Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答自然且相关，但需要更清晰的时态一致性与更连贯的句子结构。可将两句合并成一到两句，避免重复（如“at the weekends”与“always”），并补充少量具体细节使内容更丰富。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I often went to the park with my family on weekends, where we usually played badminton or strolled along the tree-lined paths.

Gợi ý: 回答有内容但含有填充词（uh）和语法错误（如“and but”, “picnic head and”），表达不够流畅。建议去掉口头语，使用连词如“and”或“so”连接细节，并把活动具体化。

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I usually go to the park with my family to get some fresh air, and sometimes we have picnics on the grass to relax and talk.

Gợi ý: 观点明确，但有语法和重复错误（如“makes makes”），以及从句时态/主谓一致问题。建议用更简洁的因果连接词（because/so）并改正动词形式，补充一两个具体好处。

Ví dụ: Yes, I would. More parks with trees and plants would improve air quality and encourage people to exercise, which would benefit public health.

Gợi ý: 回答含大量填充词并且语法混乱（如“parks I get used to, walk, walk for it”）。建议直接陈述并给出理由或例子，使用一到两句，避免重复。

Ví dụ: Not really. I prefer the local parks I'm familiar with because they are close to my home and have the facilities I like, such as a badminton court and shaded walking paths.

× Yes I did. I like going to parks with my family at the weekends and we always play badminton or just walk through the path.

✓ Yes, I did. I liked going to parks with my family on weekends and we always played badminton or just walked along the path.

句子中时态不一致。问题在于回答过去的习惯（childhood）时，主句应使用过去时而不是现在时；此外介词使用需调整为“on weekends”，短语常用“walk along the path”。建议：描述过去习惯时统一使用过去时（liked, played, walked）。

× Yes, I do. I still like going to parks with my family and but now we always, just, uh, get some fresh air and sometimes we will have a picnic head and.

✓ Yes, I do. I still like going to parks with my family, but now we usually just get some fresh air and sometimes we have a picnic there.

句子中有冗余连词和词序混乱；“and but”二重连词错误，应选其一；描述现在的习惯用一般现在时（usually, have），不应使用将来式“will”；“head and”应为“there”。建议：去掉多余词，使用一般现在时并用常见搭配（get fresh air, have a picnic there）。

× Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because I think if we have more trees and plants in our community we will get some fresh air and makes makes us healthy.

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because I think if we have more trees and plants in our community we will get some fresh air and it will make us healthy.

原句主谓不一致并有重复词“makes makes”。在复合句中主语是“it”（指前面的情形），谓语应用单数形式“make”或用结构“it will make us healthy”。建议：去掉重复词，确保谓语与主语一致（it will make / will make us healthy）。

× Uh, actually, no, uh, there aren't because I, I have some parks I get used to, uh, walk, walk for it or uh, play in it. So, umm, I just want to go to the parks I familiar with.

✓ Actually, no, there aren't, because I have some parks I'm used to walking to or playing in. So I just want to go to the parks I'm familiar with.

代词和从句结构使用不当。“I get used to”应使用被动/完成结构“I'm used to”或“I am used to walking to”；“walk for it”错误，应为“walk to it”或“walking to”；“the parks I familiar with”缺少关系代词和系动词，应为“parks I'm familiar with”。建议：使用固定搭配“be used to + -ing”和“familiar with”，并用关系代词或缩写（I'm）。