Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答は主旨が伝わりますが、文法ミスや語彙選択の誤り（例："arthritic in a flea"）、発音のためのためらい、冗長さがあります。次の点を改善してください：1) 明確な主題文を作る（短く直接）。2) 不要なフィラー（"uh", "umm"）を減らす。3) 適切な語彙を選ぶ（"attractions" や "play equipment" など）。4) 補足情報は1〜2文にまとめ、接続詞（"because", "and", "so"）を自然に使う。具体練習：子供時代の思い出を1文で述べ、次に理由を1文で付け加える練習をする。

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. In Japan there are many clean parks where we could enjoy various attractions like playgrounds and seasonal flowers.

Gợi ý: 部分的に理由を述べていますが、文が途中で切れており、情報が不完全です。改善点：1) 完全な文で結論を述べる（肯定/否定）。2) 理由を1〜2つに絞り、具体的に説明する（例：高温、日差し、虫など）。3) 接続表現（"because", "so", "therefore"）を正しく使う。4) 終わりに簡単なまとめを加える。練習として、答えを2文（主張＋理由）に限定して練習する。

Ví dụ: I don't often go to parks now because the summer temperatures in Japan can be very high, making it uncomfortable and unsafe for children to play outside. Instead, we usually choose indoor activities or shaded playgrounds.

Gợi ý: 意見は示されていますが、表現が繰り返され語尾が不完全で、文法ミス（"need to think about to"）があります。改善点：1) 繰り返しを避け簡潔に答える。2) 文法を正しく使う（"there is no space to build new parks"）。3) 提案を具体的に述べる（例：屋上公園や小規模緑地の導入）。4) フィラーを減らし、1〜2文でまとめる。練習：提案を含めた2文構成（希望＋具体案）で話す練習をする。

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like more parks in my city, but space is limited. The government could consider creating rooftop gardens or small pocket parks to increase green areas.

Gợi ý: 意図は分かりますが、文が未完で構成が弱いです。改善点：1) 完全な文で希望を伝える（行きたい場所を特定）。2) 比較を具体的に示す（"bigger, more facilities, open spaces"）。3) 将来の計画について簡潔に述べる（"I want to take my children to..."）。4) 接続語を使って論理的につなげる。練習：行きたい公園の例と理由を1〜2文で述べる練習をする。

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit parks abroad because many overseas parks are much larger and have more facilities. I hope to take my children to famous national parks or large urban parks when we travel.

× Yes I did, I like going to parks because in Japan there is so many clean parks and we can enjoy so many, uh, arthritic in a flea.

✓ Yes, I did. I liked going to parks because in Japan there are so many clean parks and we could enjoy many activities at a flea market.

'There is' should be 'there are' to agree with the plural noun 'parks' (subject-verb agreement). 'So many' correctly quantifies plural nouns but must pair with 'are'. 'We can enjoy so many, uh, arthritic in a flea' is unclear: 'arthritic' is incorrect; likely intended 'activities at a flea market.' Tense: as the examiner asked about childhood, past tense 'liked' and 'could' are appropriate. Suggestion: use plural agreement with 'there are', choose correct noun 'activities', and match tense to context.

× Umm I don't like going to parks now because in the summer the temperature in Japan is so high and it's dangerous to play outside for children and I also.

✓ Umm I don't like going to parks now because in the summer the temperature in Japan is so high and it's dangerous for children to play outside, and I also prefer to stay indoors.

Placement of 'for children' is incorrect; use 'dangerous for children to play outside' or 'dangerous for children to play outdoors.' The sentence was incomplete ('and I also.'): add a completion such as 'I also prefer to stay indoors.' Suggestion: place the phrase 'for children' next to the adjective it modifies and complete the sentence with a clear clause.

× Umm yes I would like to see more parks in my city but there is no place to settle new parks in my in my city.

✓ Umm yes, I would like to see more parks in my city, but there is no place to build new parks in my city.

Use 'there is' for singular nouns, but here 'no place' is singular so 'there is no place' is grammatical; however the verb phrase 'to settle new parks' is incorrect. Use 'to build new parks' or 'to establish new parks.' Also remove duplicated 'in my in my city.' Suggestion: choose correct verb collocation ('build' or 'establish') and avoid repetition.

× So the government need to umm think about to.

✓ So the government needs to, um, think about it.

Subject-verb agreement: with 'the government' (singular) use 'needs.' The infinitive 'think about to' is incorrect; 'think about it' or 'think about doing that' are correct. Also add a completion for clarity. Suggestion: use correct agreement and proper verb patterns: 'think about' takes a noun/pronoun or gerund, not 'to.'

× Yes, I would like to go to the parks in outside of Japan because overseas parks are huge compared to Japan, so I, my children will.

✓ Yes, I would like to go to parks outside Japan because parks overseas are much larger compared to those in Japan, so my children and I will go there.

Incorrect preposition 'in outside of Japan' should be 'outside Japan' or 'outside of Japan' without 'in.' 'Overseas parks are huge compared to Japan' lacks a clear comparison object; use 'compared to parks in Japan' or 'those in Japan.' The clause 'so I, my children will' is ungrammatical; reorder to 'my children and I will go there.' Suggestion: correct preposition use, specify the comparison target, and reorder subjects in the final clause for natural English.