Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you like going to parks as a child?

Thí sinh

Do you like going to parks as a child?

Giám khảo

Do you still like going to parks now?

Thí sinh

Do you still like going to parks now?

Giám khảo

Would you like to see more parks in your city?

Thí sinh

Would you like to see more parks in your city?

Giám khảo

Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?

Thí sinh

Are there any parks you want to go to this in the future?

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Part 1

Did you like going to parks as a child?

Điểm: 25.0

Gợi ý: 你的回答没有真正回答问题,而是重复了考官的话。要直接回应问题并补充一两句具体细节,比如喜欢的活动或原因。注意句子不要太长,最多五句,并使用连接词使表达连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. I often played on the swings and climbed trees with my friends, which made me feel free and happy. Because the parks were close to my home, I went there almost every weekend.

Do you still like going to parks now?

Điểm: 25.0

Gợi ý: 你又一次只是重复了问题,没有给出任何信息。应该直接回答并说明现在的情况,例如频率、喜欢做的事情或和小时候的不同。使用连接词(like ‘however’, ‘because’)增加连贯性。

Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks now, although less often than before. I usually go for a jog or to relax with a book, because I am busier with work. However, I try to visit at least once a week to get some fresh air.

Would you like to see more parks in your city?

Điểm: 25.0

Gợi ý: 再次只是重复问题,未提供观点。应该给出明确意见并说明原因和可能的好处,比如健康、环境或社区活动。保持具体并使用连接词如‘so’或‘therefore’。

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they improve air quality and provide spaces for exercise. More parks would also encourage families to spend time outdoors, which would be good for community health.

Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?

Điểm: 25.0

Gợi ý: 你的回答仍然是重复问题,而且有语法错误(多余的‘this’)。应该直接回答并给出具体公园名称或类型及原因,或者说明计划和时间。保持句子简洁并用连接词增加逻辑。

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit the new riverside park that opened recently because it has bike paths and a botanical garden. I plan to go there next month with friends to cycle and take photos.

Ngữ pháp

Sentence structure errors

× Do you like going to parks as a child?

✓ Did you like going to parks as a child?

原句使用了一般现在时“Do you like...”,但问题是询问过去作为孩子时的情况,应使用一般过去时“Did you like...”。建议:当谈论过去的经历或习惯时,用过去时(Did + 主语 + 动词原形)。

Sentence structure errors

× Do you still like going to parks now?

✓ Do you still like going to parks?

原句末尾重复了表示现在的词“now”和副词“still”,虽然语法上并非严重错误,但在口语中更自然省略其中一个。建议:保留“still”即可表达“现在仍然喜欢”的含义。

Sentence structure errors

× Would you like to see more parks in your city?

✓ Would you like to see more parks in your city?

该句没有语法错误,结构和时态都正确,表示礼貌的愿望或偏好。无需修改。

Sentence structure errors

× Are there any parks you want to go to this in the future?

✓ Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?

原句中多了一个多余的“this”,导致句子结构错误并且语义重复。建议:删除多余的“this”,保留固定表达“in the future”(将来)。

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