Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you like going to parks as a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I liked going to parks as a child.

Giám khảo

Do you still like going to parks now?

Thí sinh

No, I don't no dislike going to parks.

Giám khảo

Would you like to see more parks in your city?

Thí sinh

Now this city is crowded.

Giám khảo

Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?

Thí sinh

No, I don't go to in the future.

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Part 1

Did you like going to parks as a child?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: Cevap doğrudan ve anlaşılır, ancak daha doğal ve zengin hale getirmek için bir konu cümlesiyle başlayıp ardından spesifik detay veya bir anı ekleyin. Ayrıca tek cümleyle yetinmek yerine bağlaçlarla kısa destekleyici cümleler ekleyin (ör. because, and, so).

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child because my family often had picnics there, and I enjoyed playing on the swings and exploring the playground.

Do you still like going to parks now?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: Cevapta dilbilgisi hataları ve karışıklık var; önce açık bir konu cümlesi kullanın (Yes/No + kısa neden). Ardından bir sebep ve örnek ekleyin. Olumsuzlukları düzgün kullandığınızdan emin olun ve gereksiz tekrarları kaldırın.

Ví dụ: Not really; I rarely go to parks now because my neighbourhood is busy and I prefer exercising at a gym, although I sometimes visit quiet parks at weekends.

Would you like to see more parks in your city?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: Cevap doğrudan soruya yanıt vermiyor. Önce soruya evet/hayır şeklinde cevap verin, sonra şehrin kalabalık oluşunu neden olarak gösterip detaylandırın ve bir öneri ekleyin. Bağlaçlar kullanarak cümleleri birleştirin.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to see more parks because the city is crowded now, and additional green spaces would improve air quality and provide places for people to relax.

Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?

Điểm: 35.0

Gợi ý: Cevap anlaşılmaz ve dilbilgisi hatalı. Soruyu açıkça yanıtlayın (Yes/No) ve gelecekte neden gitmeyi planlamadığınızı ya da gitmeyi planladığınız belirli bir parkı belirtin. Gelecek zaman ifadeleri (will/want to/plan to) kullanın ve bir neden veya alternatif ekleyin.

Ví dụ: I don't have a specific park in mind, but I might visit a nearby botanical garden next year because I enjoy seeing different plants and taking photos.

Ngữ pháp

Present tense issue

× No, I don't no dislike going to parks.

✓ No, I don't dislike going to parks.

The sentence has an extra negation 'no' making it ungrammatical. Use the simple present negative 'do not' (don't) + base verb for habits and general preferences. Suggestion: remove the extra 'no' so it reads 'I don't dislike going to parks.' This keeps present tense and meaning clear.

Present tense issue

× Now this city is crowded.

✓ Now the city is crowded.

Using 'this city' is acceptable in speech, but in response to 'Would you like to see more parks in your city?' it's more natural to refer to 'the city' when talking about your current city. Also ensure present simple 'is crowded' correctly describes current state. Suggestion: use 'the city' to refer to a specific place previously mentioned.

Future tense issue

× No, I don't go to in the future.

✓ No, I won't go to any parks in the future.

The original mixes present negative 'don't go' with 'in the future', which is inconsistent. For future intentions use 'will' (or 'won't') + base verb. Also add 'any parks' as the object. Suggestion: use 'I won't go to any parks in the future.' or 'I don't plan to go to parks in the future.'

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