Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid unclear phrases like "high end seat" and redundant words.

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. After school my friends and I would go there to play games like tag and hide-and-seek, which made me excited and helped me relax after lessons.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and confidently. Use correct grammar (subject-verb agreement, verb forms) and reduce hesitations. Provide one reason and, if needed, a short follow-up using a linking word.

Ví dụ: Not really. Now that I'm 23, I rarely go to parks because they are often crowded with children, and my friends prefer other activities. Therefore, I usually meet them at cafés or go hiking instead.

Gợi ý: Organize your answer: give a clear opinion, then two specific reasons linked clearly. Use appropriate vocabulary for environmental benefits and avoid filler words.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would. Parks are useful not only for recreation but also for the environment: they increase green space and help absorb carbon dioxide. In addition, more parks would provide residents with places to exercise and relax.

Gợi ý: Be specific and avoid contradictions. If you don't have particular parks, state that and then mention one or two examples you would like to visit with reasons, using correct tense and linking words.

Ví dụ: I don't have a specific park in mind, but I would love to visit famous parks abroad. For example, Washington Park in the US or national parks in Canada seem very relaxing and would be great for sightseeing and hiking.

× When I was a child I really liked going to the park after taking lesson after school with my friends for playing some games and catching games.

✓ When I was a child, I really liked going to the park after taking lessons after school with my friends to play some games and play tag.

The original sentence has several tense and verb form problems: 'taking lesson' should be plural 'taking lessons'; 'for playing some games and catching games' uses incorrect preposition and verb choice for purpose and the verb 'catching games' is unnatural for the activity 'tag'. Changing to 'to play some games and play tag' uses the infinitive of purpose and correct verb forms. Also add a comma after the introductory phrase for clarity.

× High end seat in the park that made me so excited and a stress release.

✓ Sitting on the high seats in the park made me so excited and relieved my stress.

The original is a sentence fragment lacking a clear verb and subject relation. 'High end seat in the park' is unclear; rephrasing to 'Sitting on the high seats in the park' provides a subject and verb. 'a stress release' is noun phrase awkwardly used; 'relieved my stress' is a correct verb phrase conveying the intended meaning.

× I would say that I'm already 23 years old. The park are not suitable for me.

✓ I would say that I'm 23 years old already. The parks are not suitable for me.

Number agreement and word order issues: 'The park are' mixes singular/plural with plural verb; change to 'The parks are'. Also 'already 23 years old' is more natural as '23 years old already' or 'already 23 years old' — both acceptable; moved 'already' for natural flow.

× I have to giving more space for the younger children, right?

✓ I have to give more space to the younger children, right?

After 'have to' use the base form of the verb, not the -ing form. Also 'space for' can be 'space to' or 'space for'; 'give more space to the younger children' is more natural.

× And at the same times, my friends already also the same age, like 23, so they won't go to uh, go to the park with me, right?

✓ And at the same time, my friends are also the same age, like 23, so they won't go to the park with me, right?

Problems: 'at the same times' should be singular 'at the same time'; 'my friends already also the same age' lacks a verb — insert 'are'; remove redundant 'go to'. Also 'already also' is redundant; use 'are also'.

× Yeah, for sure, I'd like to see more Park.

✓ Yeah, for sure, I'd like to see more parks.

Countable noun 'park' requires plural 'parks' when speaking generally about more than one. Capitalization is unnecessary; use lowercase and plural.

× You know, Park are not just uh, providing a place for the children, but also it is good for the environment 'cause it, uh, plants are more, are more tree and grasses, flowers are really small, uh, carbon dioxide good to the fuel size.

✓ You know, parks do not just provide a place for children, but they are also good for the environment because they have more trees, grasses, and flowers, which help reduce carbon dioxide.

Multiple grammar problems: subject-verb agreement ('parks do not just provide' rather than 'Park are providing'); pronoun agreement ('they are' rather than 'it is' when referring to parks); incorrect list phrasing and noun forms ('more trees, grasses, and flowers'); unclear clause about carbon dioxide rephrased to 'which help reduce carbon dioxide' to express environmental benefit correctly.

× Umm, to be honest, I do not have any parts that I would like to do in the future, but I've heard, uh, another place that is famous like the Washington Park, uh, or in Canada, some park are really chill.

✓ Um, to be honest, I do not have any parks that I would like to visit in the future, but I've heard of places that are famous, like Washington Park, or some parks in Canada that are really nice and relaxing.

Multiple errors: 'parts' should be 'parks'; 'would like to do' is incorrect for visiting — use 'would like to visit'; 'I've heard, uh, another place' should be 'I've heard of places'; 'some park are' needs plural subject-verb agreement 'some parks are'; 'really chill' is informal — 'really nice and relaxing' is clearer.

× Maybe if I going to for traveling at that place.

✓ Maybe I will go there when I travel, or maybe I will visit that place when I travel.

Incorrect verb form: after 'Maybe' use 'I will' or modal/modal + base verb; 'if I going to for traveling' is ungrammatical. Use 'I will go there when I travel' or 'I might visit that place when I travel' to express future possibility correctly.