Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear, relevant and natural. To improve toward a higher score, make the response slightly more varied and specific by adding one brief detail (e.g. a memorable activity or a favorite spot) and use a linking phrase to connect ideas. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child because they had lots of play equipment and wide green spaces. For example, my favourite was the swings where I and my friends would race to see who could jump highest. Also, I often sat under a big oak tree to chat with my friends and play simple games.

Gợi ý: The answer communicates your feelings but has an awkward phrase (“when I feel suggest a trip to park”). Improve accuracy and fluency by correcting grammar and trimming redundancy. Use a clear topic sentence, one linking word, and one specific example of when or why you go to the park.

Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because they are an ideal way to relax. For instance, after a stressful workday I go for a short walk, sit under a tree and listen to the birds, which helps me breathe deeply and clear my mind.

Gợi ý: Good idea but grammar and cohesion need work. Replace awkward phrases (e.g. “for relax”) with correct forms, add a linking word to connect reason and example, and be more specific about how parks improve life (health, community activities). Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would. More parks could improve the city because they provide green spaces for relaxation and exercise. For example, having nearby parks would make it easier for families to meet for picnics and for children to play safely.

Gợi ý: This answer is concise and relevant but repeat word (“in in”) and could be improved by adding a brief linking detail about what you’d do there or when you might visit. That adds specificity and natural flow while keeping it short.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit Fort Canning Park in Singapore because it is a historic site with breathtaking scenery and lush greenery. I hope to go next year to explore the heritage trails and take photographs of the old colonial buildings and gardens.

× Yes, I still enjoy going to parks when I feel suggest a trip to park is an ideal way to relax.

✓ Yes, I still enjoy going to parks when I feel a trip to the park is an ideal way to relax.

The original sentence mixes structures and omits necessary articles. Replace the awkward phrase 'feel suggest' with 'feel a trip ... is' to link the feeling to the idea. Add the indefinite article 'a' before 'trip' and the definite article 'the' before 'park' for natural English. This keeps present tense and corrects sentence structure.

× I usually take deep breaths, sit under the trees and listen to the birds, which helps me unwind and clear my mind.

✓ I usually take deep breaths, sit under the trees, and listen to the birds, which helps me unwind and clear my mind.

Grammatically this sentence is correct, but it needed a comma before the final conjunction for clear list separation (serial comma). No preposition error; correction adds punctuation for clarity. Keep present tense.

× I think more parks could really improve the city because they provide more green spaces for relax and for instance having nearby parks would make it easier for families to spend time out.

✓ I think more parks could really improve the city because they provide more green spaces for relaxation, and, for instance, having nearby parks would make it easier for families to spend time outdoors.

The phrase 'for relax' is incorrect; use the noun 'relaxation'. Add commas around 'for instance' as a parenthetical phrase. Use 'outdoors' instead of 'out' for natural expression. These changes preserve the modal 'could' and present-tense reasoning.

× Yes, for example, I would like to visit Fort Canning Park in in Singapore.

✓ Yes, for example, I would like to visit Fort Canning Park in Singapore.

There is a duplicated preposition 'in in'; remove the extra 'in'. The preposition 'in' before 'Singapore' is correct. This fixes a simple typographical/prepositional error.