Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and grammatically correct. Begin with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, then add one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repetition and check verb tenses (use past tense when talking about childhood). Use linking words like “because” or “and” sparingly and correctly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoyed going to parks as a child. I often went there to walk and play on the swings with my friends, and I liked helping water the plants because I enjoyed seeing the flowers bloom.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and maintain correct grammar and sentence flow. Use present tense for current habits. Remove unnecessary phrases (e.g., “Sir”) and avoid repeating the same idea. Provide one clear reason and one short supporting detail using a linking word like “because” or “so”.

Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks. I walk there every morning to improve my health because my doctor recommended daily exercise, and I sometimes go in the evening when I need a change of atmosphere.

Gợi ý: Make your opinion clear and use precise vocabulary. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give two specific reasons (e.g., lack of parks, benefits for elderly). Avoid filler words and incorrect plurals. Use linking words like “because” and “for example” to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because there are currently very few. More parks would give older people places to relax and meet friends, and they would improve the community’s health and social life.

Gợi ý: Be specific and organize your answer: name the park (if possible), give one or two reasons why you want to visit, and avoid informal contractions like “wanna.” Use present/future tense correctly and keep it to two or three sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit a park near the city called Patika Park. My friends recommend it because it is very large, has big swings, and well-maintained grass, so it sounds like a great place to relax and play.

× Yes, I like to go in go to park when I was a child because I love walking and also want to explore more things and do outdoor activities with my friends.

✓ Yes, I liked going to the park when I was a child because I loved walking and wanted to explore more things and do outdoor activities with my friends.

The sentence mixes present and past tenses. The question asks about childhood, so past tense is required for actions and states that occurred then. Change 'like to go' to 'liked going', 'love' to 'loved', and 'want' to 'wanted'. Also remove the duplicate words and add the definite article 'the' before 'park'. Use gerund 'going' for habitual past activity. Grammar problem type ID:6

× And I love to swing in in the park and also water in the plants in the park so that they'll grow and beautiful flowers are really very good in the park and I love it all the things.

✓ I also loved swinging in the park and watering the plants there so they would grow and produce beautiful flowers; I loved all those things.

Prepositions and verb forms are incorrect: use 'swinging' (gerund) rather than 'to swing' when listing activities, remove duplicate 'in', and use 'watering the plants' not 'water in the plants'. Use 'there' or 'in the park' consistently and change 'they'll' to past form 'they would' to match past narration. 'All the things' is unnatural; use 'all those things'. Grammar problem type ID:11

× Yes Sir, still like going to park now because it is my favorite activity and I visit park every morning for my morning walk to improve my health and also to doctor suggest me to go to park everyday for them for my morning walk and sometimes I visit evening also when I feeling uncomfortable at home and by moving to park.

✓ Yes, I still like going to the park because it is my favorite activity. I visit the park every morning for a walk to improve my health, and my doctor also suggested that I go to the park every day for my morning walk. Sometimes I go in the evening when I feel uncomfortable at home and want to move around in the park.

This sentence mixes tenses and has missing articles and incorrect verb forms. Use present simple 'I still like' and 'I visit' for habitual actions. Add 'the' before 'park'. 'Doctor suggest me' should be 'my doctor suggested that I' (reported speech) or 'my doctor also suggests I go' for present. 'Everyday' (adjective) vs 'every day' (adverb); use 'every day'. 'I visit evening' is incorrect — use 'I go in the evening'. 'When I feeling' requires auxiliary: 'when I feel'. Grammar problem type ID:6

× Yes, I like to see more parks in my city because there are a very few parks in my city and some uh old peoples are also really want to go to parks for enjoy and for their relaxation with their friends and for conversation with their aged peoples.

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because there are very few parks, and some elderly people really want to go to parks to enjoy themselves, relax with their friends, and socialize with other older people.

Use 'very few' without 'a' when referring to countable plural. 'Old peoples' is incorrect; use 'elderly people' or 'older people'. 'Really want' should match subject: 'really want to' becomes 'really want to go' or rephrased. 'For enjoy' should be 'to enjoy themselves'. 'Aged peoples' is ungrammatical; use 'other older people' or 'friends'. Grammar problem type ID:1

× But there are very few parts in my city, so I recommend the parts.

✓ But there are very few parks in my city, so I recommend creating more parks.

The speaker wrote 'parts' instead of 'parks' — likely a vocabulary error. Also 'recommend the parts' is unclear; suggest 'recommend creating more parks' or 'I recommend building more parks'. Ensure correct plural 'parks'. Grammar problem type ID:1

× Yes, there are many parks I want to go in my future but at the park which I really wanna go is the nearby parking Patika Pinch to city which is very big park and all my friends recommended me to go there because there are very very large swings on that park and really a very fresh grass and.

✓ Yes, there are many parks I want to visit in the future, but the park I really want to go to is the nearby Patika Park close to the city. It is a very big park and all my friends recommended that I go there because it has very large swings and fresh grass.

Multiple errors: use 'visit' or 'go to' with 'parks' and 'in the future' instead of 'in my future'. 'Wanna' is informal; use 'want to'. Add appropriate prepositions: 'go to', 'close to the city'. Use the definite/indefinite article: 'a very big park' and 'has very large swings'. 'Recommended me to go' should be 'recommended that I go' or 'recommended I go there'. Remove the trailing 'and' and correct 'fresh grass' phrasing. Grammar problem type ID:22}]}