Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and avoid hesitation. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific reason with a connecting word. Reduce filler words (e.g., "umm", "uh").

Ví dụ: No, I didn't enjoy going to parks as a child because I preferred indoor activities. For example, I liked building toy models and reading picture books at home, which felt more comfortable than playing outside.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and give a specific reason and an example. Avoid repeating the same idea and eliminate fillers. Use a linking phrase to connect past and present.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy going to parks now because I appreciate fresh air and open space. For instance, I often walk in a nearby park to relax after work and sometimes sit by the pond to read.

Gợi ý: Be specific about why more parks would be beneficial and avoid repetition. Use linking words (however, because, therefore) and give one clear example or effect of more parks.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like more parks because they improve air quality and provide recreational space. For example, additional small parks near residential areas would give families a convenient place for exercise and weekend picnics.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear statement about future intention, then mention the park and a specific memory or feature that motivates the visit. Use past details briefly, then link to the future plan.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit the large park in Denmark again because of its beautiful gardens and peaceful lakes. I remember walking there when I was 18 and being impressed by the colorful flowerbeds, so I want to return and explore more of its trails.

× I didn't like going to park when I was a child because, umm, I always preferred staying at home and playing with my own toys instead of going out and going, uh, to park or umm.

✓ I didn't like going to the park when I was a child because I always preferred staying at home and playing with my own toys instead of going out and going to the park.

Use of the definite article 'the' is required with 'park' when referring to parks in general in this context. Also remove filler words and duplicate phrases for clarity. Suggestion: use 'the park' when speaking about parks in general or a specific park known to both speaker and listener.

× Even though I didn't like going to parks when I was a child, as a grown up adult right now I quite enjoy going to parks actually.

✓ Even though I didn't like going to parks when I was a child, now as an adult I quite enjoy going to parks.

Awkward phrasing 'as a grown up adult right now' — redundancy and tense reference. Use simple present tense 'now' to indicate current habitual enjoyment. Suggestion: say 'now as an adult' and place adverbs naturally: 'I quite enjoy going to parks.'

× And umm, I like to go to parks and umm.

✓ And I like to go to parks.

Trailing filler and repetition should be removed. No article error here but sentence was redundant; simplified to a grammatically correct present simple statement. Suggestion: avoid filler words and finish the sentence cleanly.

× Actually, we do have a lot of parks in my city. We also have a very large, very big one.

✓ Actually, we do have a lot of parks in my city. We also have a very large one.

'Very large, very big' is redundant and awkward. Use a single adjective with appropriate intensity. Suggestion: choose one adjective or use 'very large' alone.

× So it would be, it's always nice to have a lot of trees around city.

✓ So it would be, it's always nice to have a lot of trees around the city.

The phrase requires the definite article 'the' before 'city' when referring to the speaker's city. Suggestion: use 'around the city' for natural English.

× When I was about 18, I think, uh, I went to a very big park, uh, at Denmark and it was the most beautiful park I've ever seen.

✓ When I was about 18, I think, I went to a very big park in Denmark and it was the most beautiful park I've ever seen.

Use 'in Denmark' not 'at Denmark' for countries. 'At' is used for specific locations; use 'in' for countries. Suggestion: say 'in Denmark.'

× So, uh, I would love to, umm, visit that place again.

✓ So I would love to visit that place again.

Sentence mainly correct; remove filler commas and hesitations. 'Would love to' is appropriate for expressing desire. Suggestion: keep 'I would love to visit that place again' without fillers for clarity.