Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be clear, concise, and use correct tense and vocabulary. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid confusing words (e.g. 'giant') and redundancy.

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. For example, I often went with friends to play football and ride bicycles, because I enjoyed the fresh air and open space. These visits were a regular part of my weekends and made my childhood very active.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and use correct grammar. Give a short reason with one or two specific details and a linking word (e.g., 'because' or 'so'). Avoid repetition and incorrect phrases ('a tons', 'I'm be have').

Ví dụ: Not as much as before, because I am currently overwhelmed with assignments and work. As a result, I rarely find time to exercise in the park, although I try to visit occasionally at weekends.

Gợi ý: Give a clear opinion, then support it with specific reasons. Use correct articles and plural/singular forms and a linking word (e.g., 'because' or 'so'). Mention concrete benefits to strengthen the answer.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would. Because there is a lot of unused land around my neighbourhood, building more parks would provide residents with places for relaxation and exercise. For instance, new parks could reduce stress and encourage community activities.

Gợi ý: State the park clearly, then give specific reasons why you want to visit. Use correct verbs and clearer descriptions instead of vague phrases like 'emerge in like a universal space.' Add one concrete detail or expectation.

Ví dụ: Yes, there is a park in Ho Chi Minh City I would like to visit. It is said to have large themed gardens and interactive installations, which sparked my curiosity. If I have the chance, I want to see the art displays and relax in the themed areas.

× Well honestly I'm completely hooked on going to parks when I was a giant as at that time I'm really into outdoor activities as I wanted to enjoy the fresh atmosphere.

✓ Well honestly I was completely hooked on going to parks when I was a child because at that time I was really into outdoor activities and wanted to enjoy the fresh air.

Mixes present and past tenses and contains word choice errors. Use past tense ('was') for childhood habits. Replace 'giant' with 'child' and 'fresh atmosphere' with 'fresh air'. Use 'because' instead of 'as' for clarity and remove redundant 'I' before 'wanted.'

× So I went to the park, played with my friends and immersed myself in.

✓ So I went to the park, played with my friends, and immersed myself in the activities.

Sentence ends abruptly with a preposition 'in' without an object. Add the object ('the activities') to complete the sentence and include a comma before 'and' in a list of three items.

× Well honestly no because I'm I'm currently snowed under with a tons of workload like assignments and also I'm be have a hectic schedule so it hinders me frequently going to the parks to do exercise like that.

✓ Well honestly no, because I'm currently snowed under with a ton of work, like assignments, and I have a hectic schedule, so it prevents me from frequently going to the park to exercise.

Multiple issues: 'a tons' is incorrect article/number usage (use 'a ton' or 'tons of'); 'workload' can be 'work'; duplicate words removed; 'I'm be have' is ungrammatical — use 'I have'; 'hinders me frequently going' should be 'prevents me from frequently going' (correct verb + preposition); 'the parks' to 'the park' for general activity. Sentence broken into clearer clauses and punctuation added.

× Well definitely yes, as there are currently lots of space open spaces in my surroundings, so constructing new parks is a good ideas at the government can provide space for relaxation and recreation.

✓ Well definitely yes, as there are currently lots of open spaces in my area, so constructing new parks is a good idea and the government can provide space for relaxation and recreation.

Redundant and incorrect word order 'lots of space open spaces' should be 'lots of open spaces'; 'in my surroundings' commonly expressed as 'in my area'; 'a good ideas' incorrect article/number — use 'a good idea'; sentence fragment 'at the government can provide' should be 'and the government can provide.'

× Well, I know in Ho Chi Minh City has a park that allows people to emerge in like a universal space.

✓ Well, I know Ho Chi Minh City has a park that allows people to immerse themselves in a kind of universal space.

Original misses subject order and has wrong verb 'emerge in' (means come out). Use 'immerse themselves in' to express entering an environment; add 'I know Ho Chi Minh City has' for correct word order; 'like a universal space' improved to 'a kind of universal space' for clarity.

× So if I had an opportunity, I would like to go there.

✓ So if I had the opportunity, I would like to go there.

Minor article choice: 'an opportunity' is acceptable but 'the opportunity' is more natural when referring to the specific park. The conditional structure 'If I had the opportunity, I would like to go there' is correct; change only the article for naturalness.