Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct grammar; begin with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetitions and filler words, and add one specific supporting detail using a linking word. Correct tense and article use (e.g., 'the park', 'to reduce my stress' → 'to relax').

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved going to the park as a child. I often played there with my friends and sometimes walked around the lake to relax, which helped me forget school worries.

Gợi ý: Improve grammar (subject-verb agreement) and sentence structure; use linking words and limit to 2–3 sentences. Replace vague phrases with specific benefits and correct awkward expressions.

Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy parks. I walk there every morning because it improves my fitness and helps me feel connected to nature, so visiting the park has become an important part of my daily routine.

Gợi ý: Start with a direct answer, then give two clear reasons using linking words. Correct grammar and phrasing (e.g., 'they are playgrounds' and 'a place for relaxation after studying'). Be specific about benefits.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would. Parks provide green space where people can relax and connect with nature, and they also serve as safe playgrounds where children can exercise and unwind after studying.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence and one or two specific reasons; avoid repetition and incorrect word choices ('newspaper that I find', 'historical size'). Use linking words to connect ideas and correct collocations ('historic sites', 'natural scenery').

Ví dụ: Yes, I'd like to visit Kung Fu National Park next year. I read about it in a newspaper and it sounds fascinating because it has many historic sites and beautiful natural scenery that I'd like to explore.

× I used to enjoy going to the park as a child to I I often went there to play with my friends or walked around the lake to reduce my stress.

✓ I used to enjoy going to the park as a child. I often went there to play with my friends or to walk around the lake to reduce my stress.

Original contains run-on and repeated words ('to I I') and inconsistent verb forms. Split into two sentences, remove repetition, and use parallel infinitive forms ('to play' and 'to walk') for clarity and grammatical consistency.

× I walk to the park every day in the early morning.

✓ I walk to the park every morning.

Sentence is grammatical but wordy; 'every morning' is more natural. Keeps present simple for habitual action.

× This not only help me improve my strength, but also, uh, help me be harmonious with nature is become an indispensable part of my daily.

✓ This not only helps me improve my strength, but also helps me feel connected with nature and has become an indispensable part of my daily routine.

Subject 'This' is singular, so verbs require third-person singular ('helps'). Original used incorrect verb forms and contained a fragment ('is become') and awkward phrasing. Use parallel verbs ('helps... helps') and correct participle 'has become' plus noun 'routine'.

× Yes honestly parks are public places that help people stay connected with nature and it also the playground for children to play together and healing after a hard study.

✓ Yes, honestly, parks are public places that help people stay connected with nature, and they are also playgrounds where children can play together and recover after hard study.

Missing commas and articles; 'it also the playground' is ungrammatical. 'Parks' plural needs plural noun 'playgrounds' and plural pronoun 'they'. Use 'where' to introduce relative clause and 'recover' or 'relax' instead of 'healing' for natural English.

× In the near future, I'd like to visit Kung Fu National Park. I first saw it on a newspaper, on a newspaper that I find. It's so interesting and appealing to me. It has a lot of historical size and natural places that I really would like to come and visit.

✓ In the near future, I'd like to visit Kung Fu National Park. I first read about it in a newspaper. It's very interesting and appealing to me. It has many historical sites and natural areas that I would really like to visit.

Use 'read about it in a newspaper' rather than 'saw it on a newspaper'. Remove repetition. Replace 'size' with 'sites' and 'natural places' with 'natural areas'. Use natural collocations 'many' and 'would like to visit'.