Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you like going to parks as a child?

Thí sinh

Would you like to go into park as a child?

Giám khảo

Do you still like going to parks now?

Thí sinh

Do you still like in the park now?

Giám khảo

Would you like to see more parks in your city?

Thí sinh

Would you like to see more parks in your city?

Giám khảo

Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?

Thí sinh

Are there any pubs you want to go to in the future?

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you like going to parks as a child?

Điểm: 20.0

Gợi ý: คำตอบของคุณไม่ตรงกับคำถามของผู้สัมภาษณ์และมีข้อผิดพลาดด้านไวยากรณ์ ควรตอบโดยตรงว่าในอดีตคุณชอบไปสวนสาธารณะหรือไม่ และให้เหตุผลสั้น ๆ พร้อมตัวอย่าง หากให้รายละเอียดเพิ่มควรใช้คำเชื่อม เช่น ‘because’ หรือ ‘so’ เพื่อความชัดเจน

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoyed going to parks as a child because I loved playing on the swings and meeting my friends. For example, we used to have picnics there every weekend.

Do you still like going to parks now?

Điểm: 15.0

Gợi ý: คำตอบของคุณเป็นการถามกลับและมีไวยากรณ์ไม่สมบูรณ์ ควรตอบเป็นประโยคบอกเล่าโดยตรง ระบุว่าคุณยังชอบหรือไม่และให้เหตุผลสั้น ๆ ใช้คำเชื่อมเช่น ‘because’, ‘and’ หรือ ‘so’ เพื่อขยายความ

Ví dụ: Yes, I still like going to parks because they are peaceful and good for exercise. I often walk there in the mornings to relax and stay fit.

Would you like to see more parks in your city?

Điểm: 25.0

Gợi ý: คุณแค่ทำซ้ำคำถามโดยไม่ได้ตอบ ควรตอบโดยชัดเจนว่าต้องการหรือไม่ และอธิบายสั้น ๆ ด้วยเหตุผลเฉพาะเจาะจง เช่นเพื่อสุขภาพ, พื้นที่สำหรับเด็ก หรือพื้นที่สีเขียวในเมือง ใช้ลำดับความคิดด้วยคำเชื่อมเช่น ‘because’, ‘so’ หรือ ‘for example’

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because we need more green spaces for families and children. For example, additional parks would provide safe places for kids to play and for people to exercise.

Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?

Điểm: 10.0

Gợi ý: คำตอบของคุณผสมคำว่า ‘pubs’ แทน ‘parks’ และยังคงเป็นการถามกลับ แสดงว่าคุณไม่เข้าใจคำถาม ควรตอบโดยตรงว่ามีสวนสาธารณะใดที่ต้องการไปในอนาคต และให้เหตุผลหรือรายละเอียดสั้น ๆ เช่นสถานที่หรือกิจกรรมที่คุณอยากทำ

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit the large botanical garden near the city next year because it has many rare plants and peaceful walking paths. I plan to go there to take photos and relax.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect use of prepositions

× Would you like to go into park as a child?

✓ Would you like to go to parks as a child?

The student used the wrong preposition and singular noun. Use 'go to' with places like 'park' and plural 'parks' matches the examiner's general question. Also 'as a child' refers to past habit, but because the examiner asked about past preference, the corrected form preserves meaning. Suggestion: use 'go to' for movement toward places and match singular/plural appropriately.

Incorrect use of prepositions

× Do you still like in the park now?

✓ Do you still like going to parks now?

The student omitted the verb after 'like' and used an incorrect preposition. 'Like' should be followed by a noun or verb+ing. Use 'going to parks' to mirror the examiner's question about the activity. Suggestion: use 'like' + verb-ing and 'go to' for places.

No error (Answer repeats question)

× Would you like to see more parks in your city?

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city.

The original student sentence simply repeated the question and did not answer. This is not a grammatical error but an incomplete response. The correction provides a grammatically correct affirmative answer matching the question tense and context. Suggestion: answer with 'Yes/No' plus reason and use 'in my city' for possession.

Incorrect use of nouns (word choice)

× Are there any pubs you want to go to in the future?

✓ Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?

The student replaced 'parks' with 'pubs', which changes meaning and does not match the examiner's topic. This is a lexical error rather than grammar, but it should be corrected to 'parks' to answer the question. Suggestion: pay attention to key nouns in the question and reuse them appropriately when answering.

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