Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make the answer more natural and grammatically correct; give one clear topic sentence then a brief specific detail. Avoid filler sounds and infinitive errors (use 'going to parks' or 'visiting parks'). Keep it to 1–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved visiting parks as a child. During summer vacations my family and I spent afternoons there, playing games and having picnics under the trees.

Gợi ý: Use correct verb forms and clearer sentence structure. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add specific supporting details with linking words (for example, 'because' or 'so'). Reduce repetition and avoid tense inconsistency.

Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks, especially for early morning walks. I go there because I like the fresh air and the sound of birds, which helps me feel relaxed and energetic for the day.

Gợi ý: Give a concise reasoned answer with specific examples and smoother linking words. Avoid hesitations and fragmented phrases. Use plural/singular agreement and clearer connectors like 'because' and 'for example'.

Ví dụ: Yes, definitely — cities need more parks because they improve air quality and give residents a place to relax. For example, in dense urban areas surrounded by buildings, parks provide trees that reduce pollution and offer space for exercise and family activities.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and name the park clearly, then give a specific reason why you want to visit. Remove fillers and vague statements. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so that' to connect your reason.

Ví dụ: Yes. I would like to visit the big national park near Jaipur because it has extensive wildlife and scenic trails. I want to see the animals and take long walks in nature that I can’t find in small city parks.

× Uh, in summer vacations I really enjoyed to going parks when I I was a child.

✓ Uh, in summer vacations I really enjoyed going to parks when I was a child.

The verb 'enjoy' should be followed by the gerund (verb + -ing), not 'to' plus a verb. Also 'going parks' needs the preposition 'to' before 'parks'. Remove the duplicated 'I'. Suggestion: use 'enjoyed going to parks'.

× Yes of course I love to going park early in the morning for my morning walk.

✓ Yes, of course I love going to the park early in the morning for my walk.

After 'love' use the gerund 'going', not 'to going'. Also use the definite article 'the' for a specific place 'the park' and add 'to' before 'the park'. 'My morning walk' can be shortened to 'my walk' or left as 'my morning walk' for clarity. Suggestion: 'I love going to the park early in the morning for my walk.'

× I really enjoyed the walk in park to see trees and sounds of birds.

✓ I really enjoy walks in the park to see the trees and hear the sounds of birds.

Context is present preference, so use present tense 'enjoy'. Use plural 'walks' or 'a walk' and include the article 'the' before 'park'. 'Sounds of birds' is better expressed as 'hear the sounds of birds'—use verb 'hear'. Also include 'the' before 'trees'. Suggestion: 'I really enjoy walks in the park to see the trees and hear the birds.'

× Uh, the parks are essential for every town or cities, especially in the urban area.

✓ Uh, parks are essential for every town and city, especially in urban areas.

Mixing singular and plural ('town or cities') is incorrect. Use parallel forms: 'every town and city' or 'towns and cities'. 'In the urban area' should be plural or general: 'in urban areas'. Suggestion: 'Parks are essential for every town and city, especially in urban areas.'

× Uh, old build, umm, all buildings are all round our so we cannot get the clean air, uh, but in the park we can.

✓ Many old buildings surround us, so we cannot get clean air, but in the park we can.

Original is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Old build' is not a noun phrase; use 'old buildings'. 'All round our' should be 'surround us' or 'are all around us'. 'Get the clean air' should be 'get clean air' (no 'the'). Rearranged for clarity and correct subject-verb agreement. Suggestion: 'Many old buildings surround us, so we cannot get clean air, but in the park we can.' },{