Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you like going to parks as a child?
Thí sinh
Absolutely, I liked going to the park as a child. Why was a child? I always went to the park with my friend UMM because it was a good way to release our stress and make fun.
Giám khảo
Do you still like going to parks now?
Thí sinh
Yeah, I still like going to the park now. Every every Saturday I will go to the park with my best friend and we will have picnic. Now it's a good way to make fun.
Giám khảo
Would you like to see more parks in your city?
Thí sinh
Definitely, I think more park in our city is a symbol of significant and people can improve their life.
Giám khảo
Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?
Thí sinh
Yeah, I want go to another park in another city because I think, uh, the park in another city have the same and I love water.
Did you like going to parks as a child?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答要直接且自然,避免语法和表达错误。注意时态和代词使用,避免多余的疑问“Why was a child?”。可以用一到两句补充具体细节(比如玩什么活动、哪些朋友),并使用连词使表达更连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, I loved going to the park as a child. I often went there with my friend to play on the swings and have small picnics, which helped us relax after school.
Do you still like going to parks now?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 要避免重复词(例如“Every every”),使用更自然的时态(现在习惯用“usually”或“go every Saturday”),並提供具体细节(去公园做什么、地点或时长)。用连接词使句子流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks. Usually, my best friend and I go every Saturday to have a picnic and play frisbee for an hour or two.
Would you like to see more parks in your city?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 注意语法(单复数、冠词)和表达清晰性。说明原因时要具体,例如谈论健康、环保或社区活动的好处,并用连接词展开理由。
Ví dụ: Definitely. I believe more parks would improve people's health and provide green spaces for exercise, socializing and community events.
Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答缺乏清晰理由和细节,语法有错误(动词形式、冠词和复数)。应具体说明想去哪个公园或哪类公园(例如有湖泊或喷泉),并解释原因(例如喜欢水上景观或活动)。使用连词使句子自然流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, I'd like to visit parks in other cities, especially those with lakes or fountains, because I enjoy walking by the water and taking photographs.
× Why was a child?
✓ Why do you ask "as a child"?
原句结构不清,语序和时态不符合上下文。考官问“Did you like going to parks as a child?” 学生想询问“为什么说‘as a child’?”应使用现在时的疑问结构并明确宾语或内容。建议用清晰的疑问短语,如“Why do you ask 'as a child'?” 或 “What do you mean by 'as a child'?”。
× I always went to the park with my friend UMM because it was a good way to release our stress and make fun.
✓ I always went to the park with my friend Umm because it was a good way to relieve our stress and have fun.
原句中“release our stress”用法不自然,应该用动词“relieve”;“make fun”错误,应为“have fun”。另外人名首字母大写即可。建议记住常用搭配:relieve stress, have fun。
× Every every Saturday I will go to the park with my best friend and we will have picnic.
✓ Every Saturday I go to the park with my best friend and we have a picnic.
重复“Every every”是口误,应为“Every Saturday”。句子时态应与现在经常性动作一致,用一般现在时,不用“will”。“have picnic”缺冠词,正确为“have a picnic”。建议使用一般现在时表达习惯性动作,并注意冠词用法。
× Now it's a good way to make fun.
✓ Now it's a good way to have fun.
短语“make fun”与中文“玩得开心”不同,英语中应使用“have fun”。“make fun”通常接“of”表示取笑,语义不同。建议记住固定搭配“have fun”。
× Definitely, I think more park in our city is a symbol of significant and people can improve their life.
✓ Definitely. I think more parks in our city would be a sign of progress and would help people improve their lives.
原句多个问题:1) “more park”应为复数“more parks”;2) “a symbol of significant”不自然,改为“a sign of progress”更符合表达;3) 时态和模态用来表达愿望或假设,使用“would”;4) “people can improve their life”应为“improve their lives”(与people一致用复数)。建议注意可数名词复数形式、固定搭配和人称一致。
× Yeah, I want go to another park in another city because I think, uh, the park in another city have the same and I love water.
✓ Yeah, I want to go to another park in another city because I think the parks in other cities are similar and I love water.
问题包括:1) “want go”缺不定式“to”,应为“want to go”;2) “the park in another city have the same”语法和表达都错,应改为“the parks in other cities are similar”或更具体表述;3) 主谓一致:“park(s) ... have”改为“parks ... are”; 4) “another city”与“other cities”需根据语义选择单复数。建议注意动词不定式用法、主谓一致以及清晰表达比较对象。