Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words, use correct tense and articles, and give one or two specific supporting details linked logically. Focus on natural phrasing and correct grammar.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoyed going to parks as a child. I often relaxed on the grass and had picnics with my family, which made those visits fun and memorable.

Gợi ý: Give a clear direct answer first, use correct tense, and provide a specific reason with a linking word (because/so) to make it coherent. Avoid repetition and filler sounds.

Ví dụ: I used to go regularly, but I don't visit parks much now because I am studying for exams and have less free time.

Gợi ý: Avoid abrupt negatives; consider nuance. If you mean you do not want more parks, explain why with clear, specific reasons and use correct grammar (e.g., "I don't want to see more parks" or "I don't mind"). Provide an alternative or suggestion to show depth.

Ví dụ: I don't think we need many more parks in my city because the existing ones are underused and often poorly maintained. Instead, I would prefer improving current parks by adding facilities like benches and play areas.

Gợi ý: Answer directly, use future tense properly, and give a specific reason and detail about which park or what interests you there. Use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect ideas and avoid vague phrases.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit a new park that recently opened near the river because it has modern walking trails and a lake, which would be nice for relaxing and photography.

× Yes, I like, I'm good with the park because it's, uh, good and I relaxing on park and eating a lot of food.

✓ Yes, I liked going to parks. I enjoyed the park because it was pleasant, and I relaxed in the park and ate a lot of food.

Errors: tense and verb form confusion and sentence structure. The student mixes present simple (I like), present continuous (I'm good with), and a non-finite form without auxiliary (I relaxing). Suggestion: Use a consistent past tense when talking about childhood (liked, enjoyed, relaxed, ate). Use correct verb forms: 'relaxed' (past tense) not 'relaxing', and include preposition 'in the park'. Also combine ideas into clearer clauses.

× Yeah, for now, uh, now I'm not going to parks because, umm, in the past, I, I went to the park and now I'm not, I'm not going to the park because I'm learning.

✓ At the moment I don't go to parks because in the past I used to go to the park, but now I don't because I am studying.

Errors: inconsistent tense and awkward phrasing. 'I'm not going to parks' can be understood but is better as 'I don't go to parks' for habitual present. 'In the past I, I went' should be 'in the past I used to go' to indicate a past habit. 'I'm learning' is understandable but 'I am studying' is more natural in this context. Keep tense consistent and use 'used to' for past habits.

× No, I don't like see more parks in my country because I've been already seen the parks in my country and it's very boring.

✓ No, I don't want to see more parks in my country because I have already seen the parks here and they are very boring.

Errors: incorrect verb form 'don't like see' should be 'don't want to see' or 'don't like to see'; present perfect misuse 'I've been already seen' is incorrect — use 'I have already seen'. Also pronoun/subject agreement 'it's very boring' should be 'they are very boring' because 'parks' is plural. Use correct verb patterns: 'want to' + base verb, and 'have seen' for experiences.

× In future, yes, because I see more parks. I will go to the park because it's a new park in my country and we don't see the park before.

✓ In the future, yes. I have seen many parks, and I will go to that park because it will be a new park in my country and we haven't seen it before.

Errors: tense mismatch and wrong verb forms. 'In future' should be 'In the future'. 'I see more parks' is unclear — use present perfect 'I have seen many parks' for experience. 'We don't see the park before' is wrong; use present perfect negative 'we haven't seen it before' to indicate lack of prior experience. Use 'will' for future action (I will go) and 'will be' if referring to something becoming new. Maintain consistent and correct tense usage.