Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cải thiện ngữ pháp thì quá khứ (used to/liked), loại bỏ lặp từ và làm câu tự nhiên hơn. Thêm thông tin cụ thể ngắn gọn (ví dụ: hoạt động bạn làm ở công viên) và dùng liên từ đơn giản để mạch lạc.

Ví dụ: Yes, I used to enjoy going to the park when I was a child. I often played on the swings and had picnics with my family, which made those visits very memorable.

Gợi ý: Sửa cấu trúc câu phủ định và giải thích lý do rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ (now, time). Nên dùng một hoặc hai câu ngắn gọn: chủ đề + lý do cụ thể (study workload).

Ví dụ: Not really. I don't have much free time now because I'm in my final year at university and my studies keep me very busy, so I rarely visit parks these days.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời mơ hồ và có nhiều lỗi từ vựng/ cấu trúc. Nên nói rõ lý do cụ thể (giải trí, không khí trong lành, không gian cho gia đình) và dùng liên từ (because, so) để mạch lạc. Dùng danh từ/động từ đúng (parks, help → benefit).

Ví dụ: Yes, I would. More parks would improve air quality and provide pleasant places for people to relax, exercise and meet friends, which is important in busy modern life.

Gợi ý: Loại bỏ số không cần thiết và sửa cấu trúc (enjoy + gerund). Nên nêu tên cụ thể nếu có, và thêm một chi tiết ngắn về lý do (ví dụ: atmosphere, activities). Giữ 1-2 câu rõ ràng.

Ví dụ: In the future I'd like to visit Tao Dan Park in Ho Chi Minh City because I enjoy hanging out with friends there; the park's calm atmosphere would be perfect for chatting and relaxing.

× Yes, I really like going to park when I was when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I really liked going to parks when I was a child.

The sentence mixes present tense 'like' with past time reference 'when I was a child'. Change to past tense 'liked'. Also 'going to park' needs plural or article: 'going to parks' or 'going to the park'. Remove duplicate 'when I was'. Suggestion: use past simple for past habits and correct noun phrase. Grammar problem type ID:6

× No, I don't like going to the park now because now I'm a final year student at university and I don't have a time to spend time go to the park.

✓ No, I don't like going to the park now because I'm a final-year university student and I don't have time to go there.

Redundant 'now' can be used once. 'I'm a final year student at university' is better as 'I'm a final-year university student'. 'I don't have a time' is wrong; use 'I don't have time' (uncountable). 'spend time go to the park' is ungrammatical; use 'to go there' or 'to spend time at the park'. Maintain present simple since this refers to current situation. Grammar problem type ID:6

× Yes, I really like to see more park in my city because in the modern life a more and more part make people to to help.

✓ Yes, I would really like to see more parks in my city because in modern life parks help people.

Use 'would like' to express desire politely. 'more park' should be plural 'more parks'. 'in the modern life' is unnatural; use 'in modern life'. The phrase 'a more and more part make people to to help' is ungrammatical: likely meant 'parks increasingly help people' or 'parks play an increasingly important role in helping people'. Simplify to 'parks help people'. Grammar problem type ID:22

× In the future I would like to visit a park in Ho Chi Minh City because I enjoy 2 hanging out with my friends and can a conversation with them.

✓ In the future I would like to visit a park in Ho Chi Minh City because I enjoy hanging out with my friends and having conversations with them.

Remove stray '2'. Use gerund 'hanging out' after 'enjoy'. 'can a conversation with them' is incorrect: use 'having conversations with them' or 'talking with them'. Keep parallel gerund forms for both activities. Grammar problem type ID:4