Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you like going to parks as a child?

Thí sinh

Do you like going to park as a child?

Giám khảo

Do you still like going to parks now?

Thí sinh

No. Umm. I'm home.

Giám khảo

Would you like to see more parks in your city?

Thí sinh

My city is North Park.

Giám khảo

Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?

Thí sinh

Nickelodeon move on Top teeth Urban Company the park in. Singapore city. Uh, Singapore country.

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you like going to parks as a child?

Điểm: 20.0

Gợi ý: ปรับประโยคให้ตอบตรงคำถามโดยเริ่มด้วยประโยคหัวข้อ แล้วตามด้วยรายละเอียดสั้น ๆ และเชื่อมด้วยคำเชื่อม เช่น 'because' หรือ 'and'. ควรแก้ไวยากรณ์ (tense และ article) และหลีกเลี่ยงการถามกลับผู้สัมภาษณ์ เมื่อไม่เข้าใจ ให้พูดว่า 'Sorry, could you repeat?' แทนการย้อนคำถาม

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoyed going to parks as a child because they had big playgrounds and I could play with my friends. I especially liked the swings and slides, and we often had picnics there on weekends.

Do you still like going to parks now?

Điểm: 15.0

Gợi ý: ตอบให้ชัดเจนและขยายเหตุผลสั้น ๆ โดยใช้ประโยคเชื่อม เช่น 'but' หรือ 'because' เพื่อทำให้คำตอบเป็นธรรมชาติและมีเนื้อหา หลีกเลี่ยงคำตอบสั้นเกินไปหรือไม่เกี่ยวข้องกับคำถาม

Ví dụ: Not really, because I prefer staying at home to relax after work. However, I sometimes visit nearby parks on weekends for a short walk or to meet friends.

Would you like to see more parks in your city?

Điểm: 25.0

Gợi ý: ตอบตรงคำถามโดยเริ่มด้วยประโยคหัวข้อว่าอยากหรือไม่อยาก แล้วให้เหตุผลและตัวอย่างสั้น ๆ ใช้คำเชื่อมเช่น 'because' หรือ 'so' เพื่อความลื่นไหล และหลีกเลี่ยงการให้ข้อมูลที่ไม่เกี่ยวกับความเห็นโดยตรง

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because we need more green spaces for exercise and relaxation. For example, new parks near residential areas would make it easier for families to spend time outdoors.

Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?

Điểm: 10.0

Gợi ý: ตอบให้ชัดเจนว่ามีหรือไม่มี และระบุชื่อสถานที่อย่างถูกต้องพร้อมเหตุผลสั้น ๆ ใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อจัดระเบียบข้อมูล หากไม่แน่ใจชื่อ ให้อธิบายลักษณะของสวนแทน และฝึกออกเสียงชื่อสถานที่ล่วงหน้า

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit Gardens by the Bay in Singapore because it looks very modern and has beautiful plant displays. I think it would be interesting to see the Supertree Grove and the flower domes in person.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect tense and subject mismatch

× Do you like going to park as a child?

✓ Did you like going to parks as a child?

The examiner asked about past habit, so past tense 'Did' is required rather than 'Do'. Also 'park' needs plural or an article; 'parks' is natural for general habit. Use past simple for past routines: 'Did you like...' Suggestions: Use past simple for past habits and ensure plural or correct article with countable nouns.

Incorrect tense and context mismatch

× No. Umm. I'm home.

✓ No. Umm. I usually stay at home now.

The examiner asked about current liking of parks. 'I'm home' describes location, not preference. Use present simple for habits: 'I usually stay at home now' or 'No, I don't go to parks now.' Suggestions: Match sentence to question: use present simple for current habits and express preference clearly.

Article and noun identification error

× My city is North Park.

✓ I live in North Park.

The question asked whether the student would like more parks in their city. Saying 'My city is North Park' is odd; use 'I live in North Park' or 'My city is called North Park.' Also use preposition 'in' for living in a place. Suggestions: Use 'I live in [place]' or 'My city is called [name]'.

Sentence structure and word order errors

× Nickelodeon move on Top teeth Urban Company the park in. Singapore city. Uh, Singapore country.

✓ There is a Nickelodeon-themed park in Singapore city called 'Top Teeth Urban Company', and I would like to visit it in the future.

The original is a fragmented, ungrammatical string of words with incorrect word order and missing verbs. Begin with 'There is' to introduce existence of the park, use proper noun order, and a verb phrase 'I would like to visit it' to answer the future preference question. Suggestions: Use complete sentences with subject and verb, organize place name correctly, and use 'There is/are' to mention existence of places.

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