Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and grammatically correct: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific details. Avoid repetition and incorrect verb forms. Use linking words (for example, because, so) correctly and limit answer to 2–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child because I had plenty of free time. I often played on the swings and explored the trees with my friends, which made the park feel like a small adventure.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence, then one or two specific reasons with correct grammar and smoother linking words. Avoid filler sounds and vague phrases. Use precise vocabulary (stress relief, neighborhood, facilities) and keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because they help me relieve stress after work. There are two well-maintained parks in my neighborhood with walking paths and benches, so I often take a short walk there to clear my mind.

Gợi ý: Answer directly with one clear opinion sentence and add one specific reason or example. Avoid awkward phrasing and incomplete sentences. Use linking words such as because or for example to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they provide green space for exercise and relaxation. For example, additional small parks near residential areas would make it easier for families and elderly people to spend time outdoors.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear statement naming the park, then give a specific reason why you want to visit. Avoid repetition and religious or vague statements unless they add clarity. Keep it to 2–3 sentences and use correct noun phrases (the park situated in Chandigarh, called...)

Ví dụ: Yes, I would love to visit the park called Gurudwara Garden in Chandigarh (or Guru's Garden) because it is famous for its rose gardens. I enjoy seeing different flowers and find that walking among them is very calming and inspiring.

× Yes, I like a parks like when I am a child because I have a lot of spare time to go somewhere and anywhere.

✓ Yes, I liked going to parks when I was a child because I had a lot of spare time to go anywhere.

Errors: incorrect article 'a' before plural 'parks' and mismatched tense. Use 'liked' and 'was' for past habits. Remove redundant 'somewhere and anywhere' and use 'anywhere'. Use plural 'parks' without an article.

× So I will go, I will go park.

✓ So I would go to the park.

The speaker refers to habitual past activity; use conditional/past habitual 'would' and include preposition 'to' and article 'the' before 'park'. 'I will' is inappropriate for past narration.

× It is a very good place and there is a lot of swings and I would like.

✓ It was a very nice place and there were a lot of swings and I liked it.

Use past tense 'was' and 'were' for plural 'swings'. 'A lot of' requires plural noun 'swings' with 'were'. 'I would like' is incomplete; use 'I liked it' for past preference.

× Yes, I do like to go parks and now 'cause that particular place helps me to release my stress from the workplace and when I'm just doing my works and all, and when I'm getting full of, of my brain, so I just go to the park.

✓ Yes, I do like to go to parks now because those places help me relieve stress from work, and when I'm overwhelmed with tasks I just go to the park.

Errors: missing preposition 'to' after 'go'; noun agreement 'parks' with 'those places'; informal 'now 'cause' should be 'now because'; 'helps me to release my stress' better as 'help me relieve stress'; 'doing my works' is incorrect—use 'tasks' or 'work'; 'getting full of my brain' is ungrammatical—use 'overwhelmed'.

× So fun as I have a 2 parks in my neighborhood and the residential area is fully, uh, equipped with the ecosystem and that helps us to go park daily.

✓ It's convenient because I have two parks in my neighborhood, and the residential area is well equipped with greenery, which allows us to visit the parks daily.

Problems: numeral should be written 'two' and no article needed before 'parks' when preceded by number; 'So fun as' is ungrammatical—use 'It's convenient because'; 'equipped with the ecosystem' is awkward—use 'equipped with greenery' or 'green spaces'; 'go park daily' needs 'visit the parks daily'.

× In my opinion, I like to introduce more parks in my city area like my home around.

✓ In my opinion, I would like to have more parks around my home in the city.

'Introduce more parks' is odd for a personal preference; 'I would like to have' is clearer. 'In my city area like my home around' has wrong word order and preposition; correct form is 'around my home in the city'.

× So I would like more parks and.

✓ So I would like there to be more parks.

Incomplete sentence ending with 'and' is ungrammatical. Rephrase to a complete thought: 'I would like there to be more parks.'

× Yes, I do believe that I want to visit a park that situated in the Chandigarh and that name is known as the Guru's Garden.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit a park situated in Chandigarh called the Guru's Garden.

Errors: 'a park that situated' needs passive or reduced relative clause 'park situated'; 'the Chandigarh' incorrectly uses definite article—use 'Chandigarh' without 'the'; 'that name is known as' is wordy—use 'called'.

× As I'm very fond of roses and the different kind of flowers that give me a pleasing feeling and help me to release my stress.

✓ I'm very fond of roses and different kinds of flowers that give me pleasure and help me relieve stress.

Use plural 'kinds of flowers' not 'kind of'; 'a pleasing feeling' is wordy—'give me pleasure' or 'are pleasing'; 'help me to release my stress' better as 'help me relieve stress'.

× As nature is a as nature is a God gift that help us to, uh, believe in.

✓ Nature is a God-given gift that helps us believe.

Redundant repetition 'As nature is a as nature is a' should be simplified. Use compound adjective 'God-given' and singular verb 'helps' to agree with subject 'gift'. 'Help us to, uh, believe in' is vague; 'helps us believe' is concise and grammatical.