Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Use correct tense and reduce repetition. Connect ideas with simple linking words (for example, “because” or “so”).

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child because they helped me feel better and refreshed. For example, whenever I was upset my parents would take me to a nearby park where I could play and calm down.

Gợi ý: Answer directly then add one or two clear details. Avoid filler words and repeated phrases. Use present simple correctly and include a linking word like “so” or “because” to explain why you go. Mention frequency with correct phrases (e.g., “every day”).

Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks. I go there almost every day because it helps me relax, and I often meet friends there to walk or chat in my free time.

Gợi ý: Give a clear opinion first, then support it with one specific reason or example. Use correct singular/plural forms and keep sentences short. Avoid unclear phrases and names unless they are accurate. Use linking words like “because” or “for example.”

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because parks provide safe places for children to play. For example, the nearby park is always full of families and children, which shows how useful parks are.

Gợi ý: Be specific and coherent: name one park or city and explain why you want to visit it. Use future tense correctly and avoid contradictions. Keep to two or three sentences and use linking words like “because” or “so” to explain motives.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit parks in London in the future because they are famous for their beautiful gardens and large green spaces. For instance, I hope to visit Hyde Park to walk around the lake and see the flowerbeds.

× Yes, obviously when I was child I went the park and in my childhood, because it keeps refreshment for me and my mother and my father.

✓ Yes, obviously when I was a child I went to the park during my childhood because it was refreshing for me and for my parents.

Missing article 'a' before 'child' and missing preposition 'to' before 'the park' are sentence structure and article errors; 'keeps refreshment' is incorrect collocation and tense — use 'was refreshing'. Suggestion: include appropriate articles, use 'went to' for visiting places, and choose natural verbs (be+adjective) to describe feelings.

× When, when I cry, when I cried, this moment my, my parents, my parents went to the park.

✓ When I cried, my parents took me to the park at that moment.

Mixed tenses and awkward phrasing: 'When I cry, when I cried' is inconsistent; use simple past 'When I cried' to match 'went'. 'This moment' is ungrammatical; use 'at that moment'. Also 'went to the park' should be refined to 'took me to the park' to show purpose. Suggestion: keep consistent past tense and use clear temporal phrases.

× Yes, obviously now, uh, in my, in my time now I, I go to everyday, uh, in, in the park because I, I give refreshment here in so much uh, when, uh, when I spend my free time this time, uh, I call uh, I call my friends and going to the park and.

✓ Yes, obviously now I go to the park every day because it refreshes me a lot. When I have free time, I call my friends and we go to the park together.

Problems include incorrect adverb placement ('go to everyday' should be 'go ... every day'), wrong verb form 'give refreshment' (use 'refreshes me'), and incorrect gerund structure 'I call my friends and going' (should be 'and we go'). Suggestion: use correct adverb placement, correct verb forms, and parallel structure for coordinated verbs.

× Yes, in my city I have a lots of parks in the in the here in my in my house near the parks such as name is major till the parks.

✓ Yes, in my city I have a lot of parks near my house; one of the main parks is called Major Park.

Incorrect quantifier 'a lots of' should be 'a lot of' or 'lots of'; overly repeated words and unclear naming. Also 'parks' vs singular 'park' when naming one. Suggestion: use correct quantifiers and singular/plural consistently and state park names clearly.

× It's a very wonderful parks that every child going here and and he played their mom.

✓ It's a very wonderful park where every child comes to play with their mothers.

Pronoun use errors: 'parks' should be singular 'park' to match 'It's'; 'that every child going here' lacks verb and relative clause structure — use 'where every child comes to play'. 'he played their mom' mixes genders and pronouns; use neutral 'their mothers'. Suggestion: ensure noun-pronoun agreement and proper relative clause verbs.

× He played in the parks in everyday.

✓ He plays in the park every day.

Tense mismatch: 'played' (past) conflicts with 'everyday' (habitual). Use present simple 'plays' for habitual actions. Also use 'park' singular if referring to one. 'Every day' is two words for frequency. Suggestion: use present simple for routines and correct 'every day' spacing.

× Yes, obviously in my future I will go to the London sparks such as it's United Kingdom parks.

✓ Yes, in the future I will go to the parks in London, in the United Kingdom.

Awkward word 'sparks' is likely 'parks'; incorrect article 'the London parks' can be 'parks in London'. Maintain future tense 'I will go'. Suggestion: use correct noun 'parks' and natural prepositional phrase 'parks in London'.

× It is a very beautiful parks actually in my country.

✓ There are many very beautiful parks in my country.

Mismatch: 'It is' (singular) followed by 'parks' (plural). Use plural subject 'There are' or make noun singular. Suggestion: match verb number to noun number and use natural expressions for quantity.

× I I have a lots of parks here, but I didn't like this park, but I will like this park in London parks.

✓ I have a lot of parks here, but I don't like this park; I will like the parks in London.

Tense inconsistency: 'I have' (present) vs 'I didn't like' (past) and 'I will like' (future) are mixed without context. If contrasting present dislike and future preference, use present 'I don't like this park' and future 'I will like the parks in London'. Also fix quantifier 'a lots of' -> 'a lot of'. Suggestion: maintain consistent tense for contrast and correct quantifiers.

× So I like.

✓ So I would like to visit them.

Fragment: 'So I like.' is incomplete and unclear. It needs an object or clearer verb phrase. Suggestion: complete the sentence with what is liked or desired, e.g., 'I would like to visit them.'