Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be direct and grammatically correct with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words, and add one specific detail. Use correct tense and plural/singular forms.

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. My father usually took my brother and me to a nearby park every weekend, and my mother packed bento boxes for our picnic. We often played hide-and-seek and fed ducks by the pond.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence, remove repetition, correct word choice, and add a specific example of activities you do. Use linking words to organize points.

Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks. I like being outdoors because of the fresh air and sunshine; for example, I often jog there in the mornings and sometimes do stretching exercises with friends.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and clearly, correct repetitions and grammar, and explain reasons with a specific comparison to your hometown park using linking words.

Ví dụ: Not really, because I live in the city center where there are mostly buildings and only a few trees. I miss the parks in my hometown, which were larger and had ponds and playgrounds, so I would welcome more green spaces here.

Gợi ý: Give a concise topic sentence, avoid unclear phrases, correct grammar and word order, and give one specific reason why you want to visit the park. Use linking words to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit Central Park in New York in the future. I have heard it is very large and full of natural areas, and I would love to see the lakes and walking paths and relax away from the city's bustle.

× Yes, of course. Uh, my dad usually bring me and my brother to park and and my mom used to take some Bento for us.

✓ Yes, of course. Uh, my dad usually brings my brother and me to the park, and my mom used to bring some bento for us.

Subject-verb agreement error and article/preposition usage. 'Dad' is singular so the habitual verb needs third person singular 'brings' (Grammar problem type ID 27 and 2). Also use the object order 'my brother and me' and include the definite article 'the' before 'park' (Grammar problem type ID 11 and 22). 'Take' in this context describing preparation should be 'bring' or 'bring some bento' when referring to what she took for them; 'bento' is not a proper noun so lowercase is correct.

× Yeah, sure. The park is always brought road and many people in there and I really like nature by the way, the sun, sun is good and I can run in the park also I can, I can do activity.

✓ Yeah, sure. The parks are always busy and full of people, and I really like nature. By the way, I like the sun; it is pleasant, and I can run in the park and do activities.

Multiple errors: incorrect article and noun phrase ('the park is always brought road' is ungrammatical) and wrong verb choice. Use plural 'parks' or 'the park' with correct modifiers; 'busy and full of people' conveys intended meaning (Grammar problem types 22 and 26). 'Do activity' should be pluralized to 'do activities' (Grammar problem type 1). Sentence needed reorganization for clarity (Grammar problem type 26).

× Not actually because I'm living in the middle middle of the city so there is no nature, just buildings and few trees but not enough. So I really I really missed my hometown's park.

✓ Not really, because I live in the middle of the city, so there is little nature—just buildings and a few trees, which is not enough. So I really miss my hometown's park.

Tense and 'there is' usage: use 'I live' for a general present state (Grammar problem type 6). 'There is no nature' is awkward; 'there is little nature' is more natural (Grammar problem type 3). Use 'a few trees' (article/quantifier) instead of 'few trees' when indicating some but insufficient (Grammar problem type 14). Also use present 'miss' for current feeling (Grammar problem type 6).

× There is not many parks what I know so, but I know the Central Park in New York and I heard that there is that the park is real big and Willy Willy na natural really good nature has the really good nature. So someday I want to go Central Park.

✓ There are not many parks, as far as I know, but I know Central Park in New York. I heard that the park is really big and has great natural areas. So someday I want to go to Central Park.

Subject-verb agreement with 'there are' for plural 'parks' (Grammar problem type 27 and 3). 'What I know' should be 'as far as I know' (Grammar problem type 26). Remove duplicated and unclear words and use correct adjective order and noun phrases: 'really big' and 'has great natural areas' (Grammar problem types 13 and 18). Also include preposition 'to' after 'go' when naming a destination (Grammar problem type 11).