Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn, thì câu nên phù hợp (past tense) và tránh lặp từ. Nên có câu chủ đề trực tiếp, theo sau là chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ hoạt động bạn làm ở công viên) và dùng liên từ để nối ý. Tránh câu dài lủng củng và sửa ngữ pháp như 'I liked' thay vì 'I like'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I liked going to parks when I was a child because they made me feel happy. I often played games with my family, such as flying kites and having picnics, which created many fond memories.

Gợi ý: Cần sửa từ vựng không phù hợp ('bar' → 'park') và ngữ pháp. Trả lời nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, giải thích lý do cụ thể, dùng liên từ để nối ý và tránh lặp từ/âm thanh. Thêm ví dụ về ai bạn gặp hoặc hoạt động bạn làm bây giờ.

Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks. I go there to meet my friends and relax; for example, we often sit on a bench and chat or go for a short walk together.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng và dùng từ sai ('mobile', 'for exam'). Cần một câu chủ đề nêu quan điểm, sau đó nêu lý do cụ thể (ví dụ: không gian tập thể dục, an toàn cho trẻ em) và dùng liên từ để mạch lạc. Tránh lặp từ và tiếng ậm ừ.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they provide safe spaces for people to relax and exercise. For instance, new parks with walking paths and playgrounds would encourage families to spend time outdoors and improve community interaction.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời không rõ nghĩa và có lỗi từ vựng/ngữ pháp ('grow the Disney park', 'they are healthy'). Nên nói rõ tên công viên bạn muốn tới và lý do cụ thể (ví dụ: cảnh quan, tiện ích). Dùng thì phù hợp và tránh nói chung chung.

Ví dụ: In the future, I would like to visit Disney Park because it looks very beautiful and well-maintained. I am especially interested in the themed areas and family-friendly attractions there.

× Well, yes, I like going to the park when I was a child because I feel happy and for the same I play with my family.

✓ Well, yes, I liked going to the park when I was a child because it made me happy and I used to play with my family.

The sentence mixes present tense (like, feel, play) with past time reference 'when I was a child'. Use past tense to describe past habits: 'liked', 'made me happy', 'used to play'. Also replace 'for the same' (unclear) with a clearer connector or omit it.

× Yes I still like going to the bar because I miss my friend there in for the same I am sit sit and not get with my family.

✓ Yes, I still like going to the park because I miss my friends there; I often sit and spend time with them rather than with my family.

Original mixes tenses and has word choice errors. Use present simple for current habits: 'still like', 'miss'. Correct noun 'bar' to 'park' to match context. Replace 'in for the same I am sit sit and not get with my family' with coherent phrase: 'I often sit and spend time with them rather than with my family'. Use plural 'friends' if more than one.

× Yes I would like to see mobile in my city because because because people need a friend space to relax and exercise for exam. New path would give family in friend a lazy uh play to meet and show social.

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because people need friendly spaces to relax and exercise. New parks would give families and friends a pleasant place to meet and socialize.

Many problems: 'mobile' is incorrect word choice; likely meant 'more parks'. 'friend space' should be 'friendly spaces' (adjective). 'for exam' unclear — remove. 'New path' should be 'new parks'. Fix plural and possessive agreement: 'families and friends'. 'show social' should be 'socialize'. Also remove filler words. Ensure present conditional/modal 'would' is used appropriately.

× In the future, I want to grow the Disney park because they are so beautiful for the same they are healthy.

✓ In the future, I want to visit Disneyland because it is so beautiful and it makes me feel happy.

Original uses 'grow' incorrectly; use 'visit' for going to a park. 'Disney park' better as 'Disneyland' or 'a Disney park'. Subject-verb agreement and pronoun reference: 'they are so beautiful' should match singular 'Disneyland' with 'it is'. 'for the same they are healthy' is unclear; replace with a clear reason such as 'it makes me feel happy' or 'it is good for well-being'.