Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more fluent and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repetitions and filler words. Use past tense consistently when talking about childhood and mention a brief reason or memory to enrich the answer.

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. My father often took me there on weekends, and I enjoyed playing on the swings and feeding ducks in the pond, which made those visits special.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and clearly, using correct tense and eliminating hesitations. If your situation has changed, say so and give one or two precise reasons (e.g. children grown up, busy schedule). Keep it within three sentences and use linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

Ví dụ: Not really, because my children are teenagers now and we no longer go to parks for baby activities. Also, my schedule is busy, so I rarely have time for leisurely park visits.

Gợi ý: Give a clear opinion and support it with specific reasons. Use linking words ('because', 'for example', 'so') and avoid vague references. Mention who would benefit and one concrete reason such as children's play space or community events.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would. More parks would benefit families and children in my neighborhood because they would provide safe play areas and places for community activities, such as weekend picnics or exercise groups.

Gợi ý: Respond directly and expand slightly with a clear reason and a brief alternative if applicable. Use natural phrasing and avoid single-word answers followed by poor grammar. One or two supporting details are enough.

Ví dụ: No, I don't have any specific parks in mind at the moment because I'm very busy with work and family. However, if I had more free time I would like to visit a peaceful park with walking trails to relax.

× Yes, as I remember, I am I really like, I absolutely like to go to the park, mostly when I am accompanied with my father.

✓ Yes, as I remember, I really liked going to the park, mostly when I was accompanied by my father.

The sentence mixes present and past tenses and has incorrect auxiliary wording. The question asks about childhood, so past tense is appropriate (liked, was accompanied). Also use 'accompanied by' not 'accompanied with'. Remove the extra 'I am' which is redundant. Suggestion: keep consistent past tense for childhood memories and use 'accompanied by' for the correct preposition.

× Honestly not at this moment because I am a mom of the of my MMM teenagers sons.

✓ Honestly, not at the moment, because I am the mother of my teenage sons.

The speaker refers to a current state, but the original has redundant words and incorrect noun forms. Use 'at the moment' (idiomatic), 'the mother' (definite article for a specific role), and 'teenage sons' (adjective before noun). Remove filler 'of the of my' and 'MMM'.

× I have no baby anymore to go to park and play with some MMM some of.

✓ I no longer have a baby to take to the park and play with.

Plurality and phrasing issues: 'no baby anymore' is better as 'no longer have a baby'. Use 'take to the park' or 'go to the park with' and remove unclear fragments 'some MMM some of'. Ensure correct verb 'take' for bringing a child and proper idiomatic order.

× Yes, because I have all my neighbors that are and my niece that wants to experience also to go to park and as I was remember when my children are babies and smo umm I also accompany them.

✓ Yes, because my neighbors and my niece also want to go to the park, and I remember when my children were babies I used to accompany them.

The original sentence is fragmented and ungrammatical. Use parallel structure: 'my neighbors and my niece also want to go to the park'. For past recollection, use past tense 'were babies' and 'used to accompany them'. Remove fillers and unclear phrases. This fixes subject-verb agreement and tense consistency.

× Denison No and I have no time to go to the park because I am busy right now.

✓ No, I don't, and I have no time to go to the park because I am busy right now.

The answer should be a clear negative response. 'Denison No' seems to be a transcript error; replace with 'No, I don't'. Use auxiliary do for present simple negation and keep 'I am busy right now' for current continuous state. This corrects sentence structure and provides appropriate negation.