Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more direct and concise: start with a clear topic sentence answering the question, then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid fillers (uh, um) and grammatical mistakes (use past tense consistently). Use linking words for coherence (for example, 'because' or 'so').

Ví dụ: Not really. I preferred staying at home because my hometown didn’t have many good parks. For example, there was only one small playground and it was often crowded, so I spent my free time playing video games, watching films, or reading books.

Gợi ý: Answer directly, use correct grammar and reduce repetition. Give a clear reason and one brief example. Use linking words like 'because' or 'however' to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: Not really. I still prefer staying at home because I’m an introvert and I enjoy watching movies there. However, I sometimes visit a nearby park for a short walk when I want fresh air.

Gợi ý: Be specific about your opinion and avoid repeating the same point. Start with a clear sentence (Yes/No/Maybe), then explain why and give a concrete example of what you would like to see in new parks.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because green spaces improve air quality and provide places to relax. For instance, I would like parks with benches, walking paths and flower beds where I can take short walks on weekends.

Gợi ý: Give a clear, grammatically correct response with specific plans and use correct tenses. Mention one or two parks and explain why you want to visit them, using linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I plan to visit the Botanical Garden and Rosemary Park in Chandigarh because I’ve heard they have beautiful plants and peaceful paths. I hope to go there on a weekend trip to enjoy the scenery and take photos.

× To be honest, I prefer staying home and playing indoor games like video games and watching some movies and reading books.

✓ To be honest, I prefer staying at home and playing indoor games like video games, watching movies, and reading books.

Use the preposition 'at' with 'home' in this context and list items with commas for parallel structure. Also 'some movies' is unnecessary; 'watching movies' is more natural. Improve by using parallel gerund forms and correct preposition: 'staying at home, playing..., watching..., and reading...'.

× Uh, the one reason is also that there were uh, in my hometown there is not nice parks.

✓ One reason is that in my hometown there are not many nice parks.

This sentence has article and number issues. Use 'one reason' (no 'the'), correct subject-verb agreement with plural 'parks' so 'there are'. Use 'many' to quantify countable plural 'parks' and place adjectives in normal order: 'many nice parks'. Also remove filler words.

× Actually I prefer staying home and been some movies so I don't really like going to parks now as one reason is also that I'm type of introvert, I like to stay home.

✓ Actually, I prefer staying at home and watching movies, so I don't really like going to parks now. One reason is that I'm the type of person who is introverted; I like to stay home.

Multiple problems: 'been some movies' is ungrammatical—use 'watching movies' (gerund). Add comma before 'so'. 'I'm type of introvert' needs article and noun: 'I'm the type of person who is introverted' or 'I'm an introvert'. Break into two sentences for clarity and correct word order.

× Maybe I would like to see more parks in my city, but in my hometown there is not much parks, uh, but in my free time I go for a walk and view some uh, sceneries, greenery, etcetera.

✓ Maybe I would like to see more parks in my city, but in my hometown there are not many parks. In my free time I go for walks and enjoy the scenery and greenery.

Use plural agreement 'there are' with 'parks' and quantifier 'many' for countable nouns. 'Not much parks' is incorrect. Use 'go for walks' (plural) or 'go for a walk' and 'enjoy the scenery' (scenery is uncountable; 'sceneries' is wrong). Remove filler words and 'etcetera' for conciseness.

× Yeah, I surely try visit more parks in future like Botanical Garden, Rosemary Parks which is located in Chandigarh which is far away from my house but I definitely visit it in my weekends.

✓ Yeah, I will certainly try to visit more parks in the future, like the Botanical Garden and Rosemary Park, which are located in Chandigarh, which is far from my house, but I will definitely visit them on weekends.

Use future tense 'will try to visit' and include 'the' for specific places. 'Rosemary Parks' likely singular 'Rosemary Park'; ensure noun agreement: 'are located' if referring to multiple parks or 'is located' for one; here treat both as parks so use 'are' and 'them'. Use 'in the future' and 'on weekends'. Add infinitive 'to visit'. Correct pronoun agreement and article usage.