Parks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be careful with grammar and verb forms, avoid filler words, and make sentences more concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. For example, correct verb tenses (enjoyed/used to enjoy) and reduce hesitation sounds like “uh.”

Ví dụ: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. I used to go with my friends after school, where we often flew kites and sometimes played badminton together, which was very refreshing.

Gợi ý: Improve accuracy in collocations and verb forms (e.g., “after studying/working for a long time”, “go for a walk”), and avoid repetition. Use linking words like “so” or “therefore” to show result and keep response within 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks. After working or studying for a long time, I find a walk in the park very refreshing, so I try to go every evening to watch the sunset.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and politely, with correct grammar and clearer reasoning. Use linking words (however, instead) and specific examples to support your view. Avoid awkward vocabulary like “expense the lands” and use natural phrases: “use land for parks,” “install exercise equipment.”

Ví dụ: I don't think we need many more parks in the city. Instead, the authorities should improve existing parks by adding exercise equipment and better facilities, because that would benefit more residents without using extra land.

Gợi ý: Work on sentence structure, articles, and vocabulary precision. Begin with a clear statement, then give 1–2 specific reasons using linking words (for example, because, since). Avoid repetitions and incorrect phrases like “make a come true.”

Ví dụ: If I had the chance, I would love to go hiking in Hollywood Park. I dream of visiting because it has beautiful views and challenging trails, which I think would be exciting and memorable.

× I always enjoy going to the park with my friends after school.

✓ I always enjoyed going to the park with my friends after school.

The question asked about childhood ('Did you like going to parks as a child?'), so the response should use past tense to match the time frame. Change 'enjoy' (present) to 'enjoyed' (past simple). Use past tense consistently when referring to past habits (e.g., 'I always enjoyed').

× We always going to pass to playing the kite, sometimes just uh, playing the badminton with all of my friends.

✓ We always used to go fly kites, sometimes just playing badminton with all of my friends.

Multiple errors: missing auxiliary for continuous/past habitual ('used to' or 'would'), incorrect verb forms ('going to pass to playing' is ungrammatical), and wrong noun usage ('playing the kite' should be 'fly kites') and article omission ('playing badminton'). Use 'used to' or 'would' for past habitual actions and correct verb forms: 'go fly kites' or 'fly kites', 'play badminton'.

× It's quite a refreshment.

✓ It was quite refreshing.

Referring to a past experience, use past tense and an adjective that describes the experience: 'refreshing' rather than the noun 'refreshment'. So 'It was quite refreshing.' is both grammatically correct and natural.

× I always try to find some time to go to the park because it's refreshing after working study for a long time.

✓ I always try to find some time to go to the park because it's refreshing after working or studying for a long time.

The phrase 'working study' is incorrect—two verbs need coordination. Use 'working or studying' or 'work or study' to list activities. Also 'it's refreshing' is fine in present because the question asks about current habits. Ensure parallel structure when listing verbs.

× If I have a chance, I prefer to go to walk in the park every evening and watch sunset.

✓ If I have the chance, I prefer to go for a walk in the park every evening and watch the sunset.

Use 'go for a walk' (correct collocation) instead of 'go to walk'. Include the article 'the' for 'the chance' and 'the sunset'. Also 'watch sunset' needs 'the' before 'sunset'.

× No, in my opinions uh my city provide enough the path for everyone's.

✓ No, in my opinion my city provides enough paths for everyone.

Use singular 'opinion' after 'in my', not 'opinions'. Subject-verb agreement: 'my city provides' (adds 's'). Use plural 'paths' and 'everyone' (not 'everyone's'). Remove unnecessary article 'the' before 'path' and correct possessive misuse.

× I think it's not necessary to expense the lands to make a part, but they should provide more equipment to do exercise or other facility.

✓ I don't think it's necessary to use up land to make more parks, but they should provide more exercise equipment and other facilities.

'Expense the lands' is incorrect; use 'use up land' or 'use up the land'. 'Make a part' should be 'make more parks'. 'Do exercise' is better as 'exercise' or 'have exercise equipment'. 'Facility' should be plural 'facilities' when general. Also use negative 'I don't think' for natural phrasing.

× If I could have a chance I would like to go to hiking in Hollywood Park.

✓ If I had the chance, I would like to go hiking in Hollywood Park.

Use 'If I had the chance' (conditional past) rather than 'could have a chance'. Use the correct collocation 'go hiking' (not 'go to hiking').

× That's part is one of my dream and I want this to make a come true and it's beautiful view and it's must be very cool to do hiking in.

✓ That park is one of my dreams and I want to make this come true; it has beautiful views and it would be really great to go hiking there.

Many issues: 'That's part' should be 'That park'; 'one of my dream' should be 'one of my dreams' (plural). 'I want this to make a come true' should be 'I want to make this come true' or 'I want this to come true'. 'It's beautiful view' -> 'it has beautiful views'. 'It's must be very cool to do hiking in' -> 'it would be really great to go hiking there.' Use correct articles, plural nouns, and natural verb and modal constructions.