Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more grammatically accurate and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, avoid repetition, and add one specific supporting detail. Use linking words if you add a reason.

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child because they were fun places to play with my friends. For example, we often raced on the grass and climbed the jungle gym, which made afternoons exciting and memorable.

Gợi ý: Use correct tense and word forms, avoid repetition, and keep answers concise (max 5 sentences). Provide one clear reason with a specific example and use linking words (for example, because/so/therefore).

Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because they are peaceful places to catch up with friends. For instance, we often sit by the lake and talk for an hour, which helps me relax after a busy week.

Gợi ý: Answer the question directly first (whether you want more parks), then give a specific reason and avoid unnecessary repetition. Use correct prepositions and plural/singular forms.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because green spaces improve residents' health and community life. For example, a new park within walking distance would give families a safe place for exercise and weekend picnics.

Gợi ý: Be specific about the park and focus on clear reasons without filler words. Use linking words and give one concrete detail about the activities you expect to do.

Ví dụ: Yes, I plan to visit the Rock Garden Park in Chandigarh because it has unique sculptures and open spaces. For example, I want to join the guided tour and try the paddle boats on the lake.

× Yes, I prefer to go parks in my childhood because it makes me feel entertained and it helps to explore many feelings with my friends.

✓ Yes, I preferred going to parks in my childhood because it made me feel entertained and helped me explore many feelings with my friends.

Problems: tense and verb form. 'Prefer' should be past 'preferred' to match 'in my childhood'; 'to go parks' is incorrect: use 'going to parks' or 'go to parks'; 'it makes me' should be past 'it made me' for consistency; 'helps to explore many feelings' should be 'helped me explore many feelings'. Suggestion: keep past tense throughout when talking about childhood and use 'going to parks' or 'go to parks' with correct preposition.

× Yes, in my adult age I also prefer to go park because by going park I can share my all feelings with my friends and spend some quality of time with my friends and also we together spend time in my many.

✓ Yes, as an adult I also prefer going to parks because by going to parks I can share all my feelings with my friends and spend some quality time with them; we also spend time together in many places.

Problems: word choice and prepositions. 'in my adult age' -> 'as an adult'; 'prefer to go park' -> 'prefer going to parks' or 'prefer to go to parks'; 'by going park' -> 'by going to parks'; 'share my all feelings' -> 'share all my feelings'; 'spend some quality of time' -> 'spend some quality time'; 'we together spend time in my many' is ungrammatical; likely meant 'we also spend time together in many places' or 'often spend time together'. Suggestion: use correct prepositions ('to parks'), natural word order ('all my feelings'), and simpler phrasing.

× Yes, there are many parks in my city, but mostly I prefer to go Greenwood Park because it is near to my hometown where I situated.

✓ Yes, there are many parks in my city, but I usually prefer to go to Greenwood Park because it is near my hometown where I live.

Problems: preposition and verb choice. 'prefer to go Greenwood Park' -> need 'go to Greenwood Park'; 'near to my hometown' -> 'near my hometown' (omit 'to'); 'where I situated' is wrong: use 'where I live' or 'where I am situated' though 'live' is natural. Suggestion: use 'go to' for places, omit unnecessary 'to' after 'near', and use appropriate verbs for location ('live').

× It is only 5 kilometer away from my hometown.

✓ It is only 5 kilometers away from my hometown.

Problem: singular/plural agreement with units. Use plural 'kilometers' for numbers greater than one. Suggestion: make measurement units plural after numerals (5 kilometers).

× Yes, there is one major park in Chandigarh which I have to go in future.

✓ Yes, there is one major park in Chandigarh that I want to go to in the future.

Problems: modal/phrase choice and preposition. 'which I have to go in future' sounds like obligation; likely intended 'I want to go in the future'. Also need 'go to' for the park and article 'the' before 'future'. Suggestion: use 'want to go to in the future' for intention.

× I want to go in future because, uh, there are many kind of activities and there are many kinds of rides which I want to enjoy.

✓ I want to go in the future because there are many kinds of activities and many kinds of rides that I want to enjoy.

Problems: quantifier and plural forms. 'many kind of activities' should be 'many kinds of activities' or 'many kinds of activity' (prefer former); redundancy 'there are many kinds of rides which I want to enjoy' is fine but needs 'that' for clarity. Suggestion: use 'kinds of' followed by plural noun and include 'the' if referring to a specific future time ('in the future').