Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be direct, use correct tense and smoother phrasing. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct common grammar errors (past tense, articles, plural forms) and avoid redundancy.

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. I often went with my family and cousins, and we usually had picnics and played games like frisbee. Those afternoons are some of my happiest memories because we spent uninterrupted time together.

Gợi ý: Use present simple correctly and make sentences more natural. Give a clear topic sentence and one specific detail about frequency or purpose, linked with a reason. Fix subject-verb agreement and time expressions.

Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks. I usually go for a walk or a run a few times a week, and I often go with my mother so we can catch up and exercise together.

Gợi ý: Give a clear opinion and explain why with specific reasons. Avoid vague or incorrect phrases. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' and correct nouns/plurals and informal contractions.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they provide green space for families and improve people's health. For example, more parks would give children safe places to play and adults areas to exercise.

Gợi ý: Be specific: name a park or city and explain why you want to visit, using linking words to connect ideas. Avoid unclear phrasing and keep sentences concise. Use future forms correctly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit Century Park in Shanghai because I have heard it is very large and has beautiful lakes. I hope to go there next year to enjoy the scenery and take photos.

× Yes, when I was a child, I really like to go in or to the park to.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I really liked to go to the park.

The sentence mixes past context ('when I was a child') with present tense verb 'like'. Use past tense 'liked' to match the time frame. Also 'go in or to the park to' is redundant and incorrect preposition use; use 'go to the park'. Suggestion: Use past tense verbs consistently for past events and choose the correct preposition 'to' with 'go'. Grammar problem type ID:6

× I went with my family, my friends and my cousin.

✓ I went with my family, my friends, and my cousin.

List punctuation (commas) helps clarity; grammatically this sentence is acceptable but adding a comma before 'and' (Oxford comma) improves readability. No singular/plural error beyond clarity. Grammar problem type ID:1

× When I went to the park, we have a picnic or have something fun together.

✓ When I went to the park, we had a picnic or did something fun together.

The subordinate clause begins with past time 'When I went', so verbs in the clause should be past tense: 'had' and 'did' instead of present 'have'. Suggestion: Keep verb tense consistent within time frames. Grammar problem type ID:6

× It's really good memory.

✓ They are really good memories.

'Memory' is countable here and refers to multiple experiences, so use the plural 'memories' and plural verb 'are' if referring to the picnic experiences. Alternatively, 'It's a really good memory' could work if referring to a single event. The original lacks agreement between subject and complement. Grammar problem type ID:26

× Yes, I'm still like going to the park.

✓ Yes, I still like going to the park.

Using 'I'm still like' incorrectly combines auxiliary 'am' with main verb 'like'. For stative verbs like 'like' in present tense, use simple present 'I still like'. Grammar problem type ID:6

× I going to the park for a walk and run sometime.

✓ I go to the park for walks and runs sometimes.

The clause lacks the auxiliary verb for progressive ('I am going') or should use simple present 'I go'. 'Walk and run' should be pluralized to match habitual actions and 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' for frequency. Suggestion: Use 'I go to the park for walks and runs sometimes' or 'I sometimes go to the park for a walk or a run.' Grammar problem type ID:26

× I go with my mom so we can spend time together.

✓ I go with my mom so we can spend time together.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no preposition error. No correction needed. Grammar problem type ID:11

× Yes, if it's possible, I want to see a lot of park in my family in in my country.

✓ Yes, if it's possible, I want to see a lot of parks in my country.

The sentence misuses 'see' with 'a lot of park' (singular) and repeats 'in'. Use plural 'parks'. 'In my family' is erroneous and removed; likely intended 'in my country'. Also modal phrasing 'if it's possible' is fine but could be 'if possible'. Grammar problem type ID:4

× So I think it's gonna be good and I would love it.

✓ So I think it would be good and I would love that.

'Gonna' is informal and not appropriate for test responses; use 'would be'. 'Love it' is acceptable but 'love that' sounds more natural when referring to the idea. Maintain conditional tense matching 'if it's possible'. Suggestion: Avoid colloquial contractions like 'gonna'. Grammar problem type ID:8

× Yeah, it's how many parts I would like to go to.

✓ There are many parks I would like to go to.

The original is ungrammatical and unclear. Replace with clear subject-verb structure: 'There are many parks I would like to go to.' This uses 'there are' for existence and plural 'parks'. Grammar problem type ID:26

× But the thing I want to try is go to the park in Shanghai or in another country.

✓ But the thing I want to try is to go to a park in Shanghai or in another country.

After linking verb 'is', use the infinitive 'to go' or use gerund phrase 'going'. Also use article 'a' before 'park' to refer to any park. Correct form: 'is to go' or 'is going'. Grammar problem type ID:8

× It would be good and I can tell you in the same time.

✓ It would be good, and I can tell you about it at the same time.

'Tell you in the same time' is incorrect collocation. Use 'at the same time' for simultaneous actions and include 'about it' to indicate what you will tell. Also add conjunction punctuation. Grammar problem type ID:26