Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cümle yapısında ve zaman kullanımında düzelme yapmalısınız. Basit ve doğrudan bir konu cümlesi ile başlayın (ör. "No, I didn't like parks as a child.") ve ardından nedeni açık ve kısa destekleyici cümlelerle verin. Bağlaçlar (because, so, and) daha doğru kullanılarak anlam netleştirilmeli. Kelime seçimini ve artikelleri (the/Ø) düzeltin ve gereksiz tekrarları çıkarın.

Ví dụ: No, I didn't like going to parks as a child because I preferred playing with my friends in the street. Also, the parks near my home were small and not very interesting, so we often stayed outside playing games.

Gợi ý: Zamanlar ve olumsuz yapılar karışık kullanılmış; daha doğal bir yanıt için net zaman referansı verin (now) ve nedeninizi iki kısa cümleyle açıklayın. Tekrarları (“I don't. I don't”) kaldırın. Eğer bir istisna (fotoğraf çekmek) varsa, bunu bağlaç kullanarak açıkça belirtin (however, but).

Ví dụ: No, I still don't enjoy going to parks now because I prefer indoor activities. However, I sometimes visit a park briefly to take photographs when there are nice flowers or interesting scenes.

Gợi ý: Cevap karışık ve belirsiz; doğrudan soruya yanıt verin (Yes/No/It depends) ve sonra sebebinizi açıklayın. Konuşmadaki dolgu kelimelerini (umm, uh) azaltın. Eğer çocuklar için parkların önemli olduğunu düşünüyorsanız, bunu net şekilde belirtin ve kısa bir neden ekleyin.

Ví dụ: I think it depends. I would support having more parks in the city because they benefit children and families, and they also improve the neighbourhood environment.

Gợi ý: Cevap net değil ve fazlaca çekingenlik gösteriyor. Soruya doğrudan yanıt verin ve belirttiğiniz yer için kısa gerekçe sunun. "I don't know" yerine "I'm not sure, but..." gibi daha doğal ifadeler kullanın. Gerekirse bir örnek (Disneyland) verip nedenini açıklayın.

Ví dụ: I'm not sure which parks I'll visit, but I'd like to go to Disneyland in the future because it has large themed gardens and many attractions that look fun.

× I used to don't like going to the park because I was a child, kind of.

✓ I didn't use to like going to the park when I was a child.

The phrase 'used to' for past habits becomes negative with 'didn't use to' or 'used not to'. 'Used to don't' is ungrammatical. Also 'because I was a child' is better as 'when I was a child' to indicate time. Suggestion: use 'didn't use to' for negative past habits. Grammar problem type ID: 8

× Hanging with my friends in the outside so I don't like.

✓ I used to hang out with my friends outside, so I didn't like going to parks.

The original lacks a main verb form and has incorrect tense and word order. 'Hanging' should be changed to the past habitual 'used to hang out' or 'I hung out'. 'in the outside' is incorrect; use 'outside'. Match tense: past reason leads to past dislike 'didn't like'. Grammar problem type ID: 26

× No, I didn't like go to the parks. I don't. I don't prefer any time in my life.

✓ No, I didn't like going to parks. I still don't. I have never preferred them at any time in my life.

Mixes past and present incorrectly. After 'didn't' the verb should be gerund 'going'. To express current state use 'I still don't'. 'I don't prefer any time in my life' is awkward; use present perfect 'I have never preferred them' to cover life experience. Grammar problem type ID: 5

× But I actually think about just taking picture on the park, taking, taking.

✓ But I actually think about just taking pictures in the park.

Use plural 'pictures' when unspecified number is possible. 'Taking picture on the park' uses wrong preposition and singular; use 'in the park'. Remove filler repetition. Also 'think about taking' correctly uses verb + -ing after 'think about'. Grammar problem type ID: 8

× I don't have any idea of this kind of question because I'm not a child anymore.

✓ I don't have any idea how to answer this kind of question because I'm not a child anymore.

'Idea of this kind of question' is unnatural; use 'idea how to answer this kind of question'. Pronoun/reference clarity improved. Maintain present tense for current state. Grammar problem type ID: 12

× So my, umm, responsibilities are uh, different, uh, comparing to I used to and so, but actually I can prefer because of the child.

✓ So my responsibilities are different compared to when I was a child, but actually I can understand children better now.

'Comparing to I used to' is incorrect structure; use 'compared to when I was a child'. 'I can prefer because of the child' is unclear; perhaps meant 'I can understand children' or 'I can prefer parks for my child'. Clarify meaning and use correct comparative structure. Grammar problem type ID: 11

× I exactly don't know this that I want to say park count of the park, but I can say Disneyland in my future.

✓ I don't exactly know how many parks I want to visit, but I might say Disneyland in the future.

Original has unclear pronoun and word order. 'I exactly don't know this that I want to say park count of the park' is ungrammatical. Use 'I don't exactly know how many parks I want to visit'. 'In my future' -> 'in the future' or 'in my future plans'. Use modal 'might' for future possibility. Grammar problem type ID:12

× UMM rotates.

✓ Um, I'm not sure.

'Rotates' is unrelated and incorrect here. Use a filler phrase that matches spoken hesitation: 'Um, I'm not sure.' This corrects sentence structure and pragmatic appropriateness. Grammar problem type ID:26