' should be plural and 'fan' plural. Remove trailing 'and also.' Suggestion: Use natural negative opinions ('I don't think so'), correct nouns ('park/parks'), and proper wish modal 'would' for hypothetical future desires.