Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Use correct verb tenses and possessives, and avoid repetition. Link ideas with a simple connector (e.g., “because” or “so”).

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved going to parks when I was a child. My mother has a green thumb, so she often took my cousins and me to the local park every morning and evening to plant flowers and play.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and improve grammar (present simple). Provide one clear reason and one specific example. Use linking words to connect reason and example (e.g., “because,” “so”). Avoid filler words and repetition.

Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because I inherited my mother’s interest in gardening. For example, I walk there every morning and water the flower beds and prune the plants.

Gợi ý: Give a clear opinion and support it with specific reasons and examples. Use correct sentence structure and plural/singular forms. Use linking words like “because” or “so” to connect points. Avoid unclear phrases and hesitations.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because many children and older people need safe outdoor spaces. For example, extra parks would give children a place to play and seniors a place to exercise and socialize.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear statement about your future plan, use correct names and grammar, and give one or two specific reasons or activities you want to do there. Keep it concise and organized with linking words (e.g., “because,” “so that”).

Ví dụ: Yes, I plan to visit Ladakh in the future because it is famous for camping and mountain scenery. I want to go there with my family and friends to camp, visit local temples, and enjoy the adventurous landscape.

× Yes, of course I would like to go back in my childhood days.

✓ Yes, of course I would like to go back to my childhood days.

Incorrect preposition: 'in' is not correct with 'go back' when referring to a period; use 'to'. Also 'would like to go back to my childhood days' is conditional/expressing desire and fits present meaning. Suggestion: use 'go back to' for returning to a time or place.

× In my childhood I went to a park in my family with my cousin and with my also mother because my mother has a green thumb and they like to be planting and growing a plants and they always going to a park every evening and every morning for.

✓ In my childhood I went to the park with my family, my cousin and my mother, because my mother has a green thumb and she likes planting and growing plants; we always went to the park every morning and evening.

Multiple errors: article and noun number ('a park' -> 'the park' or 'to parks' depending on meaning; 'a plants' -> 'plants'); pronoun agreement ('they' -> 'she' referring to mother) and verb tense/formation ('they always going' -> 'we always went'). The instruction limits corrections to listed types: singular/plural, pronouns, article, tense. Suggestions: use correct articles ('the park' or plural 'parks'), match singular/plural nouns ('plants'), use correct pronouns ('she' for mother), and past tense 'went' for habitual past.

× Yes, I still going to like to park because I also have a green thumb.

✓ Yes, I still like going to the park because I also have a green thumb.

Incorrect verb form and word order: 'still going to like to park' is ungrammatical. Use present simple 'still like' for habitual preference and the gerund 'going to the park' for activity. Also include article 'the' before 'park'.

× That's green thumb. I also take from my mother.

✓ That's a green thumb. I also inherited it from my mother.

Missing article before 'green thumb' and incorrect verb/structure 'take from my mother'. Use 'a green thumb' and 'inherited it from my mother' or 'I got it from my mother'. This fixes article and pronoun/reference ('it').

× My mother like to grow plant, and I also go to like a plant every evening and every morning I go to a park for a walk and there I, uh, take for take care of the plants and flowers.

✓ My mother likes to grow plants, and I also enjoy caring for plants. Every morning and evening I go to the park for a walk and I take care of the plants and flowers there.

Subject-verb agreement ('My mother like' -> 'likes'), plural noun ('plant' -> 'plants'), awkward phrasing 'go to like a plant' corrected to 'enjoy caring for plants'. Also verb phrase 'take for take care' is incorrect; use 'take care of'. Tense and habitual present 'go' is appropriate.

× Yes, yes, I message you.

✓ Yes, yes, I mean to say that.

'I message you' is incorrect in context; likely intended 'I mean to say' or 'I meant to say'. This is a sentence structure/word choice error. Use 'I mean' for clarification.

× They are the most of the elder person that they are child and the old old gentle person and the child's are like to be go apart.

✓ There are many elderly people and children who like to go to parks.

Pronoun and article misuse: 'They are the most of the elder person' is ungrammatical. Use 'There are many elderly people and children' (correct plural and adjective). 'the child's are like to be go apart' corrected to 'children who like to go to parks'. Also use correct plural 'children' and verb structure 'who like to'.

× I want to bed or in my city.

✓ I want more parks in my city.

Phrase 'I want to bed or in my city' is nonsensical. Likely intended to request more parks. Correct sentence uses noun 'parks' and quantifier 'more'. This addresses adjective/word choice and sentence sense.

× They are the uh, they need a more park for the elder peoples and our children will spend a time there.

✓ They need more parks for elderly people, and our children can spend time there.

Article and quantifier issues: 'a more park' is incorrect—use 'more parks'. 'elder peoples' should be 'elderly people'. 'spend a time' -> 'spend time'. Fixes article and quantifier usage and plural forms.

× Yeah, in the future I will go to Aladdin Hill station, there park that was famous for the camping and adventure.

✓ In the future I will go to Aladdin Hill Station; that park is famous for camping and adventure.

Tense and article consistency: use future 'will go' is fine; 'there park that was famous' should be 'that park is famous' (present simple for a general fact). Also capitalization 'Hill Station'. Adjust article and relative clause.

× I want to there, I want to there form of temple, my family, my friends.

✓ I want to go there with my family and friends.

Incorrect sentence structure and repetition: 'I want to there' should be 'I want to go there', and 'form of temple' is unclear; likely 'with my family and friends'. Simplify to a correct structure.

× And there I, uh, still there.

✓ And I will still be there.

Tense and word order: 'And there I, uh, still there' is ungrammatical. If speaking of future visit, use 'I will still be there' or if habitual 'I am still there'. Use appropriate auxiliary verb 'will' and 'be'.

× I have a dream from a childhood, uh, I will go to Ladakh park.

✓ I have had a dream since childhood that I will go to Ladakh Park.

Tense and preposition issues: 'have a dream from a childhood' should be 'have had a dream since childhood' (present perfect to show continuing desire). Also capitalization 'Ladakh Park'. Keeps future intent 'I will go'.

× Uh, it's been a hill station.

✓ It's a hill station.

'It's been a hill station' suggests completed action; simply state 'It's a hill station' as a present fact. Use present simple for description.